-----/// Udaas ///----- Hriday

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«Reply #15 on: June 10, 2013, 12:41:04 PM »
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thanks a lot Saxena ji....!!!

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«Reply #16 on: June 10, 2013, 12:44:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saahill ji....!!!

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nice hridhay ji
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«Reply #17 on: June 10, 2013, 12:45:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji.....!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 20, 2013, 01:08:41 AM
Hriday jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab waqai hriday se nikle ashaar haiN.. behad khoob
ahsaas O khayaal aur achchi adaaygi rahi.. Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rhaiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: June 10, 2013, 12:46:08 PM »
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thanks a lot Shireen ji....!!!

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«Reply #19 on: June 10, 2013, 12:46:57 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Iftakhar ji.....!!!

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Bahut khoob Kapil jee.
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«Reply #20 on: June 10, 2013, 12:47:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Farhan ji.....!!!

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Buht Khoob HARIDAY g aap nay tu hamain qail ker liya,,,


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«Reply #21 on: June 10, 2013, 12:48:50 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Sudhir ji.....!!!

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Wah.wah,wah Hridayji,Bahut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne.Aapko didli mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #22 on: June 10, 2013, 12:50:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji.....!!!

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waaaaaaaaah! simple and sooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet. padhne mein utni hi wazandaar. dheron daad...
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«Reply #23 on: June 10, 2013, 12:56:39 PM »
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जिस्म   भी    उदास  है
जान  भी     उदास   है

सब    कुछ     है   मगर
कुछ    नहीं     पास   है

जीत    भी     है   मगर
हार    सा    एहसास  है

डूब के   भी देख  लिया
बुझती  नहीं   प्यास  है

ज़िन्दगी नहीं  ज़िन्दगी
जब  वो  नहीं    पास है

*****ह्रदय*****



jism    bhi    udaas  hai
jaan    bhi    udaas  hai

sab   kuch   hai  magar
kuch   nahi   paas   hai

jeet    bhi    hai  magar
haar  saa   ehsaas  hai

doobke bhi dekh liyaa
bujhti  nahi  pyaas hai

zindagi   nahi  zindagi
jab woh nahi pass hai

*****HRIDAY*****



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«Reply #24 on: June 11, 2013, 01:23:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Qalb ji.....!!!

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«Reply #25 on: June 13, 2013, 02:10:37 PM »
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जिस्म   भी    उदास  है
जान  भी     उदास   है

सब    कुछ     है   मगर
कुछ    नहीं     पास   है

जीत    भी     है   मगर
हार    सा    एहसास  है

डूब के   भी देख  लिया
बुझती  नहीं   प्यास  है

ज़िन्दगी नहीं  ज़िन्दगी
जब  वो  नहीं    पास है

*****ह्रदय*****



jism    bhi    udaas  hai
jaan    bhi    udaas  hai

sab   kuch   hai  magar
kuch   nahi   paas   hai

jeet    bhi    hai  magar
haar  saa   ehsaas  hai

doobke bhi dekh liyaa
bujhti  nahi  pyaas hai

zindagi   nahi  zindagi
jab woh nahi pass hai

*****HRIDAY*****


Simply very beautiful dear!!!
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«Reply #26 on: June 13, 2013, 09:26:10 PM »
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ye mujhse kaise chhut gai kp.......... mastttttttttttt likha hai re... chhoti si poem aur bht naazuk se ehsaas hain iske..... dil ko chhu gai....
some lines for u dear.... missing u here on yo....

jab se gaya tu
suni hai mehfil
hai sab yahan par
lagta nahi dil
kahan ho tum yaara
laut kar aajao
iss sooni padi mehfil ko
fir se tum saja do....
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«Reply #27 on: June 14, 2013, 09:46:36 PM »
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thank u sooo much Pooja ji....!!!

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Simply very beautiful dear!!!
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«Reply #28 on: June 14, 2013, 09:50:45 PM »
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Thank u soooooo much ji.... bas thodaa kuch uljha huwaa hoon apni hi duniyaa mein.. aajkal time nahi nikaal paa rahaa hoon.. jaldi hi lautungaa... aajkal flow bhi kam ban rahaa hai.. aur Hriday apni Kasak ko chhodke kahaan jaa saktaa hai.. hai na ....!!!

main aaungaa meraa intezaar karnaa
hai vaadaa tumse, tum aetbaar karnaa

chaahe bhulaa de yeh duniyaa tumhe par
naa bhulunga kabhi main tumhe pyaar karnaa...!!!



Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 13, 2013, 09:26:10 PM
ye mujhse kaise chhut gai kp.......... mastttttttttttt likha hai re... chhoti si poem aur bht naazuk se ehsaas hain iske..... dil ko chhu gai....
some lines for u dear.... missing u here on yo....

jab se gaya tu
suni hai mehfil
hai sab yahan par
lagta nahi dil
kahan ho tum yaara
laut kar aajao
iss sooni padi mehfil ko
fir se tum saja do....
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«Reply #29 on: June 14, 2013, 09:55:58 PM »
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aap aaye ye hi bahot hai kp  happy3 happy3 happy3.... apni masrufiyat se kuch waqt nikala thnxxxx alot dear.... notworthy notworthy notworthy

tere liye hi to jalti rahi hun
shama banke aksar pighalti rahi hun

tu aayega wapas janti hun main ye
isiliye to intezaar karti rai hun...
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