Udaas

by Sonu on November 19, 2004, 10:42:50 PM
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Khayal ko kisi aahat ki aas rehti hai,
Nigah ko kisi surat ki pyaas rehti hai.
Terey bin kisi cheez ki kami to nahi,
Magar tere bin tabiyat humari udaas see rehti hai.
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2004, 11:02:20 PM »
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wah!!!! simple wordings mai kaya shaandaar baat likh di apne!!! bahoot khoob!!!

khayalo mai milty hai, app roj hi
kabhi to zameen per, utar ayega
Najaro mai rahty hai, app roj hi
Kabhi to ankhon ke, samne ayega!!!

Rah-E-Muhabbat ki, itani bhi mushkil nahi
eK baar yakin kar ke, kabhi sath hamare bhi ayega!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2004, 03:14:41 AM »
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shukryaa pooji
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nishita
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2004, 10:29:46 AM »
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very nice sonu Usual Smile
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2004, 05:31:38 PM »
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nice one!
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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2004, 09:25:03 AM »
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Khayal ko kisi aahat ki aas rehti hai,
Nigah ko kisi surat ki pyaas rehti hai.
Terey bin kisi cheez ki kami to nahi,
Magar tere bin tabiyat humari udaas see rehti hai.


wowowowowowowowo very nice...........

Yaad karte ho humein tanhai mein,
dil dooba hai gamo ki gahrai mein,
humein dhoondo apne dil mein,
hum millenge tumhe tumhari parchai mein.   (nm)
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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2004, 03:04:03 AM »
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shukriya nishita ji, and waheed ji...

yaad kertey hai hum tumko apni tanhayeo mey
dil humara duba rahta hai gamo key chav mey
humain dhonda hoo ager to apni parcaheyo mey dekhu
hum tumhey meleyngey tumahrey he tasover mey.
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2004, 06:16:00 AM »
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bahoot khoob Waheed_rose and Sonu ji!!
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2004, 04:53:14 PM »
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wah wahhhhh!
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Sonu
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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2004, 09:56:10 PM »
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shukriya pooja ji.
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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2004, 09:16:44 AM »
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shukriya nishita ji, and waheed ji...

yaad kertey hai hum tumko apni tanhayeo mey
dil humara duba rahta hai gamo key chav mey
humain dhonda hoo ager to apni parcaheyo mey dekhu
hum tumhey meleyngey tumahrey he tasover mey.


Thanx Pooja........Sonu...................

Milengi hamein bhi apne naseeb ki khushyan
Ab dekhna hai kab yeh kamaal hota hai...............
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Sonu
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2004, 03:07:11 AM »
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bahut khoob waheed ji
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #12 on: November 28, 2004, 05:26:49 AM »
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Thanx Sonu...........
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Sonu
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«Reply #13 on: December 07, 2004, 01:40:21 AM »
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waheed ji your most welcome yeo hee likhtey rahow  Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: December 08, 2004, 05:35:20 PM »
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Palkoon Pay Chamaktay Rehay Ehsaas Kay Jugnoo
Aankhoon Nay Kaha Bhi Tujhay Aankhoon Nay Suna Bhi
Bay Rang Hain Mosam Kay Badaltay Howey Paiker
Chalta Tha Teray Saath Hi Mosam Ka Pata Bhi
Dastak Si Hoee Jaati Hay Derwaza-E-Shab Per
Hay Saath Miray Sehmi Hoee Gher Ki Fiza Bhi
Parh Loonga Kisi Din Usay Chupkay Say Chura Kay
Jo Nazm Bhi Misra Bhi Ghazal Bhi Qataa Bhi
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