Ummid-e-wafa

by Tasleem ahmad Tasleem on March 30, 2010, 05:15:14 AM
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saba le ja payaam us be khabar tak
jo louta hi nahi ja ke idhar tak

shab-e-gham roshni hi roshni thi
diya jalta raha gham ka seher tak

hazaaron gham gusaar aye hien lekin
he mera dard bas mere jigar tak

mujhe janat dikhai de rahi thi
jab aaya hath maan ka mere sar tak


bas ek unki jhalak dekhi thi tasleem
rahi na phir mujhe apni khabar tak
 
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2010, 06:02:48 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Tasleem ji,great creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2010, 06:27:57 AM »
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Welcome to Yoindia Tasleem sahab. Aapki ye pahli ghazal bataur tarruf bahut achhi lagi. Bahut purkashish aur lutfandoz takhleeq hai ye aapki. Tarruf ke liye apne mutalliq kuchh aur bhi batayen to achha lagega.

mujhe janat dikhai de rahi thi
jab aaya hath maan ka mere sar tak

Ye sher bahut behtreen aur lajawab hai. Aage bhi aapki ghazals padhne ki tamnna rahegi. Meri bhi ek koshish dekhen-

Ho kitni bhi wasee duniya,mujhe kya
Mera to har safar hai tere ghar tak
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2010, 06:34:37 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Tasleemji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2010, 07:23:46 AM »
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 hello2 Aap sabhi hazraat ka behad shukr guzaar hun ke is nacheez ki ghazal par aapne nazr-e-saani daali allah se dua go hun aage bhi aap ki khidmat kar sakun jahan tak taaruff ki baat he to is bande ko Tasleem kehte hein.

shayri ke asatza mein awwal naam Tanveer khatolvi he jinki barkat se qalam ko pakadna sikha. hazrat aabpashi mehakma mein mulazim the aur behtreen shayer bhi

filwaqt Dr.mukarram adna ishqaabadi sahab darsgah se juda hun jo meerut mein mukeem hein.

apne baare mein bata raha hun ke nachees ek telecom company mein bator Warehouse Manager kaam karta hun wo bhi Ghalib sahab ki Dilli mein.

Shukraan
Tasleem Ahmad Tasleem

 
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2010, 07:37:30 AM »
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Tarruf dene ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Tasleem sahab. Ummeed karta hun ke aapki takhleeqat ko padhne ka sarf haasil hota rahega.
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