tumko mujhse

by saahill on January 22, 2013, 08:51:29 AM
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meri chahat hi tumko mujhse
                dhoor le ja rahi hai ,,,,

yeh kaisi uljhan hai jo
                mujhe uljha rahi hai ,,,,

tujhe dekh kar hi jeeta
                hoon main pyar mere ,,,

kyun tum mujhse phir
                itna dhoor ja rahi ha
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2013, 09:27:15 AM »
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this is very nice.. but last two lines i dont know why mujhe utni thik nahi lagi is poetry ke according..

i am sorry agar maine kuch galat kaha ho ya apko hurt kiya ho toh.. main sirf keh rahi hun yeh koi suggestion ya advice nahi hai..
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 10:47:44 AM »
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saahil jee aadaab, koshish acchi lagi, par last two lines samajh mein nahin aayin, kuch alag lagi rachna se.....
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 12:48:05 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2013, 01:15:23 PM »
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thx lovely ji are bura man ne wali bat kyun apko kuch nai acha laga to yeh achi bat hai likhne wale ko batana chahiye . Muje khushi hai apne meri rachna ko kareeb se parha
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2013, 02:24:11 PM »
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v.nice
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2013, 04:07:23 PM »
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Mr.Sahil,
 Very Very Nice..........................
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2013, 10:23:05 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2013, 08:48:36 AM »
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thx aru ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2013, 08:49:03 AM »
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thx anmol ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2013, 08:15:35 AM »
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THX SAINI SIR
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2013, 11:32:18 AM »
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thx suman ji
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thx aqsh ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2013, 11:33:03 AM »
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thx syad sahab
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