Veerana Hua Chaman

by kittoo on September 06, 2013, 06:39:06 PM
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Hamne Dekha hai Asmaan ko chamakte huey
Hamne sooraj ko dekha hai dhadhakte huey
Hamne suna hai Sinho ko garajte huey
Bahaaron ko dekha hai mehakte huey
Chandni ho chuki hai ab dhumil
Khushboo baharon ki ho chuki ojhal
Kisne badla hai iin nazaaron ko
Raat ke sannate mein chamakte sitaro ko
Phool bahaaron mein khil rahe ab bhi ‘RANJAN’
Mehakte phoolo ki khushboo se veeran hua upvan
Kisne badla hai iis Upvan ke nazaaron ko
Kaun chahega ujde baag ki bahaaron ko
So gaya Maali bhi thakkar nazaare samete huey
Le gaye loot kar lutere maali ke sunhare sapne
Na raha baag, na bachi bahaaron ki masti
Bach gayee jo kaliyan, wo darr se hain sahmi sahmi
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2013, 06:40:43 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waah waah bahut khoob
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Bahut achcha likhe ho kittoo ji... dheron daad..
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2013, 07:43:23 PM »
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shandaar aur jandaar, waaaaah hi waaaah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2013, 08:29:26 PM »
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Kittoo ji Jandar-Shadar,Bus Tahi Kahna Hai.
Hamne Dekha hai Asmaan ko chamakte huey
Hamne sooraj ko dekha hai dhadhakte huey
Hamne suna hai Sinho ko garajte huey
Bahaaron ko dekha hai mehakte huey
Chandni ho chuki hai ab dhumil
Khushboo baharon ki ho chuki ojhal
Kisne badla hai iin nazaaron ko
Raat ke sannate mein chamakte sitaro ko
Phool bahaaron mein khil rahe ab bhi ‘RANJAN’
Mehakte phoolo ki khushboo se veeran hua upvan
Kisne badla hai iis Upvan ke nazaaron ko
Kaun chahega ujde baag ki bahaaron ko
So gaya Maali bhi thakkar nazaare samete huey
Le gaye loot kar lutere maali ke sunhare sapne
Na raha baag, na bachi bahaaron ki masti
Bach gayee jo kaliyan, wo darr se hain sahmi sahmi
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2013, 10:47:09 PM »
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nice poem , kittoo ji.
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2013, 11:22:24 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2013, 11:10:59 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2013, 04:59:50 PM »
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Hamne Dekha hai Asmaan ko chamakte huey
Hamne sooraj ko dekha hai dhadhakte huey

Hamne suna hai Sinho ko garajte huey
Bahaaron ko dekha hai mehakte huey

Chandni ho chuki hai ab dhumil
Khushboo baharon ki ho chuki ojhal

Kisne badla hai iin nazaaron ko
Raat ke sannate mein chamakte sitaro ko

Phool bahaaron mein khil rahe ab bhi ‘RANJAN’
Mehakte phoolo ki khushboo se veeran hua upvan

Kisne badla hai iis Upvan ke nazaaron ko
Kaun chahega ujde baag ki bahaaron ko

So gaya Maali bhi thakkar nazaare samete huey
Le gaye loot kar lutere maali ke sunhare sapne

Na raha baag, na bachi bahaaron ki masti
Bach gayee jo kaliyan, wo darr se hain sahmi sahmi


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