waqt kee dhoop.....................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on November 28, 2011, 02:10:53 PM
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waqt kee dhoop hai padee jab se
raNg chehare kaa hai udaa tab se

ab kaheeN aur jee nahee lagtaa
humne dekhaa huaa tumhe jab se

kitanee talkhee se pesh aate ho
jaao bolenge hum nahee ab se

sirf khwaaboN se kuchh nahee hogaa
tarsee deedaar ko nazar kab se

ye adab hai meraa yaa rasm-e-wafaa
aah nikalee nahee hai kyun lab se

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2011, 02:13:00 PM »
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BAhut BAhut Khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2011, 02:14:55 PM »
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Shukriyaa Sanjeev!
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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2011, 02:27:53 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Mamta Ji
Bahut dino baad aayi aap..
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2011, 12:41:31 AM »
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Shukriyaa mkv! deegar masroofiyat kuchh had se zyaadah baRh gayeeN theeN................
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2011, 03:32:37 AM »
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 Applause Applause :clap:Mamtaa ji ek umdaa peshkash ke liye dil se mubaarakbaad .sab theek hai na. bahut dino ke baad aapko padhaa hai.
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2011, 09:16:02 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini saaheb!aap kee saraahanaa humaare aitmaad ko or pukhtaa kar detee hai......sab theek hai.....bas pichhale kuchh dino me ghar kee shaadee kee vyavasthaaoN me vyast thee.....ab vaapas apni duniyaa me lout aayee hooN......saath hee ek baat or kahoon.....woh ye ki badaa achchhaa lagtaa hai jab net kee is anjaan duniyaa me sirf shabdoN kee dor me bandh kar koi aap kee lambi gairhaaziri ko notice kartaa hai or aap ke haal poochhtaa hai...aap ke is aatmeeya samvaad kaa bhee mai dil se ahteraam karti hooN.......
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2011, 09:54:59 AM »
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Mamtaa ji, namaskaar
sabse pahle to aapke pariwaar ke un bachhoN ko aasheerwaad jo ki daampatya sootra men bandhe hain.Mitron ke pass mitrtaa hee sabse badee daulat hotee hai koi swaarth nahin koi chaah naheen jaisaa kee pariwaar waalon men ek doosre se expectations hotee hai. mitrtaa men nahin.hamaaree expectations kewal itnee hain ki aap jahaan ho jis haal men ho khush rahe aur yahee vazah hai ki aap jaise dost jab lambe time ke liye door rahte hain to hame ,hamaaree creations ko ye khataktaa hai.aapkee absense men bahut kuchh post kiyaa hai. reqest hai fursat nikaal kar use padhe.aapke response binaa sab kuchh adhooraa saa hai.
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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2011, 10:33:32 AM »
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Wah Mamta ji bahut khoob likha hai
wah wah
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2011, 11:01:27 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on November 28, 2011, 02:10:53 PM
waqt kee dhoop hai padee jab se
raNg chehare kaa hai udaa tab se

ab kaheeN aur jee nahee lagtaa
humne dekhaa huaa tumhe jab se

kitanee talkhee se pesh aate ho
jaao bolenge hum nahee ab se

sirf khwaaboN se kuchh nahee hogaa
tarsee deedaar ko nazar kab se

ye adab hai meraa yaa rasm-e-wafaa
aah nikalee nahee hai kyun lab se

Mamta Bajpai


Waah Waah Waahh..Bahut bahut Khooob mamtaji..

Aapki Iss Ghazal  mein Ek Tehraao Sa Hai..Padhkar Sukoon Sa Mila Hai

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Har Lafz par Nikalti Hai Waaah Waah inn Lab Se
Jab Koi Likhta Ho Tehreer  Ko Itni Adab Se
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«Reply #10 on: November 29, 2011, 11:07:38 AM »
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Mamta Ji,

Waah..waah bahut dino ke baad
padha hai aapko.

Rachana par dher saaree badhaiyaan.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
  
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«Reply #11 on: November 29, 2011, 06:53:13 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab bade shikwe bhari kalaam kahi hai aapne..
sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.. achche khayaal bayaaN
kiye hai aapne... Usual Smile

Is khub kalaam par dili daad O mubarakbad hazir hai...
HaaN is kafiye meiN do behad ahem kafiyoN ko aapne istemal
nahi kiya so kuch kalaam adhuri si lag rahi hai... Usual Smile

ummid hai aap unhe bhi istemaal kar ke kalaam ko pura kar deNgi..

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khudaa Hafez.. Usual Smile   
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«Reply #12 on: December 01, 2011, 05:51:43 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
kitanee talkhee se pesh aate ho
jaao bolenge hum nahee ab se

आप के इस शेर' से स्वर्गीय रईस रामपुरी साहेब का एक बहुत हसीन शेर' अचानक याद आ गया -

" उफ़ वो शरमा के किसी का कहना
  जाओ  हम  तुम  से  नहीं  बोलेंगे |"

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ye adab hai meraa yaa rasm-e-wafaa
aah nikalee nahee hai kyun lab se

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-अरुण मिश्र.
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2011, 04:17:31 PM »
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Shukriyaa Sarvesh jee!
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«Reply #14 on: December 13, 2011, 03:54:34 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on November 28, 2011, 02:10:53 PM
waqt kee dhoop hai padee jab se
raNg chehare kaa hai udaa tab se

ab kaheeN aur jee nahee lagtaa
humne dekhaa huaa tumhe jab se

kitanee talkhee se pesh aate ho
jaao bolenge hum nahee ab se

sirf khwaaboN se kuchh nahee hogaa
tarsee deedaar ko nazar kab se

ye adab hai meraa yaa rasm-e-wafaa
aah nikalee nahee hai kyun lab se

Mamta Bajpai

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