Udaas ku ho? (by vb)

by vb on June 15, 2012, 07:47:08 AM
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Hamen bhula kar
Hamen rula kar
Maanind-e-tasveer-e-yaas ku ho?
Udaas ku ho?

Hamari duniya men ake tum thi
Tumhaari duniya thi saarhi duniya
Tumhaari duniya ki ik khushi ne
Ujaar di thi hamaari duniya

Tumhaari yaadon ka zeher dil men
Utaar len gay, hamaara kya hay?
Ye chaar din ka udaas jeevan
Guzaar len gay, hamaraa kya hay?

Hamen bhulaana tumhaari zid thi
Ab is tarah say bay-aas mat ho
Tumhen qasam hay hamary sar ki
Hamen bhula kar udaas mat ho

Hamen bhula kar
Hamen rula kar
Maanind-e-tasveer-e-yaas ku ho?
Udaas ku ho?
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2012, 02:38:53 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2012, 06:43:47 PM »
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Quote from: vb on June 15, 2012, 07:47:08 AM


Hamen bhula kar
Hamen rula kar
Maanind-e-tasveer-e-yaas ku ho?
Udaas ku ho?

Hamari duniya men ake tum thi
Tumhaari duniya thi saarhi duniya
Tumhaari duniya ki ik khushi ne
Ujaar di thi hamaari duniya

Tumhaari yaadon ka zeher dil men
Utaar len gay, hamaara kya hay?
Ye chaar din ka udaas jeevan
Guzaar len gay, hamaraa kya hay?

Hamen bhulaana tumhaari zid thi
Ab is tarah say bay-aas mat ho
Tumhen qasam hay hamary sar ki
Hamen bhula kar udaas mat ho

Hamen bhula kar
Hamen rula kar
Maanind-e-tasveer-e-yaas ku ho?
Udaas ku ho?
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2012, 07:31:48 PM »
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waaah sirji
ehsaas kamaal k hain
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2012, 05:42:37 AM »
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VB ji....... hello hello hello Applause Applause Applause Applause


Ajeeb  uljhan me aaj  dil hai
Tumhe bhulakar udaas kyun hun
Tujhe na chahna ye zid thi meri
tujhe ganwakar udaas kyun hun

ajeeb tewar dekhe hain tere
bahot thokar  hai tune khaai
magar aaj jab tera sath  chhuta
main  yun bad hawaas kyun hun
Ajeeb  uljhan me  aaj  dil hai
Tumhe bhulakar udaas kyun hun
   

tujhe hi samjha tujhe hi jana
tujhe hi dil ne hai apna mana
yakin hai mujhko na ishq tumse
fir aaj main yun beaas kyun hun
Tujhe na chahna ye zid thi meri
tujhe ganwakar udaas kyun hun
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2012, 05:51:53 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 18, 2012, 05:42:37 AM
VB ji....... hello hello hello Applause Applause Applause Applause


Ajeeb  uljhan me aaj  dil hai
Tumhe bhulakar udaas kyun hun
Tujhe na chahna ye zid thi meri
tujhe ganwakar udaas kyun hun

ajeeb tewar dekhe hain tere
bahot thokar  hai tune khaai
magar aaj jab tera sath  chhuta
main  yun bad hawaas kyun hun
Ajeeb  uljhan me  aaj  dil hai
Tumhe bhulakar udaas kyun hun
   

tujhe hi samjha tujhe hi jana
tujhe hi dil ne hai apna mana
yakin hai mujhko na ishq tumse
fir aaj main yun beaas kyun hun
Tujhe na chahna ye zid thi meri
tujhe ganwakar udaas kyun hun



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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2012, 05:53:04 AM »
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Quote from: vb on June 15, 2012, 07:47:08 AM


Hamen bhula kar
Hamen rula kar
Maanind-e-tasveer-e-yaas ku ho?
Udaas ku ho?

Hamari duniya men ake tum thi
Tumhaari duniya thi saarhi duniya
Tumhaari duniya ki ik khushi ne
Ujaar di thi hamaari duniya

Tumhaari yaadon ka zeher dil men
Utaar len gay, hamaara kya hay?
Ye chaar din ka udaas jeevan
Guzaar len gay, hamaraa kya hay?

Hamen bhulaana tumhaari zid thi
Ab is tarah say bay-aas mat ho
Tumhen qasam hay hamary sar ki
Hamen bhula kar udaas mat ho

Hamen bhula kar
Hamen rula kar
Maanind-e-tasveer-e-yaas ku ho?
Udaas ku ho?
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