Umar Bhar Zinda Mohabbatein Reh Jaayegi 'Khwaish"

by khwaish on February 23, 2011, 08:31:57 AM
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Dhadkane Bhi Dil mein Dabi Reh Jaayegi
Tu Saath Na Ho To Sirf Tanhaiyan Reh jaayegi

Inn Nigahon Ko Ab Kisi Ki Bhi Talaash Nahi
Mere Ird-Gird Teri Hi parchaiyan Reh jaayegi

Yeh Ishq Bhi Ek Khel Hai Dil ka,Sab Khatam Ho jaaye To kya!!
Dil Mein Zinda Humesha Sirf Chahaten Reh Jaayegi

Yuh To Kuch Bhi Nahi Rehta Yahan Umar Bhar Ke Liye "Khwaish" !!!
Par Agar Pyaar Dil Se Ho To Saath Uss pyaar Ki Yaadein Reh Jaayegi

Tu Mujhse Khafa Ho Kar Bhi kabhi Door Naa Reh Paayega!!!
Sanaatein Mein Bhi Meri Aahatein Saath Reh Jaayegi

"Khwaish" Mohabbat Ek Aisa Jazba Hai Jiska Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Gham Ke Tufaano Mein Bhi Yeh Chalte Rehne Ka Hausla De Jaayegi

Insaan To Aakhir Mein Mar Hi Jaata Hai "Khwaish"!!!
par Umar Bhar Zinda Mohabbatein Reh Jaayegi...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 08:38:02 AM »
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Insaan To Aakhir Mein Mar Hi Jaata Hai "Khwaish"!!!
par Umar Bhar Zinda Mohabbatein Reh Jaayegi...


kya baat he khwaish ji...maja aa gaya..........jese har lafj dil me ghar banata gaya.........bahot khub he ..........wonderful poetry dear...........
apki poetry ko padker ek gajal yaad aa gayi jagjit singh & chitra ji ki yakinan apne bhi suni ho......

"tu nahi to zindagi me aur kya rah jayega
dur tak tanhaiye ka silsila rah jayega."

maja aa gaya khwaish ji........wonderful creation ji

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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 08:50:29 AM »
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Insaan To Aakhir Mein Mar Hi Jaata Hai "Khwaish"!!!
par Umar Bhar Zinda Mohabbatein Reh Jaayegi...


kya baat he khwaish ji...maja aa gaya..........jese har lafj dil me ghar banata gaya.........bahot khub he ..........wonderful poetry dear...........
apki poetry ko padker ek gajal yaad aa gayi jagjit singh & chitra ji ki yakinan apne bhi suni ho......

"tu nahi to zindagi me aur kya rah jayega
dur tak tanhaiye ka silsila rah jayega."

maja aa gaya khwaish ji........wonderful creation ji



"Yuh Bhi Hoga Woh Mujhe Dil Se Bhoola Dega Magar!!
Yeh Bhi Hoga, Khud Ussi mein Ek khala Reh Jaayega!!!
Tu nahi To Zindagi Mein Aur Kya Reh Jaayega..."

Uthkarshji, Yeh Sher mere Sabse Pasandida Sheron Mein Ek hai..I justtttttt Love This Ghazal..

Aur Aapka Tehhhhh dillllllll Se Shukriya Dost,Jo Aapne Pasand farmaya..Yuhi Saath dete Rahiyega... icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 09:16:05 AM »
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wah behad umda poetry hai ji-
mastam post.
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har nazar yahan khatawaar hai ' khuwahish '
       wo na sahi unki yaad hi 'wafa' kar jaayegi !!!
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2011, 11:00:31 AM »
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Tabiyat theek hogayi apki yeh khubsoorat nazm parr kar..
Dost bewaffai pe kayi likhte hai, main bhi likhta hoon mager
mohobat kay jazbe ko appreciate karna, koi mere iss shayar dost se
seekhe..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..kuch seekhne milta hai aur sach batao toh apni
zindagi main ek nayapan lata hoon uss sabak ko dal kar..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Hamesha tariff kay liye lavz kam parrte hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2011, 01:48:17 PM »
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Dhadkane Bhi Dil mein Dabi Reh Jaayegi
Tu Saath Na Ho To Sirf Tanhaiyan Reh jaayegi

Inn Nigahon Ko Ab Kisi Ki Bhi Talaash Nahi
Mere Ird-Gird Teri Hi parchaiyan Reh jaayegi

Yeh Ishq Bhi Ek Khel Hai Dil ka,Sab Khatam Ho jaaye To kya!!
Dil Mein Zinda Humesha Sirf Chahaten Reh Jaayegi

Yuh To Kuch Bhi Nahi Rehta Yahan Umar Bhar Ke Liye "Khwaish" !!!
Par Agar Pyaar Dil Se Ho To Saath Uss pyaar Ki Yaadein Reh Jaayegi

Tu Mujhse Khafa Ho Kar Bhi kabhi Door Naa Reh Paayega!!!
Sanaatein Mein Bhi Meri Aahatein Saath Reh Jaayegi

"Khwaish" Mohabbat Ek Aisa Jazba Hai Jiska Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Gham Ke Tufaano Mein Bhi Yeh Chalte Rehne Ka Hausla De Jaayegi

Insaan To Aakhir Mein Mar Hi Jaata Hai "Khwaish"!!!
par Umar Bhar Zinda Mohabbatein Reh Jaayegi...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut achchhey, Khwaish ji!
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2011, 02:19:42 PM »
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Bahut achchhey, Khwaish ji!

Tehhhhh Dillll Se Shukriya Abdji...

Abd Ji Aapko Yahan Dekhkar Behad Se Bhi Zyaada Khushi Hui Hai..

Abd Ji, Yuhi Hausla afzaai karte rahiyega..aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya icon_flower

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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2011, 02:55:23 PM »
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Tehhhhh Dillll Se Shukriya Abdji...

Abd Ji Aapko Yahan Dekhkar Behad Se Bhi Zyaada Khushi Hui Hai..

Abd Ji, Yuhi Hausla afzaai karte rahiyega..aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya icon_flower



Aapkaa swaagat hai, khwaish ji!
 
Dost key dil mein jo jagah hai, waheen huun qaayam:
Kaash ye zindagee yuun hi waheen guzar jaaye!


                    - abd bundeli

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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2011, 03:20:42 PM »
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bahut hi wadiya khwaish ji..
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«Reply #9 on: February 23, 2011, 07:46:38 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2011, 01:50:35 PM »
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wah behad umda poetry hai ji-
mastam post.
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har nazar yahan khatawaar hai ' khuwahish '
       wo na sahi unki yaad hi 'wafa' kar jaayegi !!!
""
thanx
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Niralaji..

Aur bahut Khoob Sher likha Hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2011, 10:36:33 AM »
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wah khwaishji kamaal... bahut khub....

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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2011, 06:06:24 PM »
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Kamaal ke Shayar ho Khwaish Ji.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
aap dil nikal ke rakh dete ho.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

yu to kuchh bhi nahi rehta yahan umar bhar ke liye..
Par agar Pyar dil se ho to saath uss pyar ki yaade reh jayegi...

lovely poem... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2011, 06:27:05 PM »
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Dhadkane Bhi Dil mein Dabi Reh Jaayegi
Tu Saath Na Ho To Sirf Tanhaiyan Reh jaayegi

Inn Nigahon Ko Ab Kisi Ki Bhi Talaash Nahi
Mere Ird-Gird Teri Hi parchaiyan Reh jaayegi

Yeh Ishq Bhi Ek Khel Hai Dil ka,Sab Khatam Ho jaaye To kya!!
Dil Mein Zinda Humesha Sirf Chahaten Reh Jaayegi

Yuh To Kuch Bhi Nahi Rehta Yahan Umar Bhar Ke Liye "Khwaish" !!!
Par Agar Pyaar Dil Se Ho To Saath Uss pyaar Ki Yaadein Reh Jaayegi

Tu Mujhse Khafa Ho Kar Bhi kabhi Door Naa Reh Paayega!!!
Sanaatein Mein Bhi Meri Aahatein Saath Reh Jaayegi

"Khwaish" Mohabbat Ek Aisa Jazba Hai Jiska Koi Mol Nahi!!!
Gham Ke Tufaano Mein Bhi Yeh Chalte Rehne Ka Hausla De Jaayegi

Insaan To Aakhir Mein Mar Hi Jaata Hai "Khwaish"!!!
par Umar Bhar Zinda Mohabbatein Reh Jaayegi...

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



good one

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