vo nishaane to de................saru..........138

by SURESH SANGWAN on December 05, 2014, 03:01:34 PM
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यकीं उसकी उल्फ़त का मुझे आने तो दे
हँस   भी  लेंगे  पहले  मुस्कुराने  तो दे

तीर  क्या नज़रों  से तलवार चला जानां
जहां  तू नहीं है  जगह वो बताने तो दे

सूरज ढल जाने  का मतलब अंधेरा  नहीं
चाँद  निकलने दे तारे झिलमिलाने तो दे

अजी भूख की छोडो पहले प्यास की सुनो
ज़ख़्म  इन  हाथ के छालों को खाने तो दे

बदल डाले कब सूरत आती जाती आँधियाँ
अदाएँ  ज़रा  बहारों  को  दिखाने तो दे

तरकश  ही खाली है ना  तज़ुर्बे में कमी  
लगाने हैं तीर जहाँ  वो  निशाने  तो दे

ए नये ज़माने नया सबक भी सीख लूंगी
याद हैं जो पहले से 'सरु'को भुलाने तो दे



 YakeeN uski ulfat ka mujhe aane to de
Hans bhi lengeN pehle muskuraane to de

Teer kya nazroN se talwar chala janaN
JahaN tu nahiN hai jagah vo bataane to de

Sooraj dhal  jaane ka matlab andhera nahiN
Chand nikalne de tare jhilmilaane to de

Aji bhookh ki chhodo pehle pyaas ki suno
Zakhm inn haath ke chhaloN ko khane to de

Badal dale kab soorat aati jaati andhiyaN
AdayeN zaraa bahaaroN ko dikhane to de

Taekash hi khali hai na tazurbe meiN kami
Lagaane haiN teer jahaaN vo nishane to de

E naye zamaane naya sabak bhi seekh loongi
Yaad haiN jo pehle se ‘saru’ ko bhulaane to de


 
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यकीं उसकी उल्फ़त का मुझे आने तो दे
हँस   भी  लेंगे  पहले  मुस्कुराने  तो दे

तीर  क्या नज़रों  से तलवार चला जानां
जहां  तू नहीं है  जगह वो बताने तो दे

सूरज ढल जाने  का मतलब अंधेरा  नहीं
चाँद  निकलने दे तारे झिलमिलाने तो दे

अजी भूख की छोडो पहले प्यास की सुनो
ज़ख़्म  इन  हाथ के छालों को खाने तो दे

बदल डाले कब सूरत आती जाती आँधियाँ
अदाएँ  ज़रा  बहारों  को  दिखाने तो दे

तरकश  ही खाली है ना तज़र्बे tajurba  में कमी
लगाने हैं तीर जहाँ  वो  निशाने  तो दे

ए नये ज़माने नया सबक भी सीख लूंगी
याद हैं जो पहले से 'सरु'को भुलाने तो दे






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Bohut khub bohut umda likha apne waah
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........surindarn ji.

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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........saahil ji.

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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........Iftakhar ji.

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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ...........qalb ji


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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........sir ji.

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 thaaaanks a lott parinde ji
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