Vo barsat ki raat...

by brokenbyluv on July 06, 2010, 06:00:47 PM
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Zor se barsaat poori raat barasti rahi,
aur terre deed ko merri nigahe tarasti rahi,

thandi hawayo sang bundo ki aawaz gungunati rahi,
merri dhadkano mein basi ek aah tujhe bulati rahi,

jab baarish ki bundo k kuch chinto ne merre chehre ko chhua,
tab terri ankho mein chhupi nami ka mujhe ehsas hua,

mausam tou hum dono k paas ek jaisa tha,
per na terre ansuo ko barsat chhupa payi aur merra haal main kya kahu ki kaisa tha,

merri chahat hai har mausam ko terre sath jine ki,
terri sanso mein base mausam k har rang ko pine ki,

kabhi fursat mile tou mujhe batana merri jaan,
kya terra merra ye khuab sach hoga,
kya pehle ki tarah hum dono ka ek duje pe haq hoga,

kya kabhi us sukoon bhari muskan ko hum ek duje k labo pe sajayenge,
aur kya phir kabhi sab kuch bhula kar hum ek duje k ho payenge.........
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2010, 06:56:49 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2010, 07:12:53 AM »
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Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsaas!!!

geetji, Bhavnaao Se bharpoor Kavita Likhi Hai Aapne..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2010, 07:18:33 AM »
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awesome creation geet di........
 Applause  Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause   Applause  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2010, 08:54:23 AM »
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Geet-di aapne apne bhavo ko mausam k anuroop dhaal diya hai....
Mann mei basi atript khawaaishyen baarish ki boondo si bikhar gayee hain.....
Aansu aur boonde jaise ek-mek ho gayee hain.... Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

Hamne aksar dekha hai Baarish mei sukhe pedo par
Phir Bahaar aati he, wo hare-bhare ho jaate hain

Sakhi phirse bhar tu pyaar-sneh un bikhre rishto mei
Ye mausam ka khumaar lauta laayega tere sapno ko...



Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 06, 2010, 06:00:47 PM


Zor se barsaat poori raat barasti rahi,
aur terre deed ko merri nigahe tarasti rahi,

thandi hawayo sang bundo ki aawaz gungunati rahi,
merri dhadkano mein basi ek aah tujhe bulati rahi,

jab baarish ki bundo k kuch chinto ne merre chehre ko chhua,
tab terri ankho mein chhupi nami ka mujhe ehsas hua,

mausam tou hum dono k paas ek jaisa tha,
per na terre ansuo ko barsat chhupa payi aur merra haal main kya kahu ki kaisa tha,

merri chahat hai har mausam ko terre sath jine ki,
terri sanso mein base mausam k har rang ko pine ki,

kabhi fursat mile tou mujhe batana merri jaan,
kya terra merra ye khuab sach hoga,
kya pehle ki tarah hum dono ka ek duje pe haq hoga,

kya kabhi us sukoon bhari muskan ko hum ek duje k labo pe sajayenge,
aur kya phir kabhi sab kuch bhula kar hum ek duje k ho payenge.........
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2010, 01:55:58 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji,dev aur khwaish ji...
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2010, 01:59:14 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 07, 2010, 08:54:23 AM
Geet-di aapne apne bhavo ko mausam k anuroop dhaal diya hai....
Mann mei basi atript khawaaishyen baarish ki boondo si bikhar gayee hain.....
Aansu aur boonde jaise ek-mek ho gayee hain.... Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

Hamne aksar dekha hai Baarish mei sukhe pedo par
Phir Bahaar aati he, wo hare-bhare ho jaate hain

Sakhi phirse bhar tu pyaar-sneh un bikhre rishto mei
Ye mausam ka khumaar lauta laayega tere sapno ko...




Thnx alot koyal for such lovely lines...



Kuch ansu merre mil gye baarish ki bundo mein,
kuch uske naam k in ankho se beh gaye,
main usse lafzo mein tou kuch na keh payi..
haan per ye mausam aur merre ansu bahut kuch keh gaye.........
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2010, 02:22:47 PM »
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Bhule nahi bhulaati wo barsaat ki raat
Teri-Meri pehli-pehli mulakaat ki raat

Bhuli nahi Uss nanhi si Ruksaar ki baat
Shakhee Khidki se uss k deedaar ki baat
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2010, 02:29:41 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 07, 2010, 02:22:47 PM
Bhule nahi bhulaati wo barsaat ki raat
Teri-Meri pehli-pehli mulakaat ki raat

Bhuli nahi Uss nanhi si Ruksaar ki baat
Shakhee Khidki se uss k deedaar ki baat

bahut khoob koyal..


Aesi hi ek raat thi aur sath hamare barsat thi,
kuch ankahe se ehsas the aur kuch ankahi se baat thi,
chand lamho mein hi mausam ne kuch aesa jadu chala diya..
k dekhte hi dekhte hamari ankho mein jazbaato ki baraat thi.........
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2010, 05:44:32 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 06, 2010, 06:00:47 PM


Zor se barsaat poori raat barasti rahi,
aur terre deed ko merri nigahe tarasti rahi,

thandi hawayo sang bundo ki aawaz gungunati rahi,
merri dhadkano mein basi ek aah tujhe bulati rahi,

jab baarish ki bundo k kuch chinto ne merre chehre ko chhua,
tab terri ankho mein chhupi nami ka mujhe ehsas hua,

mausam tou hum dono k paas ek jaisa tha,
per na terre ansuo ko barsat chhupa payi aur merra haal main kya kahu ki kaisa tha,

merri chahat hai har mausam ko terre sath jine ki,
terri sanso mein base mausam k har rang ko pine ki,

kabhi fursat mile tou mujhe batana merri jaan,
kya terra merra ye khuab sach hoga,
kya pehle ki tarah hum dono ka ek duje pe haq hoga,

kya kabhi us sukoon bhari muskan ko hum ek duje k labo pe sajayenge,
aur kya phir kabhi sab kuch bhula kar hum ek duje k ho payenge.........



Wah Geet Ji kya andaaz hai
Bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2010, 08:40:21 AM »
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Thanks Geet-di......

Wah wah Geet-di....aap tou jazbaaton mai beh gayee hain...bahut khoob... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Baarish me bheegee-bheegee wo mulakaat thee
Aankhon he aankhon mai huee saree baat thee

Dil mai uuth-thee jazbaaton ki baaraat thee
Kya haseen khushnumaa wo milan ki raat thee

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 07, 2010, 02:29:41 PM
bahut khoob koyal..


Aesi hi ek raat thi aur sath hamare barsat thi,
kuch ankahe se ehsas the aur kuch ankahi se baat thi,
chand lamho mein hi mausam ne kuch aesa jadu chala diya..
k dekhte hi dekhte hamari ankho mein jazbaato ki baraat thi.........
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2010, 10:43:14 AM »
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boht hi khoob
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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2010, 04:42:13 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 08, 2010, 08:40:21 AM
Thanks Geet-di......

Wah wah Geet-di....aap tou jazbaaton mai beh gayee hain...bahut khoob... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Baarish me bheegee-bheegee wo mulakaat thee
Aankhon he aankhon mai huee saree baat thee

Dil mai uuth-thee jazbaaton ki baaraat thee
Kya haseen khushnumaa wo milan ki raat thee


Terre alfazo se aesa lag raha hai jaise us raat tu bhi merre sath thi...he he he just kidding...bahut khoob likha hai...


Vo barsat ki adhi raat aur sang tha uska sath,
kuch naa keh kar bhi keh di thi dil ki har baat,
vo samjh gaya merre ehsaso ko door rehkar bhi..
kamaal ki thi vo khamoshi bhi aur vo barasti dheemi dheemi barsat.........
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«Reply #13 on: July 09, 2010, 02:07:13 AM »
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   Bahut achha likha hai aapne Geet ji.
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2010, 05:52:51 AM »
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Nice going Geetji and Koyalji.....keep it up.... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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