@ufaq-----sheba

by Sheba on October 14, 2013, 05:20:43 AM
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                    baat  saaqi  se   maikhaane  tak  chali!
                     ke mohabbat roothne se manaane tak chali!!


                     hue  faut amir-e-shahr jis adaa pe kabhi.
                     ghazlo.n  mein wo adaa zamaane tak chali!


                     parwaaz mere zehan ki ajeeb tamanaa liye .
                     zameen  ko  ufaq  se  milaane  tak  chali!


                    khandhar  ye  bataa  raha  rote hue  sabko.
                     jung-e-ishq  yahaan   mitaane  tak   chali!


                     kaafila  tajalliyon  ka badha jo apni taraf.
                     roshni  raat ki  phir ujaala aane tak chali!


                    

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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2013, 06:44:37 AM »
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zabardassssssssst kalaam, 2nd, 3rd aur 4th sher bilkul outstanding haiN, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareN mohtarma, haaN aakhiri sher ka matlab clear nahi hua.
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«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2013, 08:49:20 AM »
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ek rau ke saath daad qubool karen
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2013, 09:23:38 AM »
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bahut khoob icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2013, 10:59:16 AM »
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Sheba jee
kya kahun..badi gahrai hai is kalaam men.
shayad mai kuch samajh bhi paaya hun.

nihayat shaandaar khayaal piroye hai aapne.
bahut bahut mubarakbaad.

 baat  saaqi  se   maikhaane  tak  chali!
 ke mohabbat roothe se manaane tak chali!! Applause Applause


 hue  faut amir-e-shahr jis adaa pe kabhi.
 ghazlo.n  mein wo adaa zamaane tak chali! Applause Applause


parwaaz mere zehan ki ajeeb tamanaa liye .
zameen  ko  ufaq  se  milaane  tak  chali!


khandhar  ye  bataa  raha  rote hue  sabko.
jung-e-ishq  yahaan   mitaane  tak   chali! Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2013, 11:29:31 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 14, 2013, 05:20:43 AM
                     baat  saaqi  se   maikhaane  tak  chali!
                     ke mohabbat roothe se manaane tak chali!!


                     hue  faut amir-e-shahr jis adaa pe kabhi.
                     ghazlo.n  mein wo adaa zamaane tak chali!


                     parwaaz mere zehan ki ajeeb tamanaa liye .
                     zameen  ko  ufaq  se  milaane  tak  chali!


                     khandhar  ye  bataa  raha  rote hue  sabko.
                     jung-e-ishq  yahaan   mitaane  tak   chali!


                     kaafila  tajalliyon  ka badha jo apni taraf.
                     roshni  raat ki  phir ujaala aane tak chali!


                     

                     FAUT-MAUT
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Waaaaaaah waah waah sheba ji... bahut hi umda kalaam se nawaza hai aapne.. sabhi ashaaron mein bahut umda hai...Is khoobsurat kalam par dil se hazaron daaaaaaaad qubool kare...
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2013, 01:28:14 PM »
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Aapka likhne ka andaaz hatke hai.
i like to write like that
kya baat hai
mujhe urdu kam aati bhut kam

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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2013, 01:50:56 PM »
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very nice sir ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 14, 2013, 03:40:57 PM »
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Very Nice Sheba!!!

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«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2013, 03:41:32 PM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #10 on: October 14, 2013, 03:46:53 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 14, 2013, 05:20:43 AM
                     baat  saaqi  se   maikhaane  tak  chali!
                     ke mohabbat roothe se manaane tak chali!!


                     hue  faut amir-e-shahr jis adaa pe kabhi.
                     ghazlo.n  mein wo adaa zamaane tak chali!


                     parwaaz mere zehan ki ajeeb tamanaa liye .
                     zameen  ko  ufaq  se  milaane  tak  chali!


                     khandhar  ye  bataa  raha  rote hue  sabko.
                     jung-e-ishq  yahaan   mitaane  tak   chali!


                     kaafila  tajalliyon  ka badha jo apni taraf.
                     roshni  raat ki  phir ujaala aane tak chali!


                     

                     FAUT-MAUT
                     UFAQ- HORIZON
                     TAJALLIYA.N-BIJLIYAA.N
                     


bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 14, 2013, 03:51:04 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 14, 2013, 05:20:43 AM
                     baat  saaqi  se   maikhaane  tak  chali!
                     ke mohabbat roothe se manaane tak chali!!


                     hue  faut amir-e-shahr jis adaa pe kabhi.
                     ghazlo.n  mein wo adaa zamaane tak chali!


                     parwaaz mere zehan ki ajeeb tamanaa liye .
                     zameen  ko  ufaq  se  milaane  tak  chali!


                     khandhar  ye  bataa  raha  rote hue  sabko.
                     jung-e-ishq  yahaan   mitaane  tak   chali!


                     kaafila  tajalliyon  ka badha jo apni taraf.
                     roshni  raat ki  phir ujaala aane tak chali!


                     

                     FAUT-MAUT
                     UFAQ- HORIZON
                     TAJALLIYA.N-BIJLIYAA.N
                     


Bahut Bahut Khooob Sheba Ji

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«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2013, 05:11:48 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 14, 2013, 05:20:43 AM
                     baat  saaqi  se   maikhaane  tak  chali!
                     ke mohabbat roothe se manaane tak chali!!


                     hue  faut amir-e-shahr jis adaa pe kabhi.
                     ghazlo.n  mein wo adaa zamaane tak chali!


                     parwaaz mere zehan ki ajeeb tamanaa liye .
                     zameen  ko  ufaq  se  milaane  tak  chali!


                     khandhar  ye  bataa  raha  rote hue  sabko.
                     jung-e-ishq  yahaan   mitaane  tak   chali!


                     kaafila  tajalliyon  ka badha jo apni taraf.
                     roshni  raat ki  phir ujaala aane tak chali!


                     

                     FAUT-MAUT
                     UFAQ- HORIZON
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bohtat khoob sheba ,..............bohat c daad,.....
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«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2013, 05:18:01 PM »
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hue  faut amir-e-shahr jis adaa pe kabhi.
ghazlo.n  mein wo adaa zamaane tak chali!

parwaaz mere zehan ki ajeeb tamanaa liye .
zameen  ko  ufaq  se  milaane  tak  chali!

BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB . Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2013, 05:19:26 PM »
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Kya kehne sheba jee..
Kafi gehre ehsaas rahe..
Sabhi aashar qabil-e-tareef rahe..
Dhero daad..;-)
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