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UljhaneN aur meri tum to baRhayaa na karo
bevajah yuNhee mujhe aur sataayaa na karo
mai to chup hooN meri yaadeN bhee abhee soyee haiN
cheRh ke baat koi mujh ko rulaayaa na karo
jo pareshaan kare dil se khushee bhee cheene
aisee roodaad kabhee mujhko sunaayaa na karo
dil pe jo likkha hai sou baar ubhar aayegaa
rait pe likh ke mera naam mitaayaa na karo
mujhko palkon pe basa rakkha hai to dekhiyegaa
ashq ke dariya me ye aqs bahaayaa na karo
Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2010, 02:20:09 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Mamta Jee....
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Mar chuke hum kya yeh nahi kafi
Aaker turbat pe meri humko jagaya na karo..
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2010, 06:29:08 PM » |
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Mamta jee Aadaab!
Kia baat hai aap to bahot instantly likh leti hai...
Hum se to likha hi nahi jata... Aur dusri khaas baat yeh ke aap meter meiN likhati hai.... Jisse humara door door ka rishta nahi hai..... chaliye aapki kalaam per aate hai...  UljhaneN aur meri tum to baRhayaa na karo
bevajah yuNhee mujhe aur sataayaa na karo
Bahot masoom sa aur umdaa matla kaha hai aapne... Daad Jee..
mai to chup hooN meri yaadeN bhee abhee soyee haiN
cheRh ke baat koi mujh ko rulaayaa na karo
Oye hoye.... Pahela misra behad kabil e tarif ... aur sher bhi bahut umdaa raha daad... Masha Allah bahot umdaa..
jo pareshaan kare dil se khushee bhee cheene
aisee roodaad kabhee mujhko sunaayaa na karo
Bahot achcha ban pada hai yeh bhi sher... Daad
dil pe jo likkha hai sou baar ubhar aayegaa
rait pe likh ke mera naam mitaayaa na karo
Masha Allah yahaN bhi pahela misra behad kabil e tarif kaha hai aapne... Dusra misra bahut baar use hua hai per rabta behad khoob raha.... Daad
mujhko palkon pe basa rakkha hai to dekhiyegaa
ashq ke dariya me ye aqs bahaayaa na karo
Kia baat hai... Sher achcha hai.. par thik se apna massage nahi de paa raha hai... Jo aap kahna chah rahi hai.....
Mamta Bajpai
Phir se ek behad aur umdaa koshish per dil se daad kabool kijiye....
Likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda hafez........
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2010, 06:49:59 PM » |
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bht pyari gazal mamta ji ...dil ko chhu gaye aapke andaaz
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2010, 08:30:27 PM » |
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Bahut umda Ghazal likhi hai aap ne Mamta Ji
Daad kabuul kijiye
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2010, 09:15:17 PM » |
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mahutram mamta saheba aadab ,,
apki ghazal ke kya kahene hain .. wahhhhhhhhhhhhh ...har sher apni wazh me ...apki shaairi khoob parwan cha'r rahi hai .. ik nahi balke hazarh dad apki is purlutf , purasar o murassa ghazal pe .. 4th sher ko phir se sunch len to kya hi acha ho .. ik baar phir dili mubarak baad apki is khubsurath ghazal pe .. allah apko khush rakhe ..zoor-e-khalam aur ziyada ..
dua go
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2010, 05:38:30 AM » |
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UljhaneN aur meri tum to baRhayaa na karo
bevajah yuNhee mujhe aur sataayaa na karo
mai to chup hooN meri yaadeN bhee abhee soyee haiN
cheRh ke baat koi mujh ko rulaayaa na karo
jo pareshaan kare dil se khushee bhee cheene
aisee roodaad kabhee mujhko sunaayaa na karo
dil pe jo likkha hai sou baar ubhar aayegaa
rait pe likh ke mera naam mitaayaa na karo
mujhko palkon pe basa rakkha hai to dekhiyegaa
ashq ke dariya me ye aqs bahaayaa na karo
Mamta Bajpai
bahut khub ho na jaye kahi bharam ek aur chand ka
nakaab rukh se sare aam hataya na karo
karke baate ajnabiyo se mere saamne
khanjer dil pe mere chalaya na karo
hei bus her gum mei he khushiya bahut
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2010, 08:42:25 AM » |
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BAHU BAHUT SHUKRIYA SAAJID JEE.....BAHUT KHOOB BAYAAN KIYA AAP NE BHI ...CHALIYE ISI SILSILE ME KUCH AUR BHEE.....
CHAND LAMHE HEE SAHEE MUJH PE NAZAR TO KAR DE
DOOR RAH RAH KE KOI BAAT BANAYAA NA KARO
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2010, 10:32:40 AM » |
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bahut khoob mamta ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2010, 07:27:14 PM » |
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2010, 03:48:31 PM » |
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mamta saheba behtreen aur umda ashaaraon se saji aap ki ghazal pe daad hi daad ....parwaaz saheb ka aapki ghazal pe tajziya bahot achha raha, aur parwaaz saheb bhi mubarak baad ke mustahiq hain ke woh apna qimti waqt nikaal kar aap ki ghazal pe tabsera kiya..aur sath hi saath janaab qadeer saheb ki raae bhi qaabil-e-qubool malum hoti hai,lehaza aap zaroor ghaur karein,phir se aap ki iss purlutf ghazal pe daad ..
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2010, 02:25:34 PM » |
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BAHU BAHUT SHUKRIYA SAAJID JEE.....BAHUT KHOOB BAYAAN KIYA AAP NE BHI ...CHALIYE ISI SILSILE ME KUCH AUR BHEE.....
CHAND LAMHE HEE SAHEE MUJH PE NAZAR TO KAR DE
DOOR RAH RAH KE KOI BAAT BANAYAA NA KARO
Mamta Bajpai
Socha silsila kayem rakhe.. Rulana hi tumhe jab ho pasand
Mujhse qatra nahi samandar bahaya karo...
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2010, 07:32:21 AM » |
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PARVEZ SAAHEB! SAB SE PAHLE TO AAP KA BEHAD SHUKRIYA KYONKE JITNI PAINI NIGAAHON SE AAP NE GAZAL KA TABSARA KIYA WOH HUMARE LIYE BEHAD QEEMATEE HAI.4TH SHER PAR MAI ZAROOR GOUR FARMAAOONGEE.GAZAL KE MAQTE ME JO BAAT HAI WOH YE KE AAP NE TO MUJHE APNEE PALKON ME BASAA RAKHA HAI OR US PAR YE ASHQON KA DARIYA BAHA RAHE HAIN.(KHAYAAL ZARA NAZUK HAI)TO DEKHIYE KAHEEN AAP KE ASHQON KE SAATH MERAA AQS JO AAP KEE AANKHON ME HAI ,BAH NA JAAYE.......
BAHARHAAL AAP KA MASHWARAA SAR AANKHON PAR......
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2010, 07:37:00 AM » |
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KAMEENEY JEE BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA!LEKIN AAP SE EK CHOTI SEE GUZAARISH HAI WOH YE KEH AGAR AAP APNE NAAM ME KUCH TABDEELEE KAR LE TO HUME PARHNE OR LIKHNE ME ACHCHA LAGEGA.AAP MERI BAAT KA BURAA HARGIZ NA MAANE...JO DIL ME BAAT AAP AAP TAK PAHUNCHA DEE.
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