Tumhare hi rang ka paikar bana liya maine......mann

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Tumhare hi rang ka paikar bana liya maine.
Teri judayi ko mukddar bana liya maine.

Ki mujhko marne main dard tumko ho na kahin,
Khud apne hathon main khanzar bana liya main.

Ab meri ruh ko ye jishm raas aata nahin,
In hawaon ko apna ghar bana liya maine.

Ghar main rahkar ek pal ko chain hai paya nahin,
Ab apne mann ko beghar bana liya maine.

Ham bhi kya pate dar dar bhatakte rahkar,
Apne ghar ko hi  bedar bana liya maine.

Ashq tapkayenge to ab rubb bhi ruth jayega,
Khud ko bahlane ko ye darr bana liya maine.

Mann
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2012, 06:53:40 AM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on December 27, 2012, 03:42:48 AM
Tumhare hi rang ka paikar bana liya maine.
Teri judayi ko mukddar bana liya maine.

Ki mujhko marne main dard tumko ho na kahin,
Khud apne hathon main khanzar bana liya main.

Ab meri ruh ko ye jishm raas aata nahin,
In hawaon ko apna ghar bana liya maine.

Ghar main rahkar ek pal ko chain hai paya nahin,
Ab apne mann ko beghar bana liya maine.

Ham bhi kya pate dar dar bhatakte rahkar,
Apne ghar ko hi  bedar bana liya maine.

Ashq tapkayenge to ab rubb bhi ruth jayega,
Khud ko bahlane ko ye darr bana liya maine.

Mann


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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2012, 07:44:56 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Mann ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2012, 10:02:02 AM »
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Tumhare hi rang ka paikar bana liya maine.
Teri judayi ko mukddar bana liya maine.

Ki mujhko marne main dard tumko ho na kahin,
Khud apne hathon main khanzar bana liya main.

Ab meri ruh ko ye jishm raas aata nahin,
In hawaon ko apna ghar bana liya maine.

Ghar main rahkar ek pal ko chain hai paya nahin,
Ab apne mann ko beghar bana liya maine.

Ham bhi kya pate dar dar bhatakte rahkar,
Apne ghar ko hi  bedar bana liya maine.

Ashq tapkayenge to ab rubb bhi ruth jayega,
Khud ko bahlane ko ye darr bana liya maine.

Mann

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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 10:30:47 AM »
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Mann Jee Aadaab!



Bade hi umdaa andaaz e bayaaN meiN khoob kalaam kahi hai jee...
Behad gehre aur pur asar ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye haiN
aapne.... Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



Quote from: mann.mann on December 27, 2012, 03:42:48 AM
Tumhare hi rang ka paikar bana liya maine.
Teri judayi ko mukddar bana liya maine.

WaaH jee Kia umdaa aur gehra matla kaha hai daad...

Ki mujhko marne main dard tumko ho na kahin,
Khud apne hathon main khanzar bana liya main.

Bahut khoob jee daad...

Ab meri ruh ko ye jishm raas aata nahin,
In hawaon ko apna ghar bana liya maine.

Achcha khayaal hai daad...

Ghar main rahkar ek pal ko chain hai paya nahin,
Ab apne mann ko beghar bana liya maine.

Bahut khoob jee daad daad..

Ham bhi kya pate dar dar bhatakte rahkar,
Apne ghar ko hi  bedar bana liya maine.

MaiN bhi kia paata dar dar bhatak kar
apne ghar ko hi bedar bana liya maine...

Ulaa misre meiN hum use nahi hoNga ... gar aap personaly kah rahe haiN
dusre misre meiN maine isliye.. Usual Smile

Ashq tapkayenge to ab rubb bhi ruth jayega,
Khud ko bahlane ko ye darr bana liya maine.


WaaH waaH waaH behad khoob Sher kaha hai jee daad daad...

Mann

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