-----// Wo meraa naa huwaa //----- Hriday

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jalaa   ke   sau  chiraag    dekh  liye
ab tak kam  andheraa   naa huwaa

raat   aisi    hui   zindagi   ki   mere
ab tak yahaan saweraa naa huwaa

jo panchhi  udd gaye  ghoslon  se
unkaa  fir  se  baseraa  naa huwaa

suraj   ki   kirne   padi  paani  mein
magar paani  sunehraa naa huwaa

chaahaa  jis   ko  khud  se badh ke
jaane kyun woh meraa naa huwaa

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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2013, 11:22:29 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2013, 11:33:52 AM »
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Kapil Jee!!!! Behad Umda Peshkash, Aap ke usual style se different hai but very beautiful!!!! Aaise hi nagme pesh karte rahiye. Pad kar bohat hi khushi hoti hai!!!

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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2013, 11:36:30 AM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2013, 11:43:15 AM »
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Just Awesome! Dil ko choo gayi. bahut bahut bahut jyaada khoobsurat kalaam hai. chalo mubarakbad aapke andaaz mein hi de deti hoon.


Raat ke andhere mein sawera nahi doondha karte
Dil dekar phir dil ka lutera nahi doondha karte
Charag kya roshni dega, humne dil jalakar dekh liya
Kisi ke toote hue dil mein basera nahi doondha karte
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2013, 01:38:55 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on February 17, 2013, 10:46:55 AM


jalaa   ke   sau  chiraag    dekh  liye
ab tak kam  andheraa   naa huwaa

raat   aisi    hui   zindagi   ki   mere
ab tak yahaan saweraa naa huwaa

jo panchhi  udd gaye  ghoslon  se
unkaa  fir  se  baseraa  naa huwaa

suraj   ki   kirne   padi  paani  mein
magar paani  sunehraa naa huwaa

chaahaa  jis   ko  khud  se badh ke
jaane kyun woh meraa naa huwaa

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Hriday Ji Aapka Yeh Andaaz Hatkar Tha..

Bahut bahut Khoooob..Gehre Jazbaat Par Dilli Daad..


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Quote from: aqsh on February 17, 2013, 11:43:15 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Just Awesome! Dil ko choo gayi. bahut bahut bahut jyaada khoobsurat kalaam hai. chalo mubarakbad aapke andaaz mein hi de deti hoon.


Raat ke andhere mein sawera nahi doondha karte
Dil dekar phir dil ka lutera nahi doondha karte
Charag kya roshni dega, humne dil jalakar dekh liya
Kisi ke toote hue dil mein basera nahi doondha karte


And Equally Goood Aqsh ji...Bahutttttttttttttttt Khooooob!!!

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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2013, 01:58:13 PM »
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Hrday sahab
bada hi khubsurat Ghazal numa peshkash hai aapki
hatkar hai aapke style se
iss khoob kalaam par bht bht saari daad daad
khus rahie

Aqsh ji aapka jawab is also lajawaab Usual Smile
aapko bhi khoob saari daad

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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2013, 02:01:45 PM »
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boht khub hridhay ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2013, 04:10:30 PM »
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Very nice Hradyaji.Well done.Bahut khub. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2013, 03:16:25 PM »
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thank u soooo much Rajan ji.....!!!

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