TUM...............................................................SAINI

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Mere khaaboN ko tod denaa tum.
Meree yaadoN ko chhod denaa tum.

Meree aaheN agar sunaai deN.
Rukh hawaaoN ke mod denaa tum.

Pyaar karnaa gunaah hai phir to.
Mere khaate meN jod denaa tum.

Jo tumhaaree taraf uthe unglee.
Meree baaheN marod denaa tum.

Teree aaghosh meN n so jaaooN.
Mujhko kaskar jhinjhod denaa tum.

Mere ashkoN ke daagh shaayad hoN.
Dho ke daaman nichod denaa tum.

Kisse kaisaa salook karnaa hai.
Ye to ‘saini’ pe chhod denaa tum.

Dr.Surendra Saini


मेरे ख़ाबों को तोड़ देना तुम ।
मेरी यादों को छोड़ देना तुम ॥

मेरी आहें अगर सुनाई दें ।
रुख़ हवाओं के मोड़ देना तुम ॥

प्यार करना गुनाह है तो फिर ।
मेरे खाते में जोड़ देना तुम ॥

जो तुम्हारी तरफ़ उठे उंगली ।
मेरी बाहें मरोड़ देना तुम ॥

तेरी आग़ोश में न सो जाऊं ।
मुझको कस कर झिंझोड़ देना तुम ॥

मेरे अश्कों के दाग़ शायद हों ।
धो के दामन निचोड़ देना तुम ॥

किससे  कैसा सलूक करना है ।
ये तो 'सैनी' पे छोड़ देना तुम ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2013, 01:49:41 PM »
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wah wah wah saini sir wah behad umda khubsurat poetry...hazaron daad o mubarabaad sir...
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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2013, 01:56:58 PM »
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Wah badi dilchasp aur khoobsurat ghazal kahi Saini sahab .... Dheron daad!
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2013, 02:05:02 PM »
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Pyaar karnaa gunaah hai phir to.
Mere khaate meN jod denaa tum.

Jo tumhaaree taraf uthe unglee.
Meree baaheN marod denaa tum.
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2013, 02:24:08 PM »
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Mere ashkoN ke daagh shaayad hoN.
Dho ke daaman nichod denaa tum.

WAAH WAAH DR,SAHAB BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI.
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मेरी आहें अगर सुनाई दें ।
रुख़ हवाओं के मोड़ देना तुम ॥

bahut bahut umda Sir
inhi qaafiyon ke saath ek adhoori ghazal padee hai..poori hone par shayad post karun
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«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2013, 02:35:20 PM »
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bahut khoob, dhero daad
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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2013, 02:40:32 PM »
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Umda kalaam likha hai aapne,daad!
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Waah waah waah sirjee..behad umda ghazal kahi..

maza aa gaya padh kar..

dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2013, 02:46:17 PM »
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Waah Waah Aur Waah

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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2013, 03:59:53 PM »
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Mere khaaboN ko tod denaa tum.
Meree yaadoN ko chhod denaa tum.

Meree aaheN agar sunaai deN.
Rukh hawaaoN ke mod denaa tum.

Pyaar karnaa gunaah hai phir to.
Mere khaate meN jod denaa tum.

Jo tumhaaree taraf uthe unglee.
Meree baaheN marod denaa tum.

Teree aaghosh meN n so jaaooN.
Mujhko kaskar jhinjhod denaa tum.

Mere ashkoN ke daagh shaayad hoN.
Dho ke daaman nichod denaa tum.

Kisse kaisaa salook karnaa hai.
Ye to ‘saini’ pe chhod denaa tum.

Dr.Surendra Saini


मेरे ख़ाबों को तोड़ देना तुम ।
मेरी यादों को छोड़ देना तुम ॥

मेरी आहें अगर सुनाई दें ।
रुख़ हवाओं के मोड़ देना तुम ॥

प्यार करना गुनाह है तो फिर ।
मेरे खाते में जोड़ देना तुम ॥

जो तुम्हारी तरफ़ उठे उंगली ।
मेरी बाहें मरोड़ देना तुम ॥

तेरी आग़ोश में न सो जाऊं ।
मुझको कास कर झिंझोड़ देना तुम ॥

मेरे अश्कों के दाग़ शायद हों ।
धो के दामन निचोड़ देना तुम ॥

किससे  कैसा सलूक करना है ।
ये तो 'सैनी' पे छोड़ देना तुम ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

waah waah our bas waah sir ji :)bohat hi khubsurat alfaz jazbat o ihsaasat,.....dil se daad aik rau ke sath:)
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2013, 05:20:24 PM »
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Waah , bahut khoob Saini saheb

मेरी आहें अगर सुनाई दें ।
रुख़ हवाओं के मोड़ देना तुम ॥

मेरे अश्कों के दाग़ शायद हों ।
धो के दामन निचोड़ देना तुम ॥
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2013, 06:19:37 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Saini ji, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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