UDAAN...........(ambu)

by ambalika sharma on August 18, 2014, 04:59:28 PM

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«Reply #15 on: August 19, 2014, 09:20:44 AM »

bahut khub ambuji


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Re: UDAAN...........(ambu)

«Reply #16 on: August 19, 2014, 09:21:00 AM »

Quote from: ambalika sharma on August 18, 2014, 04:59:28 PM

UDAAN

Khaabon ko ek udan chahiye,
Har parinde ko aasman chahiye,

Har dil ki hasrat hai aazadi,
Hai hosle ko mukaam chahiye.

Mat roko in badte kadmo ko,
Mat thamo ubalte jazbon ko,
Har koshish ko jubaan chahiye.

Kb tk bandhe rakhoge,
Har hasrat ko ek parvaan chahiye.

Bulandiyan mil jati hai aksar,
Ek chota sa paidan chahiye.

Har koi hasil kr sakta hai kamyabi,
Bs iradon me jaan chahiye....

Ambika ji Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai.


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Re: UDAAN...........(ambu)

«Reply #17 on: August 19, 2014, 12:17:20 PM »

Quote from: nandbahu on August 19, 2014, 08:50:04 AM

bahut khoob

shukriy nand ji


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Re: UDAAN...........(ambu)

«Reply #18 on: August 19, 2014, 12:19:17 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 19, 2014, 09:05:37 AM

Ambu Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob bade hi khoobsurat khayaaloN ko khoob lafz diye haiN aapne...

Kafi umdaa khayaal rahe ... Hume yeH quoted sher behad khoob lage... In khoob sher par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji....mujhe khushi hui apko meri likhi baatein pasand aayi.


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Re: UDAAN...........(ambu)

«Reply #19 on: August 19, 2014, 12:20:06 PM »

Quote from: mann.mann on August 19, 2014, 09:20:44 AM

bahut khub ambuji

bahut bahut shukriya apka


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«Reply #20 on: August 19, 2014, 12:21:18 PM »

Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on August 19, 2014, 09:21:00 AM

Ambika ji Bahut Khubsurat Likha Hai.

thank u sir for your appreciation.....glad u liked my writing


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Re: UDAAN...........(ambu)

«Reply #21 on: August 19, 2014, 03:31:53 PM »

Quote from: ambalika sharma on August 18, 2014, 04:59:28 PM

UDAAN

Khaabon ko ek udan chahiye,
Har parinde ko aasman chahiye,

Har dil ki hasrat hai aazadi,
Hai hosle ko mukaam chahiye.

Mat roko in badte kadmo ko,
Mat thamo ubalte jazbon ko,
Har koshish ko jubaan chahiye.

Kb tk bandhe rakhoge,
Har hasrat ko ek parvaan chahiye.

Bulandiyan mil jati hai aksar,
Ek chota sa paidan chahiye.

Har koi hasil kr sakta hai kamyabi,
Bs iradon me jaan chahiye....

bahot khoob


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«Reply #22 on: August 19, 2014, 04:50:15 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on August 19, 2014, 03:31:53 PM

bahot khoob

shukriya


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Re: UDAAN...........(ambu)

«Reply #23 on: August 20, 2014, 06:28:13 PM »

beautiful.....!!!


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«Reply #24 on: August 20, 2014, 06:29:34 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 20, 2014, 06:28:13 PM

beautiful.....!!!

thank u


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