-----/// Wo laut aayenge /// ----- Hriday

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Ye maine apne kisi khaas dost ke liye likha hai. Wo bahut udaas hai aaj. Uske pati aaj kuch mahino ke liye videsh jaa rahe hain use akela chhod ke.. kaam ke silsile me... bas usi ko samjhaane ke liye kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine.... bahut mushkil hota hai is tarha akele din guzaarna par karen bhi to kya karen ... kaam chhod bhi nahi sakte...


ye kuch lamhe judaai ke intezaar me yunhi kat jaayenge,
wo subah bahut jald hogi jab tere mehboob laut aayenge,

rokne ki koshish na kar unhe tu aaj apne aansoo bahaake,
tere keemti aansoo beh jaane se bhi wo naa ruk paayenge,

jaanaa hai unhe pardes, baat bas kuch hi dino ki to hai,
jaise hi pooraa hoga unkaa kaam, wo waapas laut aayenge,

dard to unhe bhi hoga, bahut yaad aayegi tu unhe harpal,
par tere yaadon ke chalte wo apna kaam na chhod paayenge,

mahine din me aur din ghanto me badal jaayenge bahut jald,
dekhte hi dekhte tere mehboob teri baahon me laut aayenge,

ye kuch lamhe judaai ke intezaar me yunhi kat jaayenge,
wo subah bahut jald hogi jab tere mehboob laut aayenge...


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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2012, 03:39:13 PM »
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bahut avhhaa kaha hai aapne apne dost ke liye is par dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2012, 05:28:01 PM »
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bahut bahut khub hriday jii.......bahut  badhai ho is rachna ke liye........
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2012, 05:33:39 PM »
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Bahut khoob hriday jee
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hum to bas yahee kahenge
lautne ki duaa aapki kubool ho jaaye
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2012, 06:07:49 PM »
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bhtttttttttt dil ko chhuti poem hriday.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2012, 06:46:02 PM »
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Klaskar jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab kia kahne aapke.. Instantly poetry karna toH
koi aapse sikhe... Feelings ko observe kar aur un ahsaasoN
ko lafzoN meiN dhaalna woH bhi itni jaldi ... it's not
easy for any one... Usual Smile

Aapki is khoobsurat khoobi ko salaam janab... Usual Smile
Achchi kalaam hai humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2012, 07:04:20 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2012, 03:44:30 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2012, 10:37:38 AM »
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waah bhai-
dost ke dard ko apne alfaazon se bayan karna wakai kabile tareef hai

janaab kaise wo ehsaas jagate hain apne dil me jo apka nhi aapke dost ki hai

daad daad daad
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«Reply #9 on: June 19, 2012, 03:33:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji.... !!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on June 11, 2012, 03:39:13 PM
bahut avhhaa kaha hai aapne apne dost ke liye is par dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: June 19, 2012, 03:34:46 PM »
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nice 1 jee
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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2012, 07:11:14 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Soudagar ji.....!!!

Quote from: soudagar on June 11, 2012, 05:28:01 PM
bahut bahut khub hriday jii.......bahut  badhai ho is rachna ke liye........
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2012, 02:03:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mukesh ji....!!!

Quote from: mkv on June 11, 2012, 05:33:39 PM
Bahut khoob hriday jee
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ummeeeedon par duniyaa jeeti hai.......
har raat ke baad subaah aati hai.....
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«Reply #14 on: July 23, 2012, 02:02:39 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Kasak ji....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 11, 2012, 06:07:49 PM
bhtttttttttt dil ko chhuti poem hriday.....
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