tumsa sa humsafar paya hoga............

by SURESH SANGWAN on January 21, 2012, 09:34:50 AM
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Unchi neechi rehgujar mein usko maza aaya hoga.
Jisne rehmat-e-khuda se, tum sa humsafar paya hoga..

Yun hi dil ka phool khil jata hai usko dekhkar.
bahaaron ke aane ki adaa se vo aaya hoga..

Tum juda ho kuch iss matlabi jahan se.
Tumhen bhi usne kisi matlab se banaya hoga..

Seekha hai dil jeetne ka hunar jis kisi ne .
Vo naam har shakhs ki zabaan par aaya hoga..

Vo har  baat  jo  mujhko  hila  deti hai.
Teri hi  kisi  baat  ka  saaya  hoga..

Na khar kha na jala kar,kisi ki khushiyon se.
Jisne khoya bahut hai ussi ne kuchh paya hoga..

Kisi na kisi nashe mein choor hai tamaam kainaat.
Nasha hi uupar wale ne Insaan se pehle banaya hoga..

sanjeeda ho jaate hain jo zara si baat par.
ussi ne geet mohabbat ka gaya hoga..

zaruratmandon ki madaad ko jo aaya hai aage.
Vahi har gareeb ki duaon mein aaya hoga..
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2012, 09:39:26 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 21, 2012, 09:34:50 AM
Unchi neechi rehgujar mein usko maza aaya hoga.
Jisne rehmat-e-khuda se, tum sa humsafar paya hoga..

Yun hi dil ka phool khil jata hai usko dekhkar.
bahaaron ke aane ki adaa se vo aaya hoga..

Tum juda ho kuch iss matlabi jahan se.
Tumhen bhi usne kisi matlab se banaya hoga..

Seekha hai dil jeetne ka hunar jis kisi ne .
Vo naam har shakhs ki zabaan par aaya hoga..

Vo har  baat  jo  mujhko  hila  deti hai.
Teri hi  kisi  baat  ka  saaya  hoga..

Na khar kha na jala kar,kisi ki khushiyon se.
Jisne khoya bahut hau ussi ne kuchh paya hoga..

Kisi na kisi nashe mein choor hai tamaam kainaat.
Nasha hi uupar wale ne Insaan se pehle banaya hoga..

sanjeeda ho jaate hain jo zara si baat par.
ussi ne geet mohabbat ka gaya hoga..

zaruratmandon ki madaad ko jo aaya hai aage.
Vahi har gareeb ki duaon mein aaya hoga..


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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2012, 09:44:20 AM »
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shukriya adil ji.
aap please comments karte rahen.
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2012, 04:53:32 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Suresh Sir
Kya baat hai, khoobsurat agaaj Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2012, 05:52:44 PM »
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wah Suresh ji--
bht umda ghazal kahi aapne--
har aashar ek kahani kahta hai

daad kubul karen
muskurate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2012, 06:12:48 AM »
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Suresh jee badee hee haseen soch kaa muzaahirah karti aap kaa ye kalaam hume behad pasand aayaa.......dheroN daaad kubool farmaayeN......
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2012, 06:22:23 AM »
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Nice poetry Suresh ji. Pahle ke muqable mein kafi improvement nazar aa raha hai. Mazeed behtar ki koshish jaari rakhiye.
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2012, 06:37:50 AM »
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wah sangwan sahab boht umda farmaya apne
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2012, 09:54:37 AM »
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bahut 2 shukriya mamta ji.
aapke coments ka humen khas intezaar tha.
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Suresh jee badee hee haseen soch kaa muzaahirah karti aap kaa ye kalaam hume behad pasand aayaa.......dheroN daaad kubool farmaayeN......
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wah sangwan sahab boht umda farmaya apne
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bahut sara shukriya mkv ji.
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bahut 2 shukriya sarfira ji.
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wah Suresh ji--
bht umda ghazal kahi aapne--
har aashar ek kahani kahta hai

daad kubul karen
muskurate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2012, 09:59:08 AM »
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bahut 2 shukriya riyaz ji aur aapne bilkul theek farmaya.
ab flow of words kafi achha ho gaya hai.
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apni rai bhejte rahiiye.
humen achha lagta hai,
Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on January 22, 2012, 06:22:23 AM
Nice poetry Suresh ji. Pahle ke muqable mein kafi improvement nazar aa raha hai. Mazeed behtar ki koshish jaari rakhiye.
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2012, 03:32:22 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 21, 2012, 09:34:50 AM
Unchi neechi rehgujar mein usko maza aaya hoga.
Jisne rehmat-e-khuda se, tum sa humsafar paya hoga..

Yun hi dil ka phool khil jata hai usko dekhkar.
bahaaron ke aane ki adaa se vo aaya hoga..

Tum juda ho kuch iss matlabi jahan se.
Tumhen bhi usne kisi matlab se banaya hoga..

Seekha hai dil jeetne ka hunar jis kisi ne .
Vo naam har shakhs ki zabaan par aaya hoga..

Vo har  baat  jo  mujhko  hila  deti hai.
Teri hi  kisi  baat  ka  saaya  hoga..

Na khar kha na jala kar,kisi ki khushiyon se.
Jisne khoya bahut hai ussi ne kuchh paya hoga..

Kisi na kisi nashe mein choor hai tamaam kainaat.
Nasha hi uupar wale ne Insaan se pehle banaya hoga..

sanjeeda ho jaate hain jo zara si baat par.
ussi ne geet mohabbat ka gaya hoga..

zaruratmandon ki madaad ko jo aaya hai aage.
Vahi har gareeb ki duaon mein aaya hoga..



Bahut khoobsurat peshkash Suresh ji.
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bahut bahut khoob suresh ji
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