Ugate Sooraj saa hooN.................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on December 23, 2010, 03:17:58 PM
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Hai sunaa humne kaheeN khwaab bikaa karte haiN
Saath me aah o fugaaN muft milaa karte haiN

Ho talab dard kee to chaliyegaa waheeN chalte haiN
Log jee bhar ke wahaaN aah o bukaa karte haiN

Kaam kee baat karo waqt ko zaaye na karo
Aur bhee haiN jo meree raah taka karte haiN

Sachche ahbab parakhne kee to quvvat rakkho
Peeth ke peechhe tumhe log bakaa karte haiN

Jab azeezoN kee tadap aaNkh me aaNsoo laaye
Aise haalaat me kai log bikaa karte haiN

Hai abhee umr e nou aur samajh bhee kam hai
Waqt se pahle kahaaN phal bhee pakaa karte haiN

Ugte sooraj saa hooN sab mujhko salaamee deNge
Dhalte sooraj pe kahaaN log jhukaa karte haiN

Mai koi ‘aam’ naheeN ‘khaas’hooN gul gulshan kaa
Mere deedaar ko sab log rukaa karte haiN


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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2010, 03:46:32 PM »
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hay re fir bomb fek diya apne mamta ji..........

aap muje office se ghar jaldi nahi jane dengi....

lijiye ye few lines for u and ur poetry ........jara najar daliye is per

Shayar To Wo He Jo Lahu Se Likha Karte He
Aajkal To Kalaam Bhi Chand Rupyoo Me Bika Karte He

Taree To Roj Timtimate He Aasmaan Me Per Aap Sa Koi Kaha
Aap Chaand He Eid Ke Jo Arsoo Me Dikah Karte He
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2010, 05:18:09 PM »
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mil jaati hai kalme chand sikko ke mol pe
par ehsaas bikte nhi yu sare bazar...
bas yu likhte rahe mamta ji...
aap pe ho bhagwan ki kripa apaar...
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2010, 05:57:11 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!

Badi rawaaN DawaaN Gazal kahi hai aapne is dafaa..
Khayaal aur bayani behad khoob lai hume...

Ahsaas O khayaal per aate hai..... Usual Smile          


Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 23, 2010, 03:17:58 PM
Hai sunaa humne kaheeN khwaab bikaa karte haiN
Saath me aah o fugaaN muft milaa karte haiN

Waah Mamtaa je kia baat hai misraa e ulaa behad khoob kaha hai aapne daad... Matla achcha hai daad          


Ho talab dard kee to chaliyegaa waheeN chalte haiN
Log jee bhar ke wahaaN aah o bukaa karte haiN

Gazab ki rawaani hai is sher meiN Mamtaa jee daad Dil se daad...... par misra e uaa meiN aapne "waheeN" Kaha hai to misra e sani meiN bhi uska khulasa nahi kiya wagerna sher behad khoob banta......            


Kaam kee baat karo waqt ko zaaye na karo
Aur bhee haiN jo meree raah taka karte haiN

Bada pyaara sher hai daad ... Usual Smile          


Sachche ahbab parakhne kee to quvvat rakkho
Peeth ke peechhe tumhe log bakaa karte haiN

Waah jee waah kia kahne hai waah daad daad daad .... behad khoob behad umdaa ... Usual Smile          


Jab azeezoN kee tadap aaNkh me aaNsoo laaye
Aise haalaat me kai log bikaa karte haiN

Waah kia kahne jee behad sahiN farmaya aapne daad ... Usual Smile          


Hai abhee umr e nou aur samajh bhee kam hai
Waqt se pahle kahaaN phal bhee pakaa karte haiN

Oye hoye kia baat hai jee waah waah behad umdaa khayaal behad khoob bayaani daad daad daad.... Usual Smile          


Ugte sooraj saa hooN sab mujhko salaamee deNge
Dhalte sooraj pe kahaaN log jhukaa karte haiN

Mamtaa jee pahelaa misra to achcha hai per khayaal ke taur per dujaa misra dekheN to hume duje misre ki baat simple si lagi... yaa youN kahiye ke kuch asar chhodta nazar nahi aaya...          


Mai koi ‘aam’ naheeN ‘khaas’hooN gul gulshan kaa
Mere deedaar ko sab log rukaa karte haiN

Kia baat hai jee achcha sher hai daad... Usual Smile          

Mamta bajpai



Mamtaa jee waqai behad rawaaN Gazal se nawaaza hai aapne dil se daad kabool kijye.....

Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile          
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2010, 06:55:43 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2010, 07:34:02 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Mamta jee..!
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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2010, 06:29:34 AM »
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Mamta jee kya khub likha hai aapne ....har line har shabd khas hai.
behtareen peshkash hai jee.
aapko mera ek haath se Salute aur dono haathon se Namaskaar hai jee.
bahut khubsurat nagma.
ji ab daad dene layak shabd nahi hai bas itna hi kahunga ki---Khus rahiye aabaad rahiye . yun hi hame bhi apko padhne ka mauka dete rahiye.
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2010, 10:42:32 AM »
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Bahut Khub Mamta Ji Bahut Sunder Likha Hai
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«Reply #8 on: December 25, 2010, 02:11:17 PM »
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Rishi jee! housla afzi ka behad shukriya........
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«Reply #9 on: December 25, 2010, 02:14:49 PM »
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Subhash jee! aap ka abhwaadan sweekaar kar aap ko shubhaasheerwaad detee hooN...yaqeenan aap jaise housalaa baRhaane waale hon to aasmaan chhoo lene ko jee kartaa hai...behad se bhee zyaadaa shukriyaa.....
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«Reply #10 on: December 25, 2010, 02:16:30 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Rahim jee!
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«Reply #11 on: December 25, 2010, 02:59:07 PM »
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haha aap to mujhse bhi jada  niralaa ho Mamta mam.
aapne kisi subhash ko Asirwaad dia saath hi Sukriya bhi kaha.
ye to kamaal hai.
wese aapki ye peshkash dilchasp se bhi jada achha hai.
mai kuch likha chahta tha mgr bhool gaya:(;(
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«Reply #12 on: December 25, 2010, 08:38:05 PM »
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Bahut achchha peshkash hai Mamta Ji
Likhte rahiye - Aap ka hamesha alag andaaz rahta hai
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«Reply #13 on: December 26, 2010, 11:58:33 AM »
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bht umda...............
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«Reply #14 on: December 26, 2010, 12:50:13 PM »
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Priya Apriya ! Kaavya rachanaa ke kshetra me ek sudriRh hastaakshar hai tumhaaree lekhani ....bahut bahut shukriyaa duaoN ke liye....
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