Wo ik bholi si larki thi (by vb)

by vb on July 21, 2011, 04:51:13 PM
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Wo ik bholi si larki thi
Buhat maasoom si, jaisay koi chanda say utra ho
Magar andar say bikhraa ho
Najaanay ku tamanna thi usay baadal pay chalnay ki
Zamaanay bhar k har aansoo ko khushiyon main badalnay ki
Na banenay ki, sanwarnay ki
Magar khaahish usay kuchh thi
Parindon ka sa urnay ki
Na jaanay konsi duniya say is duniya main aai thi
Buhat hayraan si aankhen
Buhat baytaab sa chehra
Nigaahen chup, magar dil main samandar sa samaaya ho
Wohi zulfen, lagay jin say, koi baadal sa chhaya ho
Haseen aariz shafaq ki roshni sa rang deta thaa
Gulon ko maand karta thaa

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vb tu ik bay-kaar say mad-hoshe shaair thay
Usay maaloom tha vb ki duniya main andheray hain
Usay maaloom tha sub us k hain, jitnay saveray hain
So ye achha huva k apnay dil ko sun liya us ne
Kisi ko chun liya us ne.........
Jo us larki k kaabil thaa
Wo saagar thi, Wo saahil tha
Khayaalon main hamaaray yak-nafas wo timtimaati hay
Har ik pal yaad aati hay
Samandar main kahin jaisay koi moti chamakta hay
Hamesha dil main rehta hay.............
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«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2011, 06:38:45 PM »
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bohat achay, par aisy lagta hai ke poori nahii likhi gay but achi koishish, bohat achi rachna
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2011, 06:43:42 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoobsurat peshkash Vb ji.  Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2011, 07:29:50 PM »
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hmmmmm.........dil ko chhuti aapki kalam se nikle moti...behad keemtii hote hain VB ji.....ye unme se ek hai....
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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2011, 08:24:10 PM »
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bhot umdaaa
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2011, 08:19:44 AM »
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life jee! is poem k two parts hain.. koi dono he adhooray chhore gaya hay.. kya kejay...

first part ko tu hum likhtay jaain tu kabhi khatam na ho... lakin lolz... jis aariz ki hum baat kartay hain.. usay dekha tak nahi hum ne... tasavur bhe bus dhuvaan hay.. jisay faqat mehsoos kar saktay hain..
second part ka mukamal hona hamaray bus main nahi... na itni himmat hay hum men.. k koshish he kar len...

khair.. thanx for your comments...
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2011, 08:20:16 AM »
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madhuwesh jee! buhat shukriya aap ka..
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2011, 08:22:54 AM »
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki jee! hamaray qalam aur motiyon ka sambandh koi kya samjhay ga...

thanx for your nice comments...
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2011, 08:23:24 AM »
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Shihab jee! shukriya aap ka...
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2011, 08:23:57 AM »
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chitralsony jee! shukriya aap ka..
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«Reply #10 on: July 22, 2011, 12:14:44 PM »
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VB jee Aadaab!


Janab ahsaas to behad khoob lafzoN meiN piroye hai
aapne... aapki is kalaam par kia kaheN kuch kah nahi
paa rahe haiN....

Aisa lag raha hai ke shayad aapki yeH kalaam bahut kuch
kahna chahti thi par aapne apni kalam ko rok kar uska muH
mod diyaa.. Usual Smile

Khair achchi kalaam par dil se daad hazir hai..
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2011, 07:20:18 AM »
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ParwaaZ jee! buhat shukriya aap ka... Qalam ki noke par khanjar ki noke koi nai baat tu nahi...
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«Reply #12 on: July 23, 2011, 08:23:19 AM »
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Quote from: vb on July 21, 2011, 04:51:13 PM

Wo ik bholi si larki thi
Buhat maasoom si, jaisay koi chanda say utra ho
Magar andar say bikhraa ho
Najaanay ku tamanna thi usay baadal pay chalnay ki
Zamaanay bhar k har aansoo ko khushiyon main badalnay ki
Na banenay ki, sanwarnay ki
Magar khaahish usay kuchh thi
Parindon ka sa urnay ki
Na jaanay konsi duniya say is duniya main aai thi
Buhat hayraan si aankhen
Buhat baytaab sa chehra
Nigaahen chup, magar dil main samandar sa samaaya ho
Wohi zulfen, lagay jin say, koi baadal sa chhaya ho
Haseen aariz shafaq ki roshni sa rang deta thaa
Gulon ko maand karta thaa

Nahi! Aisa nahi logo
Nahi!
vb tu ik bay-kaar say mad-hoshe shaair thay
Usay maaloom tha vb ki duniya main andheray hain
Usay maaloom tha sub us k hain, jitnay saveray hain
So ye achha huva k apnay dil ko sun liya us ne
Kisi ko chun liya us ne.........
Jo us larki k kaabil thaa
Wo saagar thi, Wo saahil tha
Khayaalon main hamaaray yak-nafas wo timtimaati hay
Har ik pal yaad aati hay
Samandar main kahin jaisay koi moti chamakta hay
Hamesha dil main rehta hay.............






achchhi nazm hai vb sahab
Quote from: vb on July 21, 2011, 04:51:13 PM

Wo ik bholi si larki thi
Buhat maasoom si, jaisay koi chanda say utra ho
Magar andar say bikhraa ho
Najaanay ku tamanna thi usay baadal pay chalnay ki
Zamaanay bhar k har aansoo ko khushiyon main badalnay ki
Na banenay ki, sanwarnay ki
Magar khaahish usay kuchh thi
Parindon ka sa urnay ki
Na jaanay konsi duniya say is duniya main aai thi
Buhat hayraan si aankhen
Buhat baytaab sa chehra
Nigaahen chup, magar dil main samandar sa samaaya ho
Wohi zulfen, lagay jin say, koi baadal sa chhaya ho
Haseen aariz shafaq ki roshni sa rang deta thaa
Gulon ko maand karta thaa

Nahi! Aisa nahi logo
Nahi!
vb tu ik bay-kaar say mad-hoshe shaair thay
Usay maaloom tha vb ki duniya main andheray hain
Usay maaloom tha sub us k hain, jitnay saveray hain
So ye achha huva k apnay dil ko sun liya us ne
Kisi ko chun liya us ne.........
Jo us larki k kaabil thaa
Wo saagar thi, Wo saahil tha
Khayaalon main hamaaray yak-nafas wo timtimaati hay
Har ik pal yaad aati hay
Samandar main kahin jaisay koi moti chamakta hay
Hamesha dil main rehta hay.............





achchchi nazm hai VB.SAHAB Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2011, 12:28:27 PM »
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adil bechain jee!   thanx...
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