-----/// Wajah behtar de do ///----- Hriday

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khwaahishon  ko mere par de do
aur  fir  bas  utni  si  umar  de do
raat  ke  saaye se dar  naa  jaaun
sar  chhipaane ko  ek  ghar de do

shor  bahut   hai  aas  paas  mere
sukun  bharaa  ek  shahar  de  do
ehsaas  mere jal  rahe  hain saare
bas thandi  si  ek  dopahar de do

dard  ki  aadat  to  ab ho hi chuki
muskuraane kaa bas hunar de do
zindagi  ke  din  kam  hain  bahut
jeene  ki wajah koi beh-tar de do


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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2016, 05:57:43 PM »
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khwaahishon  ko mere par de do
aur  fir  bas  utni  si  umar  de do
raat  ke  saaye se dar  naa  jaaun
sar  chhipaane ko  ek  ghar de do

shor  bahut   hai  aas  paas  mere
sukun  bharaa  ek  shahar  de  do
ehsaas  mere jal  rahe  hain saare
bas thandi  si  ek  dopahar de do

dard  ki  aadat  to  ab ho hi chuki
muskuraane kaa bas hunar de do
zindagi  ke  din  kam  hain  bahut
jeene  ki wajah koi beh-tar de do


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