"TUMHARE LIYEA"

by pandit on April 22, 2009, 10:09:46 PM
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Sonu
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«Reply #30 on: May 08, 2009, 03:38:12 PM »
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 Pandit ji shukriya....
bahut khoob bahut acha javab dea hia apne...

woh yaaro ki mahfil wo muskurate pal.
Dil se juda haiapna bita hua kal.
kabhi zindgi gujarti thi hasne hassane mai.
Aaj waqt gujarta hai yado ke jharoko me or kaagaz ke note kammane mai…….

SONU JE...

HUMARA ZINDAGI JEENE KA ALAG HE ANDAAZ HAI,
UNKI YAADO ME KHOYE REHNA HE ZINDA-DILI SAMAJHTE HAI.

.....PANDIT............
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Sonu
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«Reply #31 on: May 08, 2009, 03:38:44 PM »
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shukriya pooja ji...

NICE WORK SONU AND PANDIT JI!!!!
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«Reply #32 on: May 09, 2009, 02:42:02 AM »
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Pandit ji shukriya....
bahut khoob bahut acha javab dea hia apne...

woh yaaro ki mahfil wo muskurate pal.
Dil se juda haiapna bita hua kal.
kabhi zindgi gujarti thi hasne hassane mai.
Aaj waqt gujarta hai yado ke jharoko me or kaagaz ke note kammane mai…….


Bahut accha likha hai aapne sonu dear.  Usual Smile
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Sonu
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«Reply #33 on: May 09, 2009, 04:33:10 AM »
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shukriya Roja ji...

Bahut accha likha hai aapne sonu dear.  Usual Smile
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Sonu
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«Reply #34 on: May 09, 2009, 04:36:36 AM »
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Ek baar TAMANNA ne jindgi ke aanchal main apna sir rakhkar kaha ki “Main poori kab houngi” to jindgi ne hanskar jawab diya
“Jo poori ho jaaye woh TAMANNA hi kya”
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«Reply #35 on: May 09, 2009, 09:47:37 PM »
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Ek baar TAMANNA ne jindgi ke aanchal main apna sir rakhkar kaha ki “Main poori kab houngi” to jindgi ne hanskar jawab diya
“Jo poori ho jaaye woh TAMANNA hi kya”
   

wow..
kya lines hain..
bahut khoob........
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Sonu
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«Reply #36 on: May 10, 2009, 06:55:15 AM »
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shukriya pandit ji...

  

wow..
kya lines hain..
bahut khoob........
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #37 on: May 10, 2009, 07:34:15 AM »
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VERY VERY NICE PANDIT JI AND SONU JI.
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pandit
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«Reply #38 on: May 12, 2009, 12:44:36 AM »
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Waah bahot khoob Pandit ji..nicely written Applause Applause

thanks kaash....
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pandit
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«Reply #39 on: May 12, 2009, 12:44:56 AM »
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shukriya pandit ji...


u welcome sonu...
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pandit
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«Reply #40 on: May 12, 2009, 12:50:48 AM »
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Q AAJ BHI HAI TERA INTEZAAR,Q RAAH DEKHTA HOON BAAR-BAAR,
MAUT BHI NAHI AATI AB TO,SHAYAD USE BHI HAI TERA INTEZAAR.

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Sonu
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«Reply #41 on: May 13, 2009, 03:37:08 AM »
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madhu ji shukriya...

VERY VERY NICE PANDIT JI AND SONU JI.
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Sonu
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«Reply #42 on: May 13, 2009, 03:37:56 AM »
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bahut khoob sanju har bar ki thra javab nahi hai apka Usual Smile

Q AAJ BHI HAI TERA INTEZAAR,Q RAAH DEKHTA HOON BAAR-BAAR,
MAUT BHI NAHI AATI AB TO,SHAYAD USE BHI HAI TERA INTEZAAR.


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Sonu
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«Reply #43 on: May 13, 2009, 03:39:12 AM »
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Kaisi Ye Mohabbat Ki Shuruwat Hui Hai,
Khud Mujhse Juda Aaj Meri Zaat Hui Hai,

Jata Hai Usi Simt Meri Soch Ka Dhara,
Jis Shakhs Ke Hathon Se Mujhe Maat Hui Hai,

Phoolon Ki Mohabbat Ne Mujhe Din Ye Dikhaye,
Kaanton Ki Chubhan Shamil-E-Halat Hui Hai…
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«Reply #44 on: May 13, 2009, 03:51:52 AM »
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Good going Sonu and Pandit ji  Usual Smile
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