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Dekh chaand ko baadlon ki panaah mein, wo muskurata bahut tha
Uska wo chehra iss dil ko lubhata bahut tha
Kaanton ko daaman mein sahej kar rakhta tha
Shayad gulab ko wo chahta bhaut tha
Aos ki bund ko qaid kar liya rango se kaagaz par usne
Beh gaye rang , kaagaz ko jo seene se lagata bahut tha
Kaise karte vishwas mohabbat par uski
Nafrat na hote hue bhi,nafrat ko wo jtata bahut tha
Na jaane kaisa deewana tha wo
Jeevansaathi kehkar hamein pukarta bahut tha
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2010, 06:32:47 PM » |
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bahut khoob nikhar ji........
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2010, 08:32:39 PM » |
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Nikhar Jee Aadaab....
Achche khayaal parose hai aapne..... Aapki koshish achchi lage hume daad........
Likhati rahiye .....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez.......
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2010, 03:40:09 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI NIKHAR JI....
KAHENE KO TO MOHABBAT KARTA THA
PAR JUBAN SE KUCH BHI NAHI KAHETA THA
NA JAANE KAISA "WO DEEWANA" THA
INKAR BHI NAHI IKRAR BHI NAHI KARTA THA.....
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2010, 11:32:28 AM » |
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2010, 01:39:07 PM » |
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Bada rochak reply hai Koyal ji aapka...... Wo Kagaz pe teri tasveer banaata tha Naak tedhi-Aankh bhengee banata tha.... Kya khoob kaha hai....mazaa aa gaya.... |
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2010, 03:10:00 PM » |
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Thanks Anaam aapko pasand aaya......
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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2010, 06:44:52 PM » |
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Nikhaar ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2010, 04:06:31 PM » |
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shukriya Anaam ji.......waise ye diwana ek khyal hai.... |
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2010, 04:43:05 PM » |
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Nikhar Jee Aadaab....
Achche khayaal parose hai aapne..... Aapki koshish achchi lage hume daad........
Likhati rahiye .....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez.......
Bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji.....jaankar khushi hui k aapko ye koshish acchi lagi aur hairat bhi hui....... shukriya....... |
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2010, 05:02:11 PM » |
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bahut khoob nikhar ji........
shukriya bbl ji |
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«Reply #12 on: September 11, 2010, 03:47:02 PM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI NIKHAR JI....
KAHENE KO TO MOHABBAT KARTA THA
PAR JUBAN SE KUCH BHI NAHI KAHETA THA
NA JAANE KAISA "WO DEEWANA" THA
INKAR BHI NAHI IKRAR BHI NAHI KARTA THA.....
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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2010, 03:55:46 PM » |
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Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja... Bahoot hi Umda Likha hai... Kaun hai woh Deewaan  ? |
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2010, 09:27:18 AM » |
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Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Pooja... Bahoot hi Umda Likha hai... Kaun hai woh Deewaan ? bahtt bahut shukriya Sophi......ye deewana toh sirf ek khyal hai... |
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