Wo Baatein Bahoot Yaad Aaii!!!

by Pooja on February 25, 2009, 12:26:21 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 28, 2009, 09:29:26 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 12:26:21 AM
Is thread ki post padte waqat kuch lines man main aai wo he yah alikhne ja rahi hu: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/critics-and-review-only-forum/ajj-phir-udhas-hu-t21080.0.html

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Bin kahe samjhna, samjh kar wo humara hans dena
Ajj ussi hansi ki yaad main, ankhein bhar bhar aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Nigahein rahi wohi, waqat badal gaya
Bardte tufaano mai, na pata chala, her armaan kidher gaya
Tanhaai ke is alam main, wo teri Mehfil yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Khata na thi teri, gunah nahi tha mera
Khud ko khud he bas main na thi samjha paai
Tere wo ansoo, teri her duhai, ajj jaan per meri ban aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Dhadkane bhi hui zakhmi, dil bhi hua ghayal
Ghayal man se kuch bhi na main thik kar paai
Jaane anjaane main hua jo, kismet bhi na use thik kar paai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein ajj bahoot yaad aai


padhte waqt yun laga ki shabd dil se nikle aur bina kisi lag-lapet ke seedhe kagaz par utarte chale gaye...bahoot hi choo lene wali rachna hai pooja ji
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«Reply #16 on: March 01, 2009, 01:37:47 AM »
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Dear friends, Yeh title "Wo Baatein Bahoot yaad Aaii" bahut khubsoorat hai,
aur essy padhkar kuch purani yaad tazza ho gayee.

Dupatta Kesaria chunari kaa,
Lipat kar tujh se rehataa tha,
Meri pyaasi nigaaho.n par,
hameshaa hansataa rehataa tha.

Kabhi udataa tha hawaao.n main,
Simatataa tha phir meri baahon main,
Kabhi kaandhe pe bekaaboo,
Teri Adaoo mai,Sirakataa firataa rehataa tha Teri Adaoo Mai.
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«Reply #17 on: March 05, 2009, 04:26:29 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 28, 2009, 09:29:26 AM
padhte waqt yun laga ki shabd dil se nikle aur bina kisi lag-lapet ke seedhe kagaz par utarte chale gaye...bahoot hi choo lene wali rachna hai pooja ji

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Bekarar ji!!
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«Reply #18 on: March 05, 2009, 04:26:54 PM »
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Quote from: Persant Roy on March 01, 2009, 01:37:47 AM
Dear friends, Yeh title "Wo Baatein Bahoot yaad Aaii" bahut khubsoorat hai,
aur essy padhkar kuch purani yaad tazza ho gayee.

Dupatta Kesaria chunari kaa,
Lipat kar tujh se rehataa tha,
Meri pyaasi nigaaho.n par,
hameshaa hansataa rehataa tha.

Kabhi udataa tha hawaao.n main,
Simatataa tha phir meri baahon main,
Kabhi kaandhe pe bekaaboo,
Sirakataa firataa rehataa tha teri adaoo mai.

Thanks and Nice wordings Roy ji
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«Reply #19 on: March 05, 2009, 05:41:07 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
Nice One Pandit ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Sweet One Roja ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: March 05, 2009, 05:46:44 PM »
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Quote from: Persant Roy on March 01, 2009, 01:37:47 AM
Dear friends, Yeh title "Wo Baatein Bahoot yaad Aaii" bahut khubsoorat hai,
aur essy padhkar kuch purani yaad tazza ho gayee.

Dupatta Kesaria chunari kaa,
Lipat kar tujh se rehataa tha,
Meri pyaasi nigaaho.n par,
hameshaa hansataa rehataa tha.

Kabhi udataa tha hawaao.n main,
Simatataa tha phir meri baahon main,
Kabhi kaandhe pe bekaaboo,
Teri Adaoo mai,Sirakataa firataa rehataa tha Teri Adaoo Mai.


Very nice Persant Ji
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«Reply #21 on: March 06, 2009, 03:37:59 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on March 05, 2009, 05:41:07 PM
Bahoot Khoob Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
Nice One Pandit ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Sweet One Roja ji Applause Applause Applause


Shukaria Pank ji
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«Reply #22 on: March 06, 2009, 05:06:05 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 12:26:21 AM
Is thread ki post padte waqat kuch lines man main aai wo he yah alikhne ja rahi hu: http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/critics-and-review-only-forum/ajj-phir-udhas-hu-t21080.0.html

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Bin kahe samjhna, samjh kar wo humara hans dena
Ajj ussi hansi ki yaad main, ankhein bhar bhar aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Nigahein rahi wohi, waqat badal gaya
Bardte tufaano mai, na pata chala, her armaan kidher gaya
Tanhaai ke is alam main, wo teri Mehfil yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Khata na thi teri, gunah nahi tha mera
Khud ko khud he bas main na thi samjha paai
Tere wo ansoo, teri her duhai, ajj jaan per meri ban aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Dhadkane bhi hui zakhmi, dil bhi hua ghayal
Ghayal man se kuch bhi na main thik kar paai
Jaane anjaane main hua jo, kismet bhi na use thik kar paai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein yaad aai

Apni udaasi main ajj, teri udaas raatein yaad aai
Kari thi jo raat raat baith baatein, wo baatein ajj bahoot yaad aai

Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2009, 03:02:52 PM
Its a beautiful creation....touches deeply somewhere in heart....Bohot Khoob Pooja

sad5 Humse aap naraaz ho kya ?
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«Reply #23 on: March 09, 2009, 12:24:51 AM »
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Thanks for ur comments Celmira and Pooja ji.
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«Reply #24 on: March 09, 2009, 12:38:35 AM »
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Phagun ki Holi Mai
Dupatta kesaria chunari kaa,
Tere Dil ki dharkanoo ko dharkata tha kuchh-kuchh,
Aur Phir Tumhari dhadkano ko gin gin kar,
Phagun ki Holi Mai,
Teri adaoo mai, gungunata tha kuchh-kuchh.
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«Reply #25 on: April 30, 2009, 08:06:18 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2009, 03:02:52 PM
Its a beautiful creation....touches deeply somewhere in heart....Bohot Khoob Pooja

Thanks You so much Celmira!!!! Apse naraj.. kabhi nahi.......
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«Reply #26 on: April 30, 2009, 08:06:50 PM »
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Quote from: Persant Roy on March 09, 2009, 12:38:35 AM
Phagun ki Holi Mai
Dupatta kesaria chunari kaa,
Tere Dil ki dharkanoo ko dharkata tha kuchh-kuchh,
Aur Phir Tumhari dhadkano ko gin gin kar,
Phagun ki Holi Mai,
Teri adaoo mai, gungunata tha kuchh-kuchh.




Nice lines Roy ji!! Maafi chahti hu bahoot dino baad yah thread samne aai hai!!
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