::Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de:: -Panna 5:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #60 on: March 04, 2006, 05:11:37 PM »

Thanx sonu ji n Talat.Very nice sonu,and Talat,bohat khoob.
PK u too have written a good one :lol: ,haan tumhari bday pe beer hi bhej deti hun Puzzled !

,Amity ka address de zara Winking

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"Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de,
shabdon ki kami aaj tu padne na de,
bohat kuch dabaa rakha hai tune is dil me,
aaj wo pyaar k raaz ujaagar tu kar de."


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«Reply #61 on: March 04, 2006, 05:42:40 PM »

wonderful Talat...........Sonu,.............Nidhi....sabhi logon ne bahot accha likha......

Udaas mann mere too udaas rahta hai
harsrat dilon mein chupaye kyon chup rahhta hai
jo aaye tere labon pe sab kuch woh kah de
kyon bheegi palkon ko barish ka naam deta hai.....


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«Reply #62 on: March 04, 2006, 05:51:01 PM »

Thanx waheed aur tumne bhi bohat khoob likha.

"Udaas mann mera na jaane kya kya kehta hai,
ye dekh nahi pata,dil mera jo jo sehta hai,
chahta hai bohat kuch batana kisi ko yeh,
par dil ke kehne pe har baar chup hi reh jaata hai."


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #63 on: March 04, 2006, 06:00:14 PM »

Thanxxxx Nidhi......... tumne bhi bahot accha likha.... nice again Nidhi......

Udaas mann mere kyon itna khamosh rahta hai
jhuki hue nigahon mein raj chupaye rahta hai
hai jo tere dil mein jo bhi tamanna aaj too kah de
kyon aahen bhar ker khud ko udaas karta hai....


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waheed_rose2004

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Sonu

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«Reply #65 on: March 05, 2006, 05:40:22 AM »

pk ji... nidhi... talat... waheed... sabbney bahut hi acha likha hai every good everybody....

mizaaz aapka har hadd taq pasand thaa
humey teri har adaa par nazam thaa
jubaan par tera kahna pyar se
teri aankhoon main meri baatoon ka jo asar thaa


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«Reply #66 on: March 06, 2006, 09:57:10 AM »

gr8 all..aaj sachi muchi im very much upset

issliye ye topic pe likh ka yaad aagaya

Udas maan mera kuch likh de
Ye laptop ko koi plz ON kar de
ya toh phir jaldi theek ho jaye mere laptop
koi aachi khaasi dua de de sad5

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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #67 on: March 06, 2006, 02:23:37 PM »

very nice Sonu Mom.........Salma......tumne bhi accha likha......

Udaas mann mere kyon aisi baatein karta hai
tujhe har khusi mili phir bhi kyon udaas rahta hai
ho jaayegi tumahari har ek tamanna poori
mere paas rahkar bhi kyon juda juda sa rahta hai......


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Talat

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«Reply #68 on: March 06, 2006, 03:00:54 PM »

Thanks Nidhi..Waheed...Sonu....bohot achcha likha hai sab ne..... Usual Smile


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Sonu

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«Reply #69 on: March 07, 2006, 04:08:28 AM »

thanks waheed.... wonderful....

u r welcome talat ji... app bahut acha likhti hia


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #70 on: March 10, 2006, 06:03:11 PM »

Thanxxxxx Talat........ Sonu mom........ ur welcome :lol:

Udaas mann mere aaj koi aisa geet suna de
jo ashk aankhon mein hai usse dariya bana de
hai kyon itna ghum chupa tere is dil mein
apne lafzon ek baar mujhe rula de.........


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Sonu

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«Reply #71 on: March 12, 2006, 06:19:41 AM »

u r welcome muna... bahut khoob....

ajj keya gaow mey sab geet khaye khu gaye
dil key etney tukdey huye key sab kuch bhul gaye
ajj ju chupey they gum dil me vo ahkhu sey nir ben key bhey gaye
humarey lafzo ko pero ker logoo ney afsane bena daley
likh ker un lafzo ko ganey bena daley.

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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #72 on: March 19, 2006, 05:58:30 AM »

Quote from: "Sonu"

you r welcome muna... bahut khoob....

ajj keya gaow mey sab geet khaye khu gaye
dil key etney tukdey huye key sab kuch bhul gaye
ajj ju chupey they gum dil me vo ahkhu sey nir ben key bhey gaye
humarey lafzo ko pero ker logoo ney afsane bena daley
likh ker un lafzo ko ganey bena daley.

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ur welcome mom........ very nice again......

Udaas mann mere kyon aisi baat karta hai
kyon tere har lafz mein itna dard bhara rahta hai
yeh jamana tujhe hansne nahi dega kabhi
phir kyon gairon se itni ummeed rakhta hai.........


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Sonu

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«Reply #73 on: March 22, 2006, 10:46:03 PM »

THANKS BABO... WONDERFUL...

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