waqt hai abhi.............................saru.............93

by SURESH SANGWAN on May 20, 2014, 05:42:27 PM
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1208 times)
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #15 on: May 22, 2014, 02:25:14 AM »
Reply with quote
Suresh jee Aadaab ... !

Waah waah waah jee waah kia kahne aapke is khoobsurat dilkash dilnasheeN kalaam
Ke .... bus dil shaad ho gaya is khoob kalaam se rubaru hokar behad khoobsurat ahsaas
O khayaal  ko umdaa lafzoN meiN dhala hai aapne ...

Is badi hi khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O.mubbarakbad kabul kijiye....


Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN abate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Abhi abhi to pyaar ka pc kiya hai chaaloo by Dewana_Badal in Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari)
~*~*~*~*~ Kay Abhi Waqt Hay ~*~*~*~*~ by ALAM BURQ in Ghazals
Abhi to peene do shaam abhi baki hai by azad mishra in Miscellaneous Shayri
Shaba Khair Ka Waqt Abhi Aya Nahi by Advo.RavinderaRavi in Ghazals
Abhi Abhi Seekha He Chalna By J N Mayyaat by J N mayyaat in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
adil bechain
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 161
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
31 days, 18 hours and 24 minutes.

Posts: 6552
Member Since: Mar 2009


View Profile
«Reply #16 on: May 23, 2014, 09:16:44 PM »
Reply with quote


तू वो नहीं इस दिल को बताने के लिए आ
भूल  गया इसे  याद  दिलाने  के लिए आ

माँग  सकूँ तुमको खुदा से वक़्त है  अभी
आ  मिरे दस्त-ए-दुआ उठाने के लिए आ

सोये  हैं चादर  तान   के  जज़्बात  सारे
आ  ईश्क़ का  सुरूर जगाने के  लिए आ

घर  के  दरवाज़े  जो बंद  कर  लिए  तूने
आ  नई   कोई  राह  बताने  के  लिए आ

उम्मीद  कहाँ  है   मुझे  के  मनाएगा तू
चाँद  सी   सूरत   दिखाने  के  लिए आ

वो  प्यार  नहीं  तिरी   मेहरबानियाँ  थी
अपनी  अना की  जीत मनाने के लिए आ

इतना याद है 'सरु'  के बहुत दिलनशीं थे
आ  फिर  वही  क़िस्से सुनाने के लिए आ






ranjish hi sahi dil ko dukhaane ke liye aa...,
aa mujh se phir rooth ke jaane ke liye aa...,


kuch aisa hi andaaz hai janaab aap ke kalaam ka ahmed faraaz sahab ki yaad dila gyaa waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #17 on: May 24, 2014, 02:48:07 AM »
Reply with quote

ranjish hi sahi dil ko dukhaane ke liye aa...,
aa mujh se phir rooth ke jaane ke liye aa...,


kuch aisa hi andaaz hai janaab aap ke kalaam ka ahmed faraaz sahab ki yaad dila gyaa waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bechain Sahaab Aadaab  ...!

Janab humare khayaal se Faraaz sahab ke andaaz se nahi balki Hasrat Jaipuri sahab ke sher se hu ba hu sher kaha hai Suresh jee ne ...

Ranjish hi sahi rooth ke jaane ke liye aa
Hasrat ki kasam dil hi dukhane ke liye aa

Suresh jee muafi ke talabgaar haiN lekin kia kareN aadat se majboor hai so kahne ki gustaqi kar diye ...

Koi baat ghalat lage toH mazarrat chahate haiN ...

Khuda Hafez ...
Logged
SURESH SANGWAN
Guest
«Reply #18 on: May 24, 2014, 04:34:21 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut 2 shukriya sksain ji
wav
waah waah bahut sunder
Logged
SURESH SANGWAN
Guest
«Reply #19 on: May 24, 2014, 04:36:38 PM »
Reply with quote
thanks a lot Parwaaaz ji..
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
aapke keemati waqt aur hausla afzahi ke liye
Suresh jee Aadaab ... !

Waah waah waah jee waah kia kahne aapke is khoobsurat dilkash dilnasheeN kalaam
Ke .... bus dil shaad ho gaya is khoob kalaam se rubaru hokar behad khoobsurat ahsaas
O khayaal  ko umdaa lafzoN meiN dhala hai aapne ...

Is badi hi khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O.mubbarakbad kabul kijiye....


Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN abate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
Logged
SURESH SANGWAN
Guest
«Reply #20 on: May 24, 2014, 04:38:38 PM »
Reply with quote
thanks a lot Ravi ji
wav
wav
BehtreeN.....Ek aur khoobsurat kalam pesh kiya hai Aap Sureshji.
Logged
Bishwajeet Anand Bsu
Guest
«Reply #21 on: May 26, 2014, 02:11:24 AM »
Reply with quote
har ek sher lajawaab, behtareen .....
hazaron daad qubool karein Suresh jee...
Logged
SURESH SANGWAN
Guest
«Reply #22 on: May 26, 2014, 11:59:38 AM »
Reply with quote
wav
thanks a lot mussahib ji
har ek sher lajawaab, behtareen .....
hazaron daad qubool karein Suresh jee...

Logged
SURESH SANGWAN
Guest
«Reply #23 on: May 27, 2014, 03:25:58 PM »
Reply with quote
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower thanks a lot
notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
speech-less poetry............
Logged
Pages: 1 [2]  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 11:14:02 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.123 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer