Uffff merra dil...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 21, 2011, 04:56:19 PM
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Dil ne jise manga hai din rat apni duao mein,
aaj usi se dil door jana chahta hai,

intezar karta hai uska har pal,
phir bhi usise nazar hatana chahta hai,

itna kuch kho diya hai zindgi mein,
ab nhi raha uske layak mujhe batana chahta hai,

dil k hatho itni majbur ho chuki hu main,
usko naraaz kar k ab khud ko tadpana chahta hai,

arzu rakhta hai har lamha uske aane ki,
betab hai itna ki use uske apno se churana chahta hai,

kabhi uspe bepanah mhbt barasata hai,
kabhi usise har baat chhupana chahta hai,

bina unke ye tou bus dil ka haal-e-bayan hai dosto..
warna har surat merra dil merre ajnabi ko hi pana chahta hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2011, 05:13:42 PM »
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Bahut shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2011, 05:50:35 PM »
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Dil ko chhute ye tere dil k ehsaason ko aapne Geet  achhe dhang se kavita me piroyaa hai......daad kabool kijeeye..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye tera dil bhi ajeeb hai jaane kya chahta hai
Jis se jodna hai nata ussi se door jaana chahta hai

Har pal jise dekhne ko machalta hai tera dil
Usssi se nazarein milaana nahi chahta hai

Kya huaa kyu khud ko kam samajhne laga tera dil
Samay ke lamhe jo kho gaye samajhta hai tera dilver

Samjha apne dil ko na ho wo itna majboor
Teri tadap se tadapta hai tere sanam ka bhi dil

Arjoo teri rang laayegi jald lautega wo
Apne tou sab apne hote hai unse kya churaana hai

Undel de apna sab pyaar uss jaane mann pe tu
Jaanta hai wo bepanaah mohbbat karti hai tu

Haal-e-dil tera wo khoo achhe se jaanta hai
Wo har haal me tera hai aur tujhe he paana chahta hai.....







Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 21, 2011, 04:56:19 PM


Dil ne jise manga hai din rat apni duao mein,
aaj usi se dil door jana chahta hai,

intezar karta hai uska har pal,
phir bhi usise nazar hatana chahta hai,

itna kuch kho diya hai zindgi mein,
ab nhi raha uske layak mujhe batana chahta hai,

dil k hatho itni majbur ho chuki hu main,
usko naraaz kar k ab khud ko tadpana chahta hai,

arzu rakhta hai har lamha uske aane ki,
betab hai itna ki use uske apno se churana chahta hai,

kabhi uspe bepanah mhbt barasata hai,
kabhi usise har baat chhupana chahta hai,

bina unke ye tou bus dil ka haal-e-bayan hai dosto..
warna har surat merra dil merre ajnabi ko hi pana chahta hai.........
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2011, 05:52:53 PM »
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uff aapka ye dil...mere zism me hota
fir aapke ye alfaa...meri kalaamo me hota!!
ye bepanah mohabat aapke dil ki...meri zazbaato me kahi
guumnaam si khamosh ehsaason me hota!!!!
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lajawaab ehsaaso ki bayani kari aapne Geet...hats off
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2011, 06:24:09 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on March 21, 2011, 05:50:35 PM
Dil ko chhute ye tere dil k ehsaason ko aapne Geet  achhe dhang se kavita me piroyaa hai......daad kabool kijeeye..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye tera dil bhi ajeeb hai jaane kya chahta hai
Jis se jodna hai nata ussi se door jaana chahta hai

Har pal jise dekhne ko machalta hai tera dil
Usssi se nazarein milaana nahi chahta hai

Kya huaa kyu khud ko kam samajhne laga tera dil
Samay ke lamhe jo kho gaye samajhta hai tera dilver

Samjha apne dil ko na ho wo itna majboor
Teri tadap se tadapta hai tere sanam ka bhi dil

Arjoo teri rang laayegi jald lautega wo
Apne tou sab apne hote hai unse kya churaana hai

Undel de apna sab pyaar uss jaane mann pe tu
Jaanta hai wo bepanaah mohbbat karti hai tu

Haal-e-dil tera wo khoo achhe se jaanta hai
Wo har haal me tera hai aur tujhe he paana chahta hai.....








Bahut shukriya anaam ji aur waah kya khoob jawabi kalaam likha hai bahut khoood aur bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2011, 06:25:09 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on March 21, 2011, 05:52:53 PM
uff aapka ye dil...mere zism me hota
fir aapke ye alfaa...meri kalaamo me hota!!
ye bepanah mohabat aapke dil ki...meri zazbaato me kahi
guumnaam si khamosh ehsaason me hota!!!!
““
lajawaab ehsaaso ki bayani kari aapne Geet...hats off

Waah nirala ji kya likha hai,aur shukriya merre kalaam ko pasand karne k liye...
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2011, 06:33:04 PM »
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Wow.. Wonderful peotry... bahoot bahoot Khoob Geet ,,, bahoot Kamaal ka likha hai ...

Anaam ji kya kahiye.. kya khoob saath diya hai aapne ... ati sunder... !!!!
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2011, 06:34:35 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 21, 2011, 06:33:04 PM
Wow.. Wonderful peotry... bahoot bahoot Khoob Geet ,,, bahoot Kamaal ka likha hai ...

Anaam ji kya kahiye.. kya khoob saath diya hai aapne ... ati sunder... !!!!
Bahut shukriya sophiji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2011, 06:37:23 PM »
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haha mene kya likha ji.
sach kahu tou aapka ye post dil ko bahot touch kar raha.
kaise likhte ho bhagwaan hi jaane. lekin 100% dil se likhti ho feelings ko.
god bless u dear.
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2011, 06:49:37 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on March 21, 2011, 06:37:23 PM
haha mene kya likha ji.
sach kahu tou aapka ye post dil ko bahot touch kar raha.
kaise likhte ho bhagwaan hi jaane. lekin 100% dil se likhti ho feelings ko.
god bless u dear.
Bahut shukriya nirala ji..god bless u too..take care..
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2011, 07:43:06 PM »
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Hmmmmm.... aaj bahut din baad main YO pe aaya hoon. Hope aap sab achche honge. Aake ye dusri post padh raha hoon. Aur bahut achcha laga as a poem but apka ye dukh achcha nahi laga . Geet ji always keep smiling. Kyun hamesha aap udaas udaas rehti hai. Cheer up dear...!!! And keep up the good work. Bahut achcha likha hai aapne....!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


dil ki aadat hai ye, ise to bas dil hi samajhta hai,
apno se duur jaake le wo tanhaayi me kyun tadpaata hai,

shayad isme bhi marzi upar baithe us bhagwaan ki ho,
jo kabhi hume rulaata hai to agle pal hume hasaata hai,

khel usi ka hai ye jo hume apno se duur le jaata hai,
aur kisi gair ko apna bana ke hamare kareeb le aata hai,

ye na socho ki bas ghum hi zindagi me bhara hai tumhaare,
aaj agar aansoo hai to kal waqt hamare saath muskuraata hai..
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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2011, 03:15:14 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 21, 2011, 04:56:19 PM


Dil ne jise manga hai din rat apni duao mein,
aaj usi se dil door jana chahta hai,

intezar karta hai uska har pal,
phir bhi usise nazar hatana chahta hai,

itna kuch kho diya hai zindgi mein,
ab nhi raha uske layak mujhe batana chahta hai,

dil k hatho itni majbur ho chuki hu main,
usko naraaz kar k ab khud ko tadpana chahta hai,

arzu rakhta hai har lamha uske aane ki,
betab hai itna ki use uske apno se churana chahta hai,

kabhi uspe bepanah mhbt barasata hai,
kabhi usise har baat chhupana chahta hai,

bina unke ye tou bus dil ka haal-e-bayan hai dosto..
warna har surat merra dil merre ajnabi ko hi pana chahta hai.........

Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Broken Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... Dil se daad ......... !
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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2011, 12:11:42 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 21, 2011, 07:43:06 PM
Hmmmmm.... aaj bahut din baad main YO pe aaya hoon. Hope aap sab achche honge. Aake ye dusri post padh raha hoon. Aur bahut achcha laga as a poem but apka ye dukh achcha nahi laga . Geet ji always keep smiling. Kyun hamesha aap udaas udaas rehti hai. Cheer up dear...!!! And keep up the good work. Bahut achcha likha hai aapne....!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


dil ki aadat hai ye, ise to bas dil hi samajhta hai,
apno se duur jaake le wo tanhaayi me kyun tadpaata hai,

shayad isme bhi marzi upar baithe us bhagwaan ki ho,
jo kabhi hume rulaata hai to agle pal hume hasaata hai,

khel usi ka hai ye jo hume apno se duur le jaata hai,
aur kisi gair ko apna bana ke hamare kareeb le aata hai,

ye na socho ki bas ghum hi zindagi me bhara hai tumhaare,
aaj agar aansoo hai to kal waqt hamare saath muskuraata hai..

Bahut acha laga kapil ji kaafi dino k baad apko yoindia pe dekhe yahan tou sab acha hi hai aur kapil ji ye merri dard bhari nhi bus thodi tadap bhari kavita hai aur main zyada udaas nhi rehti hu maine apse pehle bhi kaha tha ki mujhe zyada waqt udaad rehna nhi aata...aur shukriya apka merri kavita pasand karne k liye aur jawaban apne behad khubsurat panktiya likhi hai bahut shukriya apka...take care...Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 22, 2011, 12:12:10 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on March 22, 2011, 03:15:14 AM
Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... Broken Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... Dil se daad ......... !
Bahut shukriya naresh ji.,..
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«Reply #14 on: March 22, 2011, 12:44:17 PM »
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Uffff ye tera Dil Geet-di.... love9
Na jaane kya kya gul khilaataa hai re....
Kabhi ruthtaa hai.... kabhi pyaar me Jhoomta hai....
Kabhi shikve kare tou kabhi toot-ta hai ye tera dil...
Mujhe tou lage masti loot-ta hai ye tera dil... love9

Nice to see your lines after a long time Kalaashkerji....
Aur Anaam tumne tou kamaal kar diya...mast reply dear...keep it up
Aaj-kal achha likhne lage ho re.....sab rango mai... Winking Winking Winking
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