ummed ki lao jagmagati hai..

by shraddha the poetess on August 09, 2013, 12:05:32 PM
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han mai janti hoon,,iss jeevan mei mushkilein to ati hai..
kabhi kabhi gam ki barish bhi hmpr baras jati hai
yahi zindgi kabhi kabhi andheron mei ghiri si nazar aati hai..
har ..k toofanon mei vishwaas ki lau dagmagati hai...
prr zara gorr se dekho ,,,ummeed ki lau tb bhi jagmagati hai....
kale ghane andheron ko cheerti si nazar aati hai
kl tk jo murjha gyi thi,,, wo kaliyaan phir khil jati hai..nayi ummeed ki sugandh s..hr man ko mehkati hai...
har na mano age bado...yahi hmko samjhati hai....
chahe jitna bhi ghana ho andhera ummeed ki lau jagmagaati hai...
ummeed ki lau jagmagati hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2013, 12:24:47 PM »
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acha likha hai shradga ji keep writing
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2013, 12:29:55 PM »
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bahut khoob
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thank u nandbabu ji and sahil ji
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Bahut hi nayaab hai sir. good
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khubsurat behad umda...tumhari soch sach mein qabil-e-tareef hai,.....dheron daad o mubarakbaad gudia.. Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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thank u karan bhaiya......
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very very nice shraddha jee..happy9
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thank u nashwani g..
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Waah waah kya kehne  Applause Applause Applause
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thank u so much.....
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«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2013, 02:52:46 PM »
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Bahut badhiya
vishwaas ki lau dagmagati hai.. Applause Applause

khayaloN aur kalpanaoN ko kaaghaj par likhne ka talent hai aapme. bas unhe sahi jaama pahnaane ki zaroorat hai.. Koshish jaari rakhiye.
Improvement requires comparison.
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2013, 02:57:11 PM »
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Quote from: shraddha the poetess on August 09, 2013, 12:05:32 PM

haan mai janti hoon,, iss jeevan me mushkilein to aati hai..
kabhi kabhi gham ki barish bhi humpar baras jati hai...

yahi zindgi kabhi kabhi andheron mei ghiri si nazar aati hai..
haar.. ke toofanon mei vishwaas ki lau dagmagati hai...

par zara gour se dekho,,, ummeed ki lau tab bhi jagmagati hai....
kale ghane andheron ko cheerti si nazar aati hai...

kal tak jo murjha gayi thi,,, wo kaliyaan phir khil jati hai..
nayi ummeed ki sugandh se..har mann ko mehkati hai...

haar na mano aage badho...yahi humko samjhati hai....
chahe jitna bhi ghana ho andhera ummeed ki lau jagmagaati hai...

ummeed ki lau jagmagati hai.........

bahut bahut khoob shrddha ji.. keep writing.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2013, 08:21:17 PM »
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