UGTE HI SURAJ ANDHERA HO GAYA ........................ HASAN

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Aaj  ka   Mausam   yeh   kaisa   ho   gaya
Ugte   hi   Suraj    Andhera   ho   gaya

Nazr - e- Bad  kis  Bad - Nazar  ki  lag  gayi
" Aakhiri   Patta   bhi   Peela   ho    gaya "

Taang   aapas   meiN   sab   kheencha   kiye
Shah - nasheeN  par  us  ka  Qabza  ho  gay

BhaaiyoN  par  chhod  dee  kya  Jaayedad
Milkiyat  par  sab  ka  Daawa  ho  gaya

Aas  kya  Mausam  ke  khulne  ki  kareiN
Abb  to   Baadal  aur  Gahra  ho  gaya

Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya

Baat  Haq  ki  Hum  ne  kya  kah  dee  'Hasan'
Bazm  meiN  Hangaama  barpa  ho  gaya

- HASAN . SHAMSI -
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2014, 06:50:50 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2014, 07:00:43 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 14, 2014, 06:19:59 PM

Aaj  ka   Mausam   yeh   kaisa   ho   gaya
Ugte   hi   Suraj    Andhera   ho   gaya

Nazr - e- Bad  kis  Bad - Nazar  ki  lag  gayi
" Aakhiri   Patta   bhi   Peela   ho    gaya "

Taang   aapas   meiN   sab   kheencha   kiye
Shah - nasheeN  par  us  ka  Qabza  ho  gay

BhaaiyoN  par  chhod  dee  kya  Jaayedad
Milkiyat  par  sab  ka  Daawa  ho  gaya

Aas  kya  Mausam  ke  khulne  ki  kareiN
Abb  to   Baadal  aur  Gahra  ho  gaya

Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya

Baat  Haq  ki  Hum  ne  kya  kah  dee  'Hasan'
Bazm  meiN  Hangaama  barpa  ho  gaya

- HASAN . SHAMSI -
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2014, 07:26:23 PM »
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Aas  kya  Mausam  ke  khulne  ki  kareiN
Abb  to   Baadal  aur  Gahra  ho  gaya

Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya

waah waah waah Janaab saaree ghazal bahut umdah hai par phir bhi yeh do misre mujhe bahut pasand aaye kyun kee donon kaa mahol kuchh mukhtaalif saa hai, dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2014, 05:04:07 AM »
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बहुत उम्दा......
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2014, 06:29:43 AM »
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Bohat Khub Hasan Sir!!! Bohat Khub Likha Hai Aap Ne!!!

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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2014, 06:54:16 AM »
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Sabse khoobsurat sher...
akhiri patta bhi peela ho gaya..
is dard bhare ehsaas par hazaron daad
bahut umdah ghazal..hamesha ki tarah
Bahut badhiya Sir
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2014, 07:38:26 AM »
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bahut khooooooob Hasan ji..................
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2014, 09:38:37 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 14, 2014, 06:19:59 PM

Aaj  ka   Mausam   yeh   kaisa   ho   gaya
Ugte   hi   Suraj    Andhera   ho   gaya

Nazr - e- Bad  kis  Bad - Nazar  ki  lag  gayi
" Aakhiri   Patta   bhi   Peela   ho    gaya "

Taang   aapas   meiN   sab   kheencha   kiye
Shah - nasheeN  par  us  ka  Qabza  ho  gay

BhaaiyoN  par  chhod  dee  kya  Jaayedad
Milkiyat  par  sab  ka  Daawa  ho  gaya

Aas  kya  Mausam  ke  khulne  ki  kareiN
Abb  to   Baadal  aur  Gahra  ho  gaya

Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya

Baat  Haq  ki  Hum  ne  kya  kah  dee  'Hasan'
Bazm  meiN  Hangaama  barpa  ho  gaya

- HASAN . SHAMSI -


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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2014, 11:27:43 AM »
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Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya

Baat  Haq  ki  Hum  ne  kya  kah  dee  'Hasan'
Bazm  meiN  Hangaama  barpa  ho  gaya

waah waah bohut khoob Hasan sahab

haasil E ghazal ashaar lage mujhe

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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2014, 12:27:35 PM »
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Kya Baat Hai? Bahut umda. Dheron Daad Janab.
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2014, 03:36:58 PM »
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What a marvelous creation Hasan sahab. umdaa behad umdaa
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Hasan sar bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai, bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2014, 04:33:23 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 14, 2014, 06:50:50 PM
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waah waah waah waah kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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bahut bahut khub hasan sahab..... 1 rau aapke lie.... waise aap to rau se pare hain... rau bhi aapke lie kam ho jata hai.....
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