Vo barsat ki raat... -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

rana begum

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«Reply #15 on: July 09, 2010, 09:42:16 AM »

kya tareef karuu apka me geet ji....
jo apne shayari me dali hai.....
sun ke ye shayari apki ....
or unke bol maine apni neend gawayi hai.............. hello2


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KOYAL46

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #16 on: July 09, 2010, 12:12:54 PM »

Geet-di mere alfazo mai jo aapko nazar aaya ussko jeevan dene k liye ye chand lines pesh hain.... Winking

Mein kab tujhse juda mein tou teri parchhaiyee hu
Mujh se kya hai chhupa mein tujhme he samaayee hu

Ruhaani hai ye rishta hamaara ye jaanti hu
Tere dil kee har dhadkan mein pehchanti hu

Sakhee jaan ley tu tere ehsaaso ka aaina hu
Tu naa kahe tou bhee tera har raj jaanti hu

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 08, 2010, 04:42:13 PM

Terre alfazo se aesa lag raha hai jaise us raat tu bhi merre sath thi...he he he just kidding...bahut khoob likha hai...

Vo barsat ki adhi raat aur sang tha uska sath,
kuch naa keh kar bhi keh di thi dil ki har baat,
vo samjh gaya merre ehsaso ko door rehkar bhi..
kamaal ki thi vo khamoshi bhi aur vo barasti dheemi dheemi barsat.........


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #17 on: July 09, 2010, 04:38:07 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji,tamanna ji,anaam ji aur begum ji....


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #18 on: July 09, 2010, 04:42:05 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 09, 2010, 12:12:54 PM

Geet-di mere alfazo mai jo aapko nazar aaya ussko jeevan dene k liye ye chand lines pesh hain.... Winking

thnx sweetu for lovely lines...

Terri dosti merri parchayi hai,
terri yade merre dil mein samayi hai,
itne door hoker bhi tujhe merri khabar rehti hai..
yahi tou dil k rishto ki gehrayi hai.........


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KOYAL46

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #19 on: July 10, 2010, 10:57:33 AM »

Meri lines ko pasand karne ka bahut-bahut shukriya Geet-di.... icon_flower

Rishto kee gehraayee ko jaanti ho
Kya kahu tum mujhko itna maanti ho

Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 09, 2010, 04:42:05 PM

thnx sweetu for lovely lines...

Terri dosti merri parchayi hai,
terri yade merre dil mein samayi hai,
itne door hoker bhi tujhe merri khabar rehti hai..
yahi tou dil k rishto ki gehrayi hai.........


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #20 on: July 11, 2010, 11:46:02 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 10, 2010, 10:57:33 AM

Meri lines ko pasand karne ka bahut-bahut shukriya Geet-di.... icon_flower

Rishto kee gehraayee ko jaanti ho
Kya kahu tum mujhko itna maanti ho

thnx koyal..


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poppoetry

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #21 on: July 13, 2010, 05:56:48 PM »

waaaaooooooooooooowwww........suerb .......ka khubsurati se sjaya ja rha hai iss thread ko...bbl ji & koyal.....
soooooo lovelyyyyyyy.......aapne likha itna pyara aur uss par mausam ki ye tasveer......bahut khoob bbl ji......good going both of you....
Clapping Smiley


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diljala

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #22 on: July 15, 2010, 03:14:17 AM »

Wha-Wha brokenbyluv ji

Aap ke liye

har boond barish ka tere chune ka ahasas karati hai
jab bhi hava chalti hi tere aane ka ailan karati hai
aur jab bhi gujarti hai to ai jaan mere kunche se
na hi loog na hi hava nahi barish hume batati hai

"Aaj phir se barsaat ka mausam bana hai
aaj phir se hum tere inteejar mai.n hai.n
najar bas lagi hai gali kuncho.n per hamari
dekhe.n ki aaj tu aati hai ki nahi aati hai...."

Diljala


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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #23 on: July 15, 2010, 03:30:34 AM »

ek bht hi pyara thread.......jazbaaton se bahra....itna pyaar aur apnapan hai yahan dekhkar bht achcha laga......
Geet ji Koyal ji Diljale ji.....bht hi pyara likha hai aap sabne...


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #24 on: July 15, 2010, 08:30:47 PM »

Bahut bahut bahut shukriya nikhar ji,diljala ji aur kasak ji..thnx alot for such lovely lines diljala ji bahut khoob likha hai apne....


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #25 on: July 15, 2010, 08:51:34 PM »

KOYAL KI KUHUK,OR AAP KE GEET NE BAARISH KA MAZA DOBALA KAR DIYA...
SAATH HI DILJALA JI NE APNE BHEEGE BHEEGE ALFAZONSE HUM SABHI KO TARBATAR KAR DIYA .MERI OR SE AAP SABHI KO BADHAI KI BOUCHAREN ...


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #26 on: July 15, 2010, 08:55:16 PM »

Behetareen tarike se itni khubsurat taarif k liye bahut bahut shukriya mamta ji....


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #27 on: July 15, 2010, 08:55:59 PM »

AAJ AAP LOGON KE SAATH LAFZON KI BARISH ME BHEEGTE BHEEGTE YE GEET YAAD AA GAYA.......

SHARABI SHARABI YE SAWAN KA MOUSAM
KHUDA KI QASAM KHOOBSURAT NAHOTA
AGAR ISME RANGE MOHABBAT NAHOTA


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #28 on: July 15, 2010, 08:58:08 PM »

Wakayi bahut khoob geet hai mamta ji...


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ANAAM

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Re: Vo barsat ki raat...

«Reply #29 on: July 18, 2010, 02:22:48 PM »

Good going.......


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