vb tu nahi ayay? (by vb)

by vb on February 15, 2013, 02:25:59 PM
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Ik daastaan dard ki aaghoshe main chhupayay
Logo tumharay sheher main, vb tu nahi ayay?

Hathon men ho ge bottle, aur chaak garebaan hen
Maaloom bhe hay kunkar, wo itnay pareshan hen?
Apni he duaaon par, shayad wo pashemaan hen
Hulya hay divaanon sa, koi aur kya batayay
Logo tumharay sheher main, vb tu nahi ayay?

Muddat huvi na dekha, un sa kabhi kahin par
Aankhon men hen samandar or chand hay jabin par
Aflaak say hiraasaan, bisraam hay zameen par
Bethay tu kahin hon gay, jholi kahin phelayay
Logo tumharay sheher main, vb tu nahi ayay?

Dekho tu zara jaa kar, ye kon ro raha hay?
Lehjay main dard kitna mehsoos ho raha hay
Ye kis ka naam lay kar, aansoo piro raha hay?
Wo jaa chuka hay shayad, koi tu dhoond layay
Logo tumharay sheher main, vb tu nahi ayay?

Kehtay hen ‘maut’ mujh ko, main un ko dhoondti hoon
Kya main bhe bay-wafa hoon? Tum sub say poochhti hoon?
Main un k ashk saaray, aanchal say poonchhti hoon
Kehna k mujh say mil len, gar ab k nazar ayay
Logo tumharay sheher main, vb tu nahi ayay?
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2013, 03:13:40 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2013, 03:36:39 PM »
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likha bohot khoob hai jnab
par kuch shabdo.n ko padne mai dikatt hoti hai
pls correct karen
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2013, 02:39:52 PM »
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buhat shukriya aap sub ka...

roy jee! maloom nahi aap ka ishara kis taraf hay. hamen itna pata hay k is ki beher buhat tooti huvi hay... jaga jaga say.... is ki correction hamaray bus men nahi.. itnay achhay shair nahi hen hum... maafi chahtay hen....
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