...~~Unexpected Death~~...

by HumTum on June 03, 2005, 02:19:05 PM
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She seemed bright and happy
Everyone would noticed her smile
But deep down inside of her
She was in denial

Every morning she would wake
To her pillow soaked in tears
Faked her smile so
Her friends wouldn’t see her fears.

Some days she had cuts and bruises
That she couldn’t truly explain
She knew they were from her daddy
But she didn’t want people to know her pain

Finally one dreary morning
Her brother found her dead
Slit her suffering throat
While she was in her freezing bed

She seemed happy to everyone around her
But her smile was just bleak and fake
Now she’s six feet underground
Because her pain, she could no longer take
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2005, 02:22:27 PM »
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Wah Hum Tum ji.....very nicely expressed.......kudos to you dear..........

The pain in life are a matter of chance,
You have to be prepared,plan ur stance,

Leaving ur life is never a solution,
Fighting all odds is a lifetime resolution...
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2005, 02:29:56 PM »
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nice work by u both............................................. .
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2005, 03:46:25 PM »
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beautyful humtum!!!!!! itni sad  sad5 ....

gud one too creator!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2005, 12:35:22 AM »
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thanx creator...... pandit .... n .... Meena  !!!
n nice one creator !!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2005, 04:58:26 AM »
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Its very nice and touching Humtum.............nice Amit......!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 04, 2005, 12:27:04 PM »
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Thanx Talat ji ..........................................
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2005, 05:12:27 PM »
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She seemed bright and happy
Everyone would noticed her smile
But deep down inside of her
She was in denial

Every morning she would wake
To her pillow soaked in tears
Faked her smile so
Her friends wouldn’t see her fears.

Some days she had cuts and bruises
That she couldn’t truly explain
She knew they were from her daddy
But she didn’t want people to know her pain

Finally one dreary morning
Her brother found her dead
Slit her suffering throat
While she was in her freezing bed

She seemed happy to everyone around her
But her smile was just bleak and fake
Now she’s six feet underground
Because her pain, she could no longer take



beautiful humtum,kya baat hai.
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2005, 07:41:27 AM »
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Thanks Nidhi ..............................................
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2005, 07:46:23 AM »
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She seemed bright and happy
Everyone would noticed her smile
But deep down inside of her
She was in denial

Every morning she would wake
To her pillow soaked in tears
Faked her smile so
Her friends wouldn’t see her fears.

Some days she had cuts and bruises
That she couldn’t truly explain
She knew they were from her daddy
But she didn’t want people to know her pain

Finally one dreary morning
Her brother found her dead
Slit her suffering throat
While she was in her freezing bed

She seemed happy to everyone around her
But her smile was just bleak and fake
Now she’s six feet underground
Because her pain, she could no longer take



Very nice HumTum.........................
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