uss ne jee bhar ke rulia mujhay.....................KAsh

by Sanjeev kash on November 02, 2011, 08:39:57 AM
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Kabhi Payaar Kiya  uss ne kabhi thukraya mujhay
Kabhi kaha khuda kabhi pathaar bataya mujhay

Kabhi kaHA zindgi hoon kabhi bataya saanse aapni
Phir bhi dekho saath aapne wo na chala paya mujhay

Kabhi mere tasavoor se hi jiske Din Raat bante thay
Dekh kar muh fer liya  aur ajnabi bataya mujhay

Kaya Ajeeb Rang  tha ye uski mohabaat ka yaroo
Jab bhi mila…… ussne jee bhar ke rulia mujhay

Kab ka Rukhsat  usse zindgi se kar diya hota
Jab bhi caha mere dil ne bhi thukraya mujhay


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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2011, 09:00:46 AM »
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sanjeev ji bade he behtreen dhang se aapne is gazal ko nibhaayaa hai. waakai aap taareef ke mushtahaq hain. mubaarak ho.God bless you...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2011, 12:32:44 PM »
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  Applause Applause
  bahut khoob,sanjeevkash ji.
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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2011, 01:26:16 PM »
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Bahaut Khoob Kash jee..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2011, 05:28:07 PM »
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Vaah Vaah Sanjeev ji
Bahut gahre ehsaas baya.n kiye kiye..
Dil me ek hook si uthti hai..padhte padhte...
ankho nam ho gai..Kya ajeeb rang tha...
bahut dino ke baad apne dil se likha hai..mubarak ho..
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2011, 06:35:29 PM »
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Kaash Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab Masha Allaah ki gazab ki kalaam kahi hai aapne..
Janab gazab ke khayaal aur umdaa gehrai bhare lafzoN
meiN khub kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar dili daad O mubarakbad ke haqdaar hai
janab.. Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile



Kabhi Payaar Kiya  uss ne kabhi thukraya mujhay
Kabhi kaha khuda kabhi pathaar bataya mujhay

Waah waah janab Kia kahne behad khoob janab..
Kafi achcha matla kaha hai aur behad khub khayaal raha daad.. Usual Smile   


Kabhi kaHA zindgi hoon kabhi bataya saanse aapni
Phir bhi dekho saath aapne wo na chala paya mujhay

Masha Allaah janab.. kia kahne waah janab kafi
gehra sher kaha hai.. behad khoob daad daad daad.. Usual Smile   


Kabhi mere tasavoor se hi jiske Din Raat bante thay
Dekh kar muh fer liya  aur ajnabi bataya mujhay

Waah kia kahne janab.. aik aik khayaal ko dil
se adaa kiya hai aapne.. jo kafi dilfareb ashaar pesh ho rahe
hai.. bahut khoob janab daad daad daad...     


Kaya Ajeeb Rang  tha ye uski mohabaat ka yaroo
Jab bhi mila…… ussne jee bhar ke rulia mujhay

Bahut khoob janab... achcha sher hai daad.. Usual Smile   

Kab ka Rukhsat  usse zindgi se kar diya hota
Jab bhi caha mere dil ne bhi thukraya mujhay

Waah waah waah kia baat hai janab bahut khoob..
behad masoom aur umdaa sher kaha hai.. janab daad daad daad.. Usual Smile   




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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaash sahaab aapke kalam ki dhar aur khayaaloN meiN
aayi gehrai ko dekhkar badi khushi huyi... Mubarak ho janab aap ke
urooj ka mousam aa gaya hai... Usual Smile

Aise hi khoob kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye.. Mehfil ko roshan karte
rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   

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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2011, 08:10:14 AM »
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kya khoob likha hai kaash ji...lagta hai aaj palko ki nami ka din hai....
huch beete palon ki aur rukh kar diya aapki kalaam ne....behtar
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2011, 12:39:53 PM »
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sanjeev ji bade he behtreen dhang se aapne is gazal ko nibhaayaa hai. waakai aap taareef ke mushtahaq hain. mubaarak ho.God bless you...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Siani Sahab
bahut bahut shukriya janab
aap ne aapna samye diya aur humari kalam ko pasand kiya
jo bhi likh patta hoon sab aap logoo ke diye husle ki wazeh se hai
bus huslqa dete rahye aur jahaan zaruri ho samjate rahyega

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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2011, 03:01:48 AM »
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  Applause Applause
  bahut khoob,sanjeevkash ji.

Saddiqui sahab bahut bahut shukriya janab aap ne apna kimti samay humeh diya
Aur humara husla badaya, aage bhi aapna karambanaye rakhyega

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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2011, 11:49:40 AM »
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Bahaut Khoob Kash jee..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!

Aapna waqt dene aur humara husla badane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya rahim ji
yhoon hi saath dete rahyega aur humara husla badate rahyega


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«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2011, 03:17:33 AM »
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Vaah Vaah Sanjeev ji
Bahut gahre ehsaas baya.n kiye kiye..
Dil me ek hook si uthti hai..padhte padhte...
ankho nam ho gai..Kya ajeeb rang tha...
bahut dino ke baad apne dil se likha hai..mubarak ho..

MKV. ji App ka bahut bahut shukriya Janab
Jo Aap ne humari kalam ko pasand kiya
aur aapna waqt diya ,MKv Ji Likhta to dil se hoon Par abhi Utna mahir nahi hoon Ki Aapne zazbatoo'n ko sahi dhang se pesh karna aata ho.
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bus aap log saath dete rahye shyaad mein is layak ho jaoo'n ki aapne zazbatoo'n ko shbdoo mein dhalna kuch had tak sikh paoo'n

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«Reply #11 on: November 05, 2011, 03:23:21 AM »
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Kaash Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab Masha Allaah ki gazab ki kalaam kahi hai aapne..
Janab gazab ke khayaal aur umdaa gehrai bhare lafzoN
meiN khub kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar dili daad O mubarakbad ke haqdaar hai
janab.. Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile



 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kaash sahaab aapke kalam ki dhar aur khayaaloN meiN
aayi gehrai ko dekhkar badi khushi huyi... Mubarak ho janab aap ke
urooj ka mousam aa gaya hai... Usual Smile

Aise hi khoob kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye.. Mehfil ko roshan karte
rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   



Aadaab PArwaaz saheb!

Sir Bahut Dino baad aap ke esse comment aapni kalam par paa kar main bahut khush hua Dil ko tasali hui ki kuch essa likh paya jo aap ko pasand aaya..
Saheb ek request hai aap jab bhi humari kalam padhte haI humari kamiyaa'n bhi batta diya kijye ta ki hum un ko sudhar sake.. agar aap batayenge tabhi hum kuch sikh payenge. umeed karta hoon aap humeh aage se humari kamiyoon ke baare mein zaroor batayenge

aap ne appna waqt humeh diya aur saraha usske liye Bahut Bahut shukriya janab.


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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2011, 07:22:42 AM »
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kya khoob likha hai kaash ji...lagta hai aaj palko ki nami ka din hai....
huch beete palon ki aur rukh kar diya aapki kalaam ne....behtar

Nikhaar Ji Aapna kimti waqt dene ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
Aap ne phir se humara husla badaya hai usske liye bhi shukriya
 yhoon hi Aapna saath banaye rakhyega icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: December 01, 2011, 08:29:47 AM »
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Thanx. I.W ji
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