Uski Bulandiyon Ko Yaad Karegi Yeh Duniya "Khwaish"

by khwaish on December 15, 2010, 03:36:23 PM
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Kuch Baaton Se Aaj Mann Dukhi Hai,
 Bas Mann Ko Halka karne Ke liye lafzon Ka Sahara Le Raha Hoon....
Zaroor Padhiyega..


Khud Aag Lagata Hai Apne Ghar Ko Basaakar
Kya Paaoge Apni Hasti Ko Yuh Mitaakar

Muskuraoge To Yeh Duniya Saath Muskurayegi!!!
Kuch Nahi Milta Yahan Tanhai Mein Ashq Bahakaar

Jab Tak Saans Le rahe ho Yeh Duniya Yaad Rakhti Hai!!
varna,Kaun Yaad Rakhta Hai Kisi Ki Arthi Par Phool Chada Kar

Kuch Khwaishe, kuch Aarzuue Ko Dil mein Zinda Zaroor Rakhna!!!
Humne Dekha Hai,Mar Jaate Hai Log Khwaisho Ko Mann Mein Dabaakar

Jo Aaj Tere Paas Hai Woh Kal Kisi Aur ka Hoga....!!!!
Kya Hasil Hai Eh Dost Apne Hi Ghar mein Yeh Deewar Uthakar!!

Uski Bulandiyon Ko Yaad Karegi yeh Duniya,
Jo Chalta Tha Humesha Sar Apna Jhuka Kar!!!

Yahan kisi Se Kuch paane Ki umeed karna Chodd Bhi De "Khwaish"
Jo Maangna hai,Jaa Maang Sirf Uss Khuda Ke Darr Pe Jaakar
 
                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2010, 04:00:07 PM »
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"Uski bulandiyon ki yaad karegi yeh duniya Khwaish,
Jo chalta tha hamesha sar apna juka kar.."

Mere dost kya baat hai apki..
Kisi topic par hi kyun na likho, bas chaa jate ho..
kafi dard jhalak raha hai iss nazm main jo main mehsoos kar sakta hoon..
wakei dil se nikla hua maloom hota hai..
Bahaut khoob..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2010, 04:04:23 PM »
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bahut hi achha likha hai aapne... Khawish ji jeene ki ek raah di... aap humesha khush raho... likhte raho....


dua meri kaash ke mukammal ho jaaye
tere har gham ko mera pata mil jaaye...

jeena bhi tere dard se chaha maine
marte wakt bhi tera ek zakhm mil jaaye

kya hua karta hai koi fanaa kisi par
jo chahta hai use wo sab kuch mil jaaye

mujhe de andhera gam ka aur kuch nahin
har roshni meri aaj andhere se mil jaaye,

kisi raah ki dhool ban gaye tum 'Intezar'
karo duaa ki Intezar is mitti me mil jaaye... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2010, 04:13:21 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Intezar jee..!

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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2010, 04:13:58 PM »
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"Uski bulandiyon ki yaad karegi yeh duniya Khwaish,
Jo chalta tha hamesha sar apna juka kar.."

Mere dost kya baat hai apki..
Kisi topic par hi kyun na likho, bas chaa jate ho..
kafi dard jhalak raha hai iss nazm main jo main mehsoos kar sakta hoon..
wakei dil se nikla hua maloom hota hai..
Bahaut khoob..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!


Humesha Ki tarah Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Bhai Rahim!!!

Ab To yuh Mehsoos Hota Hai Ke Aisi Koi nazm, Koi Kavita Nahi,jahan Mere Dost Aapka Comment naa Ho, Ab mujhe Aapke Comments Ki Aadat Si ho gayi Hai..Aapka bahutttttttttttttt bahuttttttttttttt Shukriya Bhai..

Aur Haan!!! Kuch Baatein Aisi thi Jisse Maann Dukha Tha Aur Main Yeh Likh Gaya,isliye Vaakai Yeh Dil Se Hi likha Gaya Tha..
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2010, 04:16:24 PM »
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bahut hi achha likha hai aapne... Khawish ji jeene ki ek raah di... aap humesha khush raho... likhte raho....


dua meri kaash ke mukammal ho jaaye
tere har gham ko mera pata mil jaaye...

jeena bhi tere dard se chaha maine
marte wakt bhi tera ek zakhm mil jaaye

kya hua karta hai koi fanaa kisi par
jo chahta hai use wo sab kuch mil jaaye

mujhe de andhera gam ka aur kuch nahin
har roshni meri aaj andhere se mil jaaye,

kisi raah ki dhool ban gaye tum 'Intezar'
karo duaa ki Intezar is mitti me mil jaaye... !

Intezar !


Bahut Bahut Khoob Intezaar Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Likha Hai Aapne..Aapki lekhni waise Hi mujhe Bahut Pasand Hai, Aapka Teh dil Se Shukriya Jo Aapne APne Kuch lafz Yahan Bikhere..

Bahut Khoob!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2010, 04:27:08 PM »
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Kuch Baaton Se Aaj Mann Dukhi Hai, Bas Mann Ko Halka karne Ke liye lafzon Ka Sahara Le Raha Hoon....Zaroor Padhiyega..


Khud Aag Lagata Hai Apne Ghar Ko Basaakar
Kya Paaoge Apni Hasti Ko Yuh Mitaakar

Muskuraoge To Yeh Duniya Saath Muskurayegi!!!
Kuch Nahi Milta Yahan Tanhai Mein Ashq Bahakaar

Jab Tak Saans Le rahe ho Yeh Duniya Yaad Rakhti Hai!!
varna, Kaun Yaad Rakhta Hai Kisi Ki Arthi Par Phool Chada Kar

Kuch Khwaishe, kuch Aarzuue Ko Dil mein Zinda Zaroor Rakhna!!!
Humne Dekha Hai!!!Mar Jaate Hai Log Khwaisho Ko Mann Mein Dabaakar

Jo Aaj Tere Paas Hai Woh Kal Kisi Aur ka Hoga!!!
Kya Haasil Hai Eh Dost!! Apne Hi Ghar mein Yeh Deewar Uthakar!!!!

Uski Bulandiyon Ko Yaad Karegi yeh Duniya "Khwaish"
Jo Chalta Tha Humesha Sar Apna Jhuka Kar!!!

Yahan kisi Se Kuch paane Ki umeed karna Chodd Bhi De Eh Bande!!!
Jo Maangna hai,Jaa Maang Sirf Uss Khuda Ke Darr Paa Jaakar
 
                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut wadiya likheya hai khwaish ji..very encouraging...loved it...take care...
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«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2010, 04:32:28 PM »
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Bahut wadiya likheya hai khwaish ji..very encouraging...loved it...take care...

Tuada Tehhhh Dilll To Shukriya Geetji..

Humesha Inj hi Saath Dende Reha Karo... icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2010, 04:49:10 PM »
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dil se shukriya Rahim bhai...

Intezar !

Bahaut khoob Intezar jee..!

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«Reply #9 on: December 15, 2010, 05:04:33 PM »
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Shukriya Khwaish ji... aapne humara likhna pasand kiya... tahe dil se shukriya... bas saath rahiye yun hi...

Intezar !

Bahut Bahut Khoob Intezaar Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Likha Hai Aapne..Aapki lekhni waise Hi mujhe Bahut Pasand Hai, Aapka Teh dil Se Shukriya Jo Aapne APne Kuch lafz Yahan Bikhere..

Bahut Khoob!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2010, 05:33:36 PM »
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dil ko chu liya aapne Khwahish ji---sachhai se rubaru bhi karwa dia..
bahut khubsurat..
khus rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: December 15, 2010, 06:48:32 PM »
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Kuch Baaton Se Aaj Mann Dukhi Hai, Bas Mann Ko Halka karne Ke liye lafzon Ka Sahara Le Raha Hoon....Zaroor Padhiyega..


Khud Aag Lagata Hai Apne Ghar Ko Basaakar
Kya Paaoge Apni Hasti Ko Yuh Mitaakar

Muskuraoge To Yeh Duniya Saath Muskurayegi!!!
Kuch Nahi Milta Yahan Tanhai Mein Ashq Bahakaar

Jab Tak Saans Le rahe ho Yeh Duniya Yaad Rakhti Hai!!
varna, Kaun Yaad Rakhta Hai Kisi Ki Arthi Par Phool Chada Kar

Kuch Khwaishe, kuch Aarzuue Ko Dil mein Zinda Zaroor Rakhna!!!
Humne Dekha Hai!!!Mar Jaate Hai Log Khwaisho Ko Mann Mein Dabaakar

Jo Aaj Tere Paas Hai Woh Kal Kisi Aur ka Hoga!!!
Kya Haasil Hai Eh Dost!! Apne Hi Ghar mein Yeh Deewar Uthakar!!!!

Uski Bulandiyon Ko Yaad Karegi yeh Duniya "Khwaish"
Jo Chalta Tha Humesha Sar Apna Jhuka Kar!!!

Yahan kisi Se Kuch paane Ki umeed karna Chodd Bhi De Eh Bande!!!
Jo Maangna hai,Jaa Maang Sirf Uss Khuda Ke Darr Paa Jaakar
 
                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut hi umda peshkah hai aap ki Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #12 on: December 16, 2010, 07:11:03 AM »
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Shukriya Khwaish ji... aapne humara likhna pasand kiya... tahe dil se shukriya... bas saath rahiye yun hi...

Intezar !


Ji Bilkul!!!! icon_flower
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Bahut hi umda peshkah hai aap ki Khwaish Ji



Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajeshji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2010, 02:23:12 PM »
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Kuch Baaton Se Aaj Mann Dukhi Hai, Bas Mann Ko Halka karne Ke liye lafzon Ka Sahara Le Raha Hoon....Zaroor Padhiyega..


Khud Aag Lagata Hai Apne Ghar Ko Basaakar
Kya Paaoge Apni Hasti Ko Yuh Mitaakar

Muskuraoge To Yeh Duniya Saath Muskurayegi!!!
Kuch Nahi Milta Yahan Tanhai Mein Ashq Bahakaar

Jab Tak Saans Le rahe ho Yeh Duniya Yaad Rakhti Hai!!
varna, Kaun Yaad Rakhta Hai Kisi Ki Arthi Par Phool Chada Kar

Kuch Khwaishe, kuch Aarzuue Ko Dil mein Zinda Zaroor Rakhna!!!
Humne Dekha Hai!!!Mar Jaate Hai Log Khwaisho Ko Mann Mein Dabaakar

Jo Aaj Tere Paas Hai Woh Kal Kisi Aur ka Hoga!!!
Kya Haasil Hai Eh Dost!! Apne Hi Ghar mein Yeh Deewar Uthakar!!!!

Uski Bulandiyon Ko Yaad Karegi yeh Duniya "Khwaish"
Jo Chalta Tha Humesha Sar Apna Jhuka Kar!!!

Yahan kisi Se Kuch paane Ki umeed karna Chodd Bhi De Eh Bande!!!
Jo Maangna hai,Jaa Maang Sirf Uss Khuda Ke Darr Paa Jaakar
 
                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


kuch gehraiyain shabdon mein pironkar nikhar aati hain
aapke shabd unhi mein se hain

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