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«Reply #15 on: August 31, 2010, 07:43:17 AM » |
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KAPIL JEE MUJHE BEHAD KHUSHEE IS BAAT KEE HAI KEH AAP KO HAMAAREE LEKHNI NE PRABHAVIT KIYAA.AAP KA BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAAD.MAI CHAAHOONGEE KE AAP MEREE SABHI KAVITAAON KA AANAND LE SAKEN ISKE LIYE YADI AAP CHAAHENGE TO URDU SHASDON KA HINDI ARTH BHEE LIKH DIYAA JAYEGA.APNI SUVIDHA KE LIYE AAP MUJHE PM BHI KAR SAKTE HAIN.BHAASHAAYEE JAANKARI ME YADI MAI AAP KE KUCH KAAM AA SAKEE TO KHUD KO DHANYA SAMJHOONGEE.
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«Reply #16 on: August 31, 2010, 07:45:49 AM » |
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BEHAD SHUKRIYA KASAK JEE GAZAL KEE PASANDEEDAGEE KE LIYE.........
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«Reply #17 on: August 31, 2010, 07:46:27 AM » |
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DHANYAWAAD RAJESH JEE!
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«Reply #18 on: August 31, 2010, 07:48:59 AM » |
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SHUKRIYA KHWAISHJEE!
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«Reply #19 on: August 31, 2010, 07:52:47 AM » |
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QADEER JEE AAP KA CERTIFICATE GAZAL KE BAARE ME ,HUMARE LIYE KAM AHMIYAT NAHEE RAKHTA....AAP KEE JAANIB SE JAB DAAD O MUBAARKBAAD KE PHOOL AATE HAIN TO DIL BAAG BAAG HO JATA HAI BEHAD SHUKRIYA...AAP KE MASHWARE PAR ZAROOR DHYAAN DOONGEE.
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«Reply #20 on: August 31, 2010, 07:59:39 AM » |
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NAZAR SAHEB !MUJHE KHUSHEE HAI JO AAP JAISE LOGON KEE NAZAR MERE KALAAM PAR SIRF PADTEEHEE NAHEE BALKEH NEK MASHWARON KA TOHAFA BHEE MUJHE MILTAA HAI.MAI AAP SABHEE KE RAI SE ITTEFAAQ RAKHYTEE HOON.........ISEE TARAH MERE HOUSALON KO PARWAAZ MILATI RAHE.......BEHAD SHUKRIYAA.....
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«Reply #21 on: August 31, 2010, 08:03:15 AM » |
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«Reply #22 on: August 31, 2010, 08:14:25 AM » |
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Dil me tere basi hai tasveer meri ubhar aayegi
Yu kaagaz pe bana bana ke mittaya na karo
KISI NE KAHA 4TH SHER KO....
Dil me tere basi hai tasveer meri ubhar aayegi
Tum yu dil cheer k har kisi ko dikhaya na karo
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«Reply #23 on: August 31, 2010, 09:03:17 AM » |
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ji bahut bahut shukriya ... main ab se aapko PM kar diya karunga koi kavita samajhne me dikkat hui to...!!! KAPIL JEE MUJHE BEHAD KHUSHEE IS BAAT KEE HAI KEH AAP KO HAMAAREE LEKHNI NE PRABHAVIT KIYAA.AAP KA BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAAD.MAI CHAAHOONGEE KE AAP MEREE SABHI KAVITAAON KA AANAND LE SAKEN ISKE LIYE YADI AAP CHAAHENGE TO URDU SHASDON KA HINDI ARTH BHEE LIKH DIYAA JAYEGA.APNI SUVIDHA KE LIYE AAP MUJHE PM BHI KAR SAKTE HAIN.BHAASHAAYEE JAANKARI ME YADI MAI AAP KE KUCH KAAM AA SAKEE TO KHUD KO DHANYA SAMJHOONGEE.
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«Reply #24 on: August 31, 2010, 01:02:31 PM » |
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SHUKRIYA KUHOO,ACHCHA LIKHA HAI PASAND AAYA........AGAR TUM NE KAHAA HAI TO BAHUT KHOOB......
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«Reply #25 on: August 31, 2010, 01:04:13 PM » |
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MANOJ JEE!BEHAD KHOOBSOORATEE SE AAP NE IS SILSILE KO AAGE BAHDAAYAA HAI ......DHERON DAAD.
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«Reply #26 on: September 01, 2010, 02:01:21 PM » |
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KAMEENEY JEE BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA!LEKIN AAP SE EK CHOTI SEE GUZAARISH HAI WOH YE KEH AGAR AAP APNE NAAM ME KUCH TABDEELEE KAR LE TO HUME PARHNE OR LIKHNE ME ACHCHA LAGEGA.AAP MERI BAAT KA BURAA HARGIZ NA MAANE...JO DIL ME BAAT AAP AAP TAK PAHUNCHA DEE.
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 Kamaal hai sach me kamaal hai abhi tak hasi nahi ruk rahi, Kisi ko kabhi Kameeney jee kehtey nahi suna. Galti Mamta Jee ki bhi nahi hai ab ID hi aisa hai to koi kya kare........waise meri ray me monitors ko khayaal rakhna chahiye ke koi is kism ka ID na banaye.....kal koi aur abusive ID bana lega to hum kya karege. Yoindia ki garima ko isse thes pohachti hai...... |
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«Reply #27 on: September 01, 2010, 03:26:45 PM » |
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Uljhan aur ab unki badh gayee........aap koi achha upnaam unko suggest kar dijeeye naa......
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«Reply #28 on: September 01, 2010, 03:37:10 PM » |
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UljhaneN aur meri tum to baRhayaa na karo
bevajah yuNhee mujhe aur sataayaa na karo
mai to chup hooN meri yaadeN bhee abhee soyee haiN
cheRh ke baat koi mujh ko rulaayaa na karo
jo pareshaan kare dil se khushee bhee cheene
aisee roodaad kabhee mujhko sunaayaa na karo
dil pe jo likkha hai sou baar ubhar aayegaa
rait pe likh ke mera naam mitaayaa na karo
mujhko palkon pe basa rakkha hai to dekhiyegaa
ashq ke dariya me ye aqs bahaayaa na karo
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bahut hi pyar bhari aur mithi si kavita hai mamta ji..bahut khoob........ |
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«Reply #29 on: September 01, 2010, 05:22:42 PM » |
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SAAJID JEE ! US WAQT TO MUJHE HANSEE NAHEE AAYEE LEKIN JAB AAP KEE PRATIKRIYAA PAR NAZAR PADEE TO BARBAS HANSEE AA GAYEE.JO RUKNE KAA NAAM NAHEE LE RAHEE. AAP NE HUMAARE KHAYAALON KO PANKH JO DE DIYE...MAI NE TO BAHUT SANKOCH ME APNE DIL KEE BAAT LIKHNE KAA SAAHAS KIYAA THAA .BAS!LEKIN AAP NE TO HUMAARE SAATH NA JAANE KITANO KO EKAEK HNSANE KE LIYE MAJBOOR KAR DIYAA.......
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