Usne door rehna ka mashvra bhi likha hay ,

by RAJ SOLANKI on December 12, 2013, 03:24:05 AM
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Usne door rehna ka
mashvra bhi likha hay ,
saath hi muhabat ka
wasta bhi likha hay ,
us ne yeh bhi likha hay
mere ghar nahi ana ,
aur saaf saaf lafzon mein
raasta bhi likha hay , <
kuch harof likhe hain
zabt ki naseehat mein ,
kuch haroof likhe hain
zabt ki naseehat mein ,
kuch haroof mein usne
hoasla bhi likha hay ,
shukriya bhi likha hai
dil se yaad krne ka ,
dil se dil ka hay kitna
fasla bhi likha hay ,
kia usay likhen ,
kia usay kehein ,
jis ne be-jaan kar kay
jaan bhi likha hay ,!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2013, 05:24:52 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah khoobsoorat nazm Solanki jee, bahut achhi lagi mujhe, yuN hi likhte rahiye. DheroN daad aur Rau meri taraf se jo ki baad meN de paauNga.
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2013, 08:13:14 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2013, 01:52:44 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah... bahut hi pyaare ehsaas se saji hai aapki nazm... dheron dheron daaaaaaaad raj ji...
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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2013, 02:00:16 PM »
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bahut khoooooooob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2013, 03:36:04 PM »
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buhat khoob...

RAJ SOLANKI jee! agar ye poem aap ki apni likhi nahi hay, tu isay shared poetry men hona chahiyay, lekin agar ye aap ki apni takhleeq hay tu is shuhrat-yafta poem k liyay hamari taraf say daad qabool kejay...
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2013, 04:39:58 PM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2013, 08:19:54 PM »
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वाह....खूब कहा....
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2013, 07:56:45 PM »
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