UGTE HI SURAJ ANDHERA HO GAYA ........................ HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: September 16, 2014, 10:10:27 AM »
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AAPKA  SHUKRGUZAR  HOON  MANOJ  JI
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«Reply #16 on: September 16, 2014, 12:48:29 PM »
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Aaj  ka   Mausam   yeh   kaisa   ho   gaya
Ugte   hi   Suraj    Andhera   ho   gaya
ghazal mein bechaare suraj ka kya kaam sirf chaand hi to hota hai her sher mein to andhera to ho ga hi suraj murjha gaya hai shaayad kyon chaan ko itni trjih milti hai  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Nazr - e- Bad  kis  Bad - Nazar  ki  lag  gayi
" Aakhiri   Patta   bhi   Peela   ho    gaya "
baaqi patte kya peele hone se pahle hi jhhar gaye the icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent!
Taang   aapas   meiN   sab   kheencha   kiye
Shah - nasheeN  par  us  ka  Qabza  ho  gay
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard! do billiyo.N ki ladaai mein bandar ko faayda hua
BhaaiyoN  par  chhod  dee  kya  Jaayedad
Milkiyat  par  sab  ka  Daawa  ho  gaya
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:aisi ghalti nahin karni chaahiye aaj ke zamaane mein!
Aas  kya  Mausam  ke  khulne  ki  kareiN
Abb  to   Baadal  aur  Gahra  ho  gaya
khawahish chhod do khush raho ge icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya
acha ji ye baat hai to main pahoochti hoon dekhoon kya khichdi pak rahi hai janaab ke kitchen mein Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
Baat  Haq  ki  Hum  ne  kya  kah  dee  'Hasan'
Bazm  meiN  Hangaama  barpa  ho  gaya
isliye zayada haqparsti ki baatein na kiya karo icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
- HASAN . SHAMSI -



ek rau fazal sahab iss khoobsoorat ghazal pe icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #17 on: September 16, 2014, 04:49:37 PM »
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Aaj  ka   Mausam   yeh   kaisa   ho   gaya
Ugte   hi   Suraj    Andhera   ho   gaya

Nazr - e- Bad  kis  Bad - Nazar  ki  lag  gayi
" Aakhiri   Patta   bhi   Peela   ho    gaya "

Taang   aapas   meiN   sab   kheencha   kiye
Shah - nasheeN  par  us  ka  Qabza  ho  gay

BhaaiyoN  par  chhod  dee  kya  Jaayedad
Milkiyat  par  sab  ka  Daawa  ho  gaya

Aas  kya  Mausam  ke  khulne  ki  kareiN
Abb  to   Baadal  aur  Gahra  ho  gaya

Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya

Baat  Haq  ki  Hum  ne  kya  kah  dee  'Hasan'
Bazm  meiN  Hangaama  barpa  ho  gaya

- HASAN . SHAMSI -



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«Reply #18 on: September 17, 2014, 05:53:09 AM »
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Aas  kya  Mausam  ke  khulne  ki  kareiN
Abb  to   Baadal  aur  Gahra  ho  gaya

Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya

waah waah waah Janaab saaree ghazal bahut umdah hai par phir bhi yeh do misre mujhe bahut pasand aaye kyun kee donon kaa mahol kuchh mukhtaalif saa hai, dheron daad.
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aapke khuloos ke liye tahedil se mamnoon o mashkoor hoon , bahut bahut duaaein
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«Reply #19 on: September 17, 2014, 09:48:31 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab...!


Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne waaH behad gazab ke aur umdaa khayaaloN ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne ... bade hi tajurbekar ashaar huye haiN ...

Behad khoob janab behad umdaa ... I laa jawaab Kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #20 on: September 19, 2014, 01:20:34 PM »
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BAHUT SHUKRGUZAR HOON AAPKA AMIT JI . KHUSH RAHYE .
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«Reply #21 on: September 20, 2014, 09:30:38 AM »
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Bohat Khub Hasan Sir!!! Bohat Khub Likha Hai Aap Ne!!!

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Housla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukria Shireen ji
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«Reply #22 on: September 21, 2014, 04:03:10 AM »
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Sabse khoobsurat sher...
akhiri patta bhi peela ho gaya..
is dard bhare ehsaas par hazaron daad
bahut umdah ghazal..hamesha ki tarah
Bahut badhiya Sir
bahut shukrguzar hoon aapka , Mukesh ji . Khush o khurram rahye .
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«Reply #23 on: September 21, 2014, 09:14:04 AM »
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bahut khooooooob Hasan ji..................

Suresh Sangwan ji Thanks a lot
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«Reply #24 on: September 21, 2014, 05:31:50 PM »
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ek aur asardaar aur behtareen ghazal par dheron daad Hassan sahab !
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«Reply #25 on: September 22, 2014, 01:46:07 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!

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Qalb saheb Tah e dil se aap ka mamnoon o mashkoor hoon.
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«Reply #26 on: September 23, 2014, 06:01:33 PM »
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Woh  gaye  haiN  phir  na  aane  ke  liye
Ek tarah  se   yeh  bhi  Achha  ho  gaya

Baat  Haq  ki  Hum  ne  kya  kah  dee  'Hasan'
Bazm  meiN  Hangaama  barpa  ho  gaya

waah waah bohut khoob Hasan sahab

haasil E ghazal ashaar lage mujhe

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bahut bahut shukrguzar ,hoon aapka Sahil saheb . Khush rahye .
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«Reply #27 on: September 24, 2014, 01:17:52 AM »
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Kya Baat Hai? Bahut umda. Dheron Daad Janab.
Raji gujral ji , aap ke khuloos k liye bahut bahut shukria aur duaaein .
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«Reply #28 on: September 24, 2014, 07:01:13 AM »
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What a marvelous creation Hasan sahab. umdaa behad umdaa
kumar saheb , thanksssss a lot . Khush rahye . Duaaein .
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«Reply #29 on: September 27, 2014, 04:36:10 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Hasan sar bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai, bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau.
Shukria Iftakhar saheb . Khush rahye .
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