Ummed

by naaz4 on August 28, 2013, 01:06:21 AM
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Teri yadoo k sagar Ankho me abhi zinda hai
Abhi chahat ka teri wo pahla asar zinda hai.

Mujhe mehsoos hoti hai teri batein ab tak,
Is khamoshi me bhi wo beeta paher zinda hai.

Dil bhatakta hai yu hi kisi gumnaan si galiyo me,
In syaah si raaton me ummed-e-saher zinda hai.

hothon pe na aaya jo hazaar koshisho par bhi,
Ashq ban k wo izhaar nazro me abhi zinda hai.

Tere jaane se jo barpa tha kabhi seene pe mere,
Wahi dard-o-sitam  kaher banke abhi zinda hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2013, 01:55:30 AM »
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Nice One.
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2013, 03:08:39 AM »
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Naazu acha likha hai,chand lamhon ko sadiyo me bakhubi kalambadhh kia hai,  khush raho! Ek rau!
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2013, 09:49:00 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2013, 12:25:03 PM »
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bahut khoob aur swagat hai
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2013, 01:11:17 PM »
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Dil bhatakta hai yu hi kisi gumnaan si galiyo me,
In syaah si raaton me ummed-e-saher zinda hai.

Welcome Banner Naaz to YOindia family.

bohut bohut achha likha hai,,,zabardast,
keep writing
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2013, 01:15:03 PM »
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nice sharing...
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2013, 01:37:09 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2013, 02:54:56 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2013, 03:27:59 PM »
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welcom to yoindia family naaz ji..

bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2013, 03:52:09 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2013, 06:34:35 PM »
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Thankyou all for your likes
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