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Re: vb jee barayay farokht (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2010, 09:36:06 AM »

ufffffffffff.......... ye andaaz-e-bayaan... sambhalke ...kisi ki jaan na le le... aapki peshkash ke baare me kya karun... aap bahut lambe lambe geet likhte hain par ek bhi line me aisa nahi lagta ki bor ho rahe ho... aapke geet padhte hain to lagta hai ki bas chalti jaaye chalti jaaye... bahut bahut pyaara geet likha hai aapne Vb ji.. bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki... kamaal ka likha hai aapne.... dil khush ho gaya padhke... bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: vb jee barayay farokht (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2010, 02:57:10 PM »

vb ji
sach me ye padhke bht kuch feel hua kuch likha hai..bura na maniyega..bht kuch uulljullul hai isme...lekin bas aapka geet padhke jawab dene ka dil kiya aur usi tone me likh diya...meri badtamizi maaf kijiyega....aap sabse padhne k pehle hi sorryyyyyy jiiiiiiiii.......galat lage to bata dena ya direct dlt kar dena....

Ae ladke zara sunna to
Kya naam hai tera VB na
Kya bech raha hai yahan pe tu
Kuch adhure geet aur gazlein na

Dikha mujhe bhi dikha zara
Ye nafrat se kya milta hai
Tu kis se nafrat ko taulta hai
Aur kya kya bechta firta hai

Achcha to ye mahobbat k
Ansune adhure khwaab hain
Jinko tune dekha kabhi tha
Ye wo ankahe tere dil k raaz hain

Aree jaa re inki keemat to
Koi bhi taul nahin sakta
Ye jo bematlab ki mahobbat hai
Inki koi keemat laga nahin sakta

Meri nafrat to bht hi keemti hai
Tere geet iske layak nahin
Koi khareedega kyun inko
Jab inki koi bhi aukaat nahin

Jis haseen k liye likhe the tune
ye pyaar me dube rangeen gazal
jab usko hi inka ehsaas nahin
to fir ye ksiike bhi kaam k nahin

main kyun khareedun inko bol
kya ye mujhko wo sukun de sakte hain
jisne mujhe barbaad kiya tha
kya usko sharminda kar sakte hain,,,??


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Re: vb jee barayay farokht (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2010, 03:09:43 PM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji.. bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai.. thode gusse me jarur likha hai par mastammm likha hai.. mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya.. aapki shayari ki ek khaasiyat hai ki kisi ke bhi lay me shaili me likh lete hai... sach me bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. too good hai ji... u r the best ji... ek dum mastammmmmmmm reeeeeeeee....!!!


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Re: vb jee barayay farokht (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2010, 04:56:42 PM »

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.........kya mast reply kiye hain aap vb ji.......
ab kaise roken khudko tareef karne se kahiye........

palti maar lete hain wapas........

aise kaise kisi aur ko yun
aap apne nagme bechenge
humne inhe dil se padha hai
koi aur inhe kyun khareedenge

hai inme jo jazbaat bhare
unki apni ek alag kahani hai
inse judi na jane hi kitni
alag si ek prem kahani hai

hum hi inko khareedenge aur
inhe fir hum gungunayenge
mehfil me naam kamayenge
aur aapke kisse sunayenge

wo badi haseen shaam hogi
jab hothon pe aapke geet honge
log kahenge waah ji waaahh
aur charche har mehfil me honge

tab shayad wo bhi ye jaanegi
kya baat hai tere nagmon me
tab shayad wo pehchengi
kya dard raha tere dil me

uss din wo pachhtayegi jab
har lub par tera naam hoga
kise thukra diya maine hai
usko iska tab ehsaas hoga

ye dard aur pyaar se bhare nagme
jab gunjenge har mehfil me
gungunayegi har jawan dhadkan
aur lubon pe aapka hi naam hoga...!!!


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Re: vb jee barayay farokht (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2010, 05:28:39 PM »

aapne pasand kiya wahi bht hai hamare liye..tareefon ki zarurat nahin hai ji...
aap likhte hi itna achhc ahai k apne aap flow mw likha jata hai..

thnx aapne pasand kiya isly aur saraha isly..


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Re: vb jee barayay farokht (by vb)

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Re: vb jee barayay farokht (by vb)

«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2010, 09:59:19 AM »

ek aur zabardast peshkash aapki Kasak ji...ufffffffffff.. qahar dhaa dete ho aap bhi kabhi kabhi...!!!


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