WHAT MAKES ME WRITE................(ambu)

by ambalika sharma on October 29, 2013, 12:06:09 AM
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icon_flower WHAT MAKES ME WRITE   icon_flower


What makes me to write is this heart that feels,
What makes me  to write is the pain it can't heal,
What makes me to write are the emotions that i want to steal,
What makes me to write is the deal that i made to myself,
"that i will give words to all my feelings".
What makes me to write is the greed of mine,
to preserve all my thoughts of all the time.
What makes me write is this world that surrounds me,
and whole my life in it curls.
What makes me write is the GOD up there,
who wants me through my writing with him everything share.
What makes me write is just ME,
my SOUL,my INNER PEACE......
Thankyou !
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 12:07:32 AM »
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Veryy niceee......
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 12:18:04 AM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on October 29, 2013, 12:07:32 AM
Veryy niceee......
thank u
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2013, 12:22:05 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 12:23:27 AM »
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Quote from: ambalika sharma on October 29, 2013, 12:18:04 AM
thank u
U r most welcome dear....
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 12:25:03 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 29, 2013, 12:22:05 AM
beautiful
thank u saini ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2013, 12:27:59 AM »
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You write in both languages beautifully.

Just beautiful.
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2013, 12:45:30 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 29, 2013, 12:27:59 AM
You write in both languages beautifully.

Just beautiful.
thank u mkv ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2013, 12:56:00 AM »
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well written supported by all those factors dat make u write..

Nicely pen down Ambalika jee..happy9
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Quote from: nashwani on October 29, 2013, 12:56:00 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

well written supported by all those factors dat make u write..

Nicely pen down Ambalika jee..happy9
thank u ashwani ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2013, 02:28:45 AM »
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So Nice.!!Ma'am.!!
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Beautiful lines ambu...
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Quote from: aqsh on October 29, 2013, 02:24:50 PM
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Beautiful lines ambu...
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 29, 2013, 02:28:45 AM
So Nice.!!Ma'am.!!
thank u ravinder ji
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