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जिस्म   भी    उदास  है
जान  भी     उदास   है

सब    कुछ     है   मगर
कुछ    नहीं     पास   है

जीत    भी     है   मगर
हार    सा    एहसास  है

डूब के   भी देख  लिया
बुझती  नहीं   प्यास  है

ज़िन्दगी नहीं  ज़िन्दगी
जब  वो  नहीं    पास है

*****ह्रदय*****



jism    bhi    udaas  hai
jaan    bhi    udaas  hai

sab   kuch   hai  magar
kuch   nahi   paas   hai

jeet    bhi    hai  magar
haar  saa   ehsaas  hai

doobke bhi dekh liyaa
bujhti  nahi  pyaas hai

zindagi   nahi  zindagi
jab woh nahi pass hai

*****HRIDAY*****

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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2013, 11:10:03 PM »
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bahut khub,achhi naazuk si poem hai
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2013, 11:36:01 PM »
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जिस्म   भी    उदास  है
जान  भी     उदास   है

सब    कुछ     है   मगर
कुछ    नहीं     पास   है

जीत    भी     है   मगर
हार    सा    एहसास  है

डूब के   भी देख  लिया
बुझती  नहीं   प्यास  है

ज़िन्दगी नहीं  ज़िन्दगी
जब  वो  नहीं    पास है

*****ह्रदय*****



jism    bhi    udaas  hai
jaan    bhi    udaas  hai

sab   kuch   hai  magar
kuch   nahi   paas   hai

jeet    bhi    hai  magar
haar  saa   ehsaas  hai

doobke bhi dekh liyaa
bujhti  nahi  pyaas hai

zindagi   nahi  zindagi
jab woh nahi pass hai

*****HRIDAY*****


gr8,sir
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2013, 11:38:11 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2013, 12:34:01 AM »
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Nice
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2013, 12:54:52 AM »
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nice hridhay ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2013, 01:08:41 AM »
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Hriday jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab waqai hriday se nikle ashaar haiN.. behad khoob
ahsaas O khayaal aur achchi adaaygi rahi.. Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rhaiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2013, 02:13:05 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2013, 02:17:11 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil jee.
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2013, 03:44:11 AM »
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Buht Khoob HARIDAY g aap nay tu hamain qail ker liya,,,


mukhtasir lekin buht Bari baat kahi janab kya baat hai Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2013, 01:58:01 PM »
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Wah.wah,wah Hridayji,Bahut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne.Aapko didli mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2013, 02:08:19 PM »
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waaaaaaaaah! simple and sooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet. padhne mein utni hi wazandaar. dheron daad...
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2013, 04:30:44 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Hasan ji......!!!

bahut khub,achhi naazuk si poem hai
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«Reply #13 on: March 25, 2013, 10:30:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa M_B ji......!!!

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«Reply #14 on: March 28, 2013, 12:05:34 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Ravi ji.....!!!

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