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Sheba

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har shakhs ne mujhe aazmanaa chaaha..,
najaane mujh se kyaa paanaa chaaha..,

ki izzat jiski bhari mehfil humne,
waqaar meraa usi ne mitanaa chaaha,

silaa waaldain ka nahin kuch yahaan,
ishq-e-nadaan ne apna zor batanaa chaaha,

lafz-e-jamhuriyat ka maane badall dalo,
kiya intekhaab jiska usi ne kuchalnaa chaaha,

kam-zarf hua kirdaar hamaara aye sheba...!
giraa kar doosro.n ko humne sambhalnaa chaaha.!!

waaldain- parents


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ParwaaZ

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Re: waaldain..sheba

«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2011, 11:10:47 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on September 20, 2011, 10:25:33 AM

har shakhs ne mujhe aazmanaa chaaha..,
najaane kyaa mujh se paanaa chaaha..,

Bahut khoob janab achcha matla hai... Sochte rahiye..
Samjh meiN aa jayeNga kisne kia pana chaha..

ki izzat jiski bhari mehfil humne,
waqaar meraa usi ne mitanaa chaaha,

Achcha sher hai... khayaal kafi apna sa lagta hai..

silaa waaldain ka nahin kuch yahaan,
ishq-e-nadaan ne apna zor batanaa chaaha,

Waah waah waah janab kia gazab ka khayaal ataa kiya hai..
Masha Allaah bahut umdaa ... behad khub sher kaha hai daad daad daad

lafz-e-jamhuriyat ka maane badall dalo,
kiya intekhaab jiska usi ne kuchalnaa chaaha,

Achcha sher hai daad... Par aap kafiye mein galti kar gayi janab..

kam-zarf hua kirdaar hamaara aye sheba...!
giraa kar doosro.n ko humne uthaanaa chaaha.!!

Bahut khoob behad achcha tanz kiya hai.. daad ..
Is sher meiN bhi kafiye meiN galti huyi thi par humne durust kar liye

waaldain- parents

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.....

Kuch ashaar aapke khayaaloN se khayaal milte lage so apni
kalaam aapki pesh e nazar..


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sbechain

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Re: waaldain..sheba

«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2011, 11:16:56 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 20, 2011, 11:10:47 AM

Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab bade khoob ahsaas O khayaal baNdhe hai aapne..
Sabhi aashaar ke khayaal behad khoob rahe...

Achche ahsaas O khayaal par humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul
kijiye.....

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.....

Kuch ashaar aapke khayaaloN se khayaal milte lage so apni
kalaam aapki pesh e nazar..

bahut bahut shukria parwaaz sahab

aapne shayad maqte ko ghaur se nahin padha.........!


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ParwaaZ

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Re: waaldain..sheba

«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2011, 11:36:39 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on September 20, 2011, 11:16:56 AM

bahut bahut shukria parwaaz sahab

aapne shayad maqte ko ghaur se nahin padha.........!

Jee humen Maqte ko thik se padh liye..
aap wahaaN khud ke sambhalne ki baat kah rahi hai..

Par humare changing se shayad khayaal change ho gaya hai..
yaa aapka khayaal bar karaar raha gaur kijiyeNga...

Dono surat meiN kirdaar ki kamzarfi saaf hai... wel aap
apne khayaal ke mutabik dekh lijiye...

Hume jaise laga humne aapni rai rakhiye... aage aapki marzi

Likhati rahiye... Khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez...