Wo Baatein Bahoot Yaad Aaii!!!

by Pooja on February 25, 2009, 12:26:21 AM
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Is thread ki post padte waqat kuch lines man main aai wo he yah alikhne ja rahi hu: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/critics-and-review-only-forum/ajj-phir-udhas-hu-t21080.0.html

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Bin kahe samjhna, samjh kar wo humara hans dena
Ajj ussi hansi ki yaad main, ankhein bhar bhar aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Nigahein rahi wohi, waqat badal gaya
Bardte tufaano mai, na pata chala, her armaan kidher gaya
Tanhaai ke is alam main, wo teri Mehfil yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Khata na thi teri, gunah nahi tha mera
Khud ko khud he bas main na thi samjha paai
Tere wo ansoo, teri her duhai, ajj jaan per meri ban aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Dhadkane bhi hui zakhmi, dil bhi hua ghayal
Ghayal man se kuch bhi na main thik kar paai
Jaane anjaane main hua jo, kismet bhi na use thik kar paai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein ajj bahoot yaad aai
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2009, 01:04:46 AM »
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waah pooja jee..
kya baat hai jee...
bahut khob...
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2009, 01:17:42 AM »
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Pooja jee..

Wo Gujra jamana aur milne ka bahana,
Wo panchiyon k jaise ghonsale banana,
Khudi se kar k baatein khud muskurana,
Wo raato me jag k neendo ko sulana,
Hai yaad aaj bhi mujhe wo beete jamane,
Bhulna to chahoon par na chahoon bhulana... Is it SO!
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2009, 02:24:33 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Pandit ji.. bahoot khoob .. yah do line to kamaal ki likh gaye hai app

Wo raato me jag k neendo ko sulana,
Bhulna to chahoon par na chahoon bhulana...
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2009, 02:44:45 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 12:26:21 AM
Is thread ki post padte waqat kuch lines man main aai wo he yah alikhne ja rahi hu: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/critics-and-review-only-forum/ajj-phir-udhas-hu-t21080.0.html

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Bin kahe samjhna, samjh kar wo humara hans dena
Ajj ussi hansi ki yaad main, ankhein bhar bhar aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Nigahein rahi wohi, waqat badal gaya
Bardte tufaano mai, na pata chala, her armaan kidher gaya
Tanhaai ke is alam main, wo teri Mehfil yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Khata na thi teri, gunah nahi tha mera
Khud ko khud he bas main na thi samjha paai
Tere wo ansoo, teri her duhai, ajj jaan per meri ban aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Dhadkane bhi hui zakhmi, dil bhi hua ghayal
Ghayal man se kuch bhi na main thik kar paai
Jaane anjaane main hua jo, kismet bhi na use thik kar paai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein ajj bahoot yaad aai


Wah wah ... Bahut khoob Pooja di
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2009, 02:48:22 AM »
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Thanks Roja
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2009, 02:55:01 AM »
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Pooja di
Aaj chaman ke her phool per nikar tera hai
Kaliyon per jo hai woh sringaar tera hai

Hamara kaun hai jo sunega hamari sada
Hum jante hai ki sara sansaar tera hai
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2009, 05:43:21 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 02:24:33 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Pandit ji.. bahoot khoob .. yah do line to kamaal ki likh gaye hai app

Wo raato me jag k neendo ko sulana,
Bhulna to chahoon par na chahoon bhulana...

Thanks pooja jee...
Buss aap k lines k jawaab me pata nahi kaise likh diyaa..
thanks to u rather...
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2009, 05:43:40 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 02:55:01 AM
Pooja di
Aaj chaman ke her phool per nikar tera hai
Kaliyon per jo hai woh sringaar tera hai

Hamara kaun hai jo sunega hamari sada
Hum jante hai ki sara sansaar tera hai



Great lines Roja jee...
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2009, 04:33:54 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 02:55:01 AM
Pooja di
Aaj chaman ke her phool per nikar tera hai
Kaliyon per jo hai woh sringaar tera hai

Hamara kaun hai jo sunega hamari sada
Hum jante hai ki sara sansaar tera hai



wah kaya baat hai Roja.... sara sansaar humara aor hum apke  NaNaNa
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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2009, 03:01:44 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 12:26:21 AM
Is thread ki post padte waqat kuch lines man main aai wo he yah alikhne ja rahi hu: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/critics-and-review-only-forum/ajj-phir-udhas-hu-t21080.0.html

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Bin kahe samjhna, samjh kar wo humara hans dena
Ajj ussi hansi ki yaad main, ankhein bhar bhar aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Nigahein rahi wohi, waqat badal gaya
Bardte tufaano mai, na pata chala, her armaan kidher gaya
Tanhaai ke is alam main, wo teri Mehfil yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Khata na thi teri, gunah nahi tha mera
Khud ko khud he bas main na thi samjha paai
Tere wo ansoo, teri her duhai, ajj jaan per meri ban aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Dhadkane bhi hui zakhmi, dil bhi hua ghayal
Ghayal man se kuch bhi na main thik kar paai
Jaane anjaane main hua jo, kismet bhi na use thik kar paai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein ajj bahoot yaad aai


Well done Pooja ji U wrote a beautiful poem.
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«Reply #11 on: February 26, 2009, 03:02:52 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 12:26:21 AM
Is thread ki post padte waqat kuch lines man main aai wo he yah alikhne ja rahi hu: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/critics-and-review-only-forum/ajj-phir-udhas-hu-t21080.0.html

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Bin kahe samjhna, samjh kar wo humara hans dena
Ajj ussi hansi ki yaad main, ankhein bhar bhar aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Nigahein rahi wohi, waqat badal gaya
Bardte tufaano mai, na pata chala, her armaan kidher gaya
Tanhaai ke is alam main, wo teri Mehfil yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Khata na thi teri, gunah nahi tha mera
Khud ko khud he bas main na thi samjha paai
Tere wo ansoo, teri her duhai, ajj jaan per meri ban aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Dhadkane bhi hui zakhmi, dil bhi hua ghayal
Ghayal man se kuch bhi na main thik kar paai
Jaane anjaane main hua jo, kismet bhi na use thik kar paai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein ajj bahoot yaad aai


Its a beautiful creation....touches deeply somewhere in heart....Bohot Khoob Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2009, 03:09:16 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 04:33:54 PM

wah kaya baat hai Roja.... sara sansaar humara aor hum apke  NaNaNa

 Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2009, 02:28:38 AM »
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Kya fir chale aaye meri hayaat mein
Mera aashiyan nahi hai kul kayinaat mein
Pyar ki baatein kaise tumse kare "Pooja"
Ki lahoo tapakne laga hai mere jajbaat mein... tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2009, 03:45:54 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 28, 2009, 02:28:38 AM
Kya fir chale aaye meri hayaat mein
Mera aashiyan nahi hai kul kayinaat mein
Pyar ki baatein kaise tumse kare "Pooja"
Ki lahoo tapakne laga hai mere jajbaat mein... tongue3

waah roja jee..
kyaa bata hai..shayarana andaaz ab kaatil bhi ban gaya......
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