-----// Wo meraa naa huwaa //----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on February 17, 2013, 10:46:55 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 25, 2013, 11:49:07 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shireen ji.....!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on February 17, 2013, 11:33:52 AM
Kapil Jee!!!! Behad Umda Peshkash, Aap ke usual style se different hai but very beautiful!!!! Aaise hi nagme pesh karte rahiye. Pad kar bohat hi khushi hoti hai!!!

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«Reply #16 on: February 27, 2013, 11:57:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji.....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on February 17, 2013, 11:36:30 AM
waah waah waah
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«Reply #17 on: February 28, 2013, 12:15:26 AM »
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Wah wah wah bahur khoob
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«Reply #18 on: March 08, 2013, 05:20:42 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji hamaari is koshish ko pasand karne aur itnaa khoobsurat sa jawaab dene ke liye...!!! thank u soooo much.....!!!


hum to sambhalnaa hi bhool gaye ladkhadaane ke baad
tum hi tum yaad rahe humein, tumhaare jaane ke baad
kyaa baat karte ho tum apne dil ko jalaane ki yahaan
raakh ke dher ban gaye hum, tumse dil lagaane ke baad


Quote from: aqsh on February 17, 2013, 11:43:15 AM
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Just Awesome! Dil ko choo gayi. bahut bahut bahut jyaada khoobsurat kalaam hai. chalo mubarakbad aapke andaaz mein hi de deti hoon.


Raat ke andhere mein sawera nahi doondha karte
Dil dekar phir dil ka lutera nahi doondha karte
Charag kya roshni dega, humne dil jalakar dekh liya
Kisi ke toote hue dil mein basera nahi doondha karte
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«Reply #19 on: March 08, 2013, 12:45:50 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 08, 2013, 05:20:42 AM
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji hamaari is koshish ko pasand karne aur itnaa khoobsurat sa jawaab dene ke liye...!!! thank u soooo much.....!!!


hum to sambhalnaa hi bhool gaye ladkhadaane ke baad
tum hi tum yaad rahe humein, tumhaare jaane ke baad
kyaa baat karte ho tum apne dil ko jalaane ki yahaan
raakh ke dher ban gaye hum, tumse dil lagaane ke baad



Wooooooow! beautiful reply tha. one of ur best reply.

Dil ko lagaaya hai toh hame koi ilzaam na do
Raah e wafa mein toot jaaye aisa koi inaam na do
Bikhar kar phir samet paana mushkil hoga mera
Hai pyaar tumhe humse aise jhoote paigaam na do
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«Reply #20 on: March 09, 2013, 05:48:38 AM »
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Thank u sooo much Aqsh ji...aapne bhi zabardast jawaab likha hai....!!!

dil ki baaton ko zubaan tak laane ki zarurat kyaa hai
jo aankhon se bayaan ho bataane ki zarurat kyaa hai
pyaar thaa tumhe mujhse kabhi, aaj nahi hai, magar
duur jaane ke liye kisi bahaane ki zarurat kyaa hai
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«Reply #21 on: March 09, 2013, 05:50:03 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Vimmi ji.....!!!!

Quote from: vimmi singh on February 17, 2013, 01:21:03 PM
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«Reply #22 on: March 09, 2013, 01:49:36 PM »
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Thank u sooo much Aqsh ji...aapne bhi zabardast jawaab likha hai....!!!

dil ki baaton ko zubaan tak laane ki zarurat kyaa hai
jo aankhon se bayaan ho bataane ki zarurat kyaa hai
pyaar thaa tumhe mujhse kabhi, aaj nahi hai, magar
duur jaane ke liye kisi bahaane ki zarurat kyaa hai
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Muhabbat mein aankhen zubaan ka kaam karti hai
Ishq ke charche kar hame badnaam karti hai
Door tumne hi kar diya dil ko thod kar mere
Wafa meri aaj bhi dua tujhe subah shaam karti hai
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«Reply #23 on: March 09, 2013, 03:57:44 PM »
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shukriyaa Aqsh ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai.....!!!

yeh jhoot nahi hai ki hum tumhe aaj bhi yaad karte hain
sharaab mein doobo ke khud ko zindagi barbaad karte hain
dosh nahi dete tumhe ki tumne barbaad kiyaa hai humein
khush raho tum, hum rab se bas yahi fariyaad karte hain
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«Reply #24 on: March 09, 2013, 06:33:51 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on February 17, 2013, 10:46:55 AM


jalaa   ke   sau  chiraag    dekh  liye
ab tak kam  andheraa   naa huwaa
 ek aur chiraag jala ke dekh lo. main bhejti hoon zaroor kam hoga Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
raat   aisi    hui   zindagi   ki   mere
ab tak yahaan saweraa naa huwaa
antartica mein makaan le rakha hai kya Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
jo panchhi  udd gaye  ghoslon  se
unkaa  fir  se  baseraa  naa huwaa
kyon wahaan tum ne an qabza kar liya hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
suraj   ki   kirne   padi  paani  mein
magar paani  sunehraa naa huwaa
ye to ghazab ho gaya. per aise kyon hua icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
chaahaa  jis   ko  khud  se badh ke
jaane kyun woh meraa naa huwaa

acha hi hua khuda jo karta hai behter hi karta hai. tumhaara hota to baad mein bedaa ghaq ho jataa phir na ghazal likhte aur na nazm likhte icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

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charming..................!
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«Reply #25 on: March 09, 2013, 06:56:10 PM »
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Bahut umda lajawab.... Bt saddy saddy kyun ho aajkal kapil ji
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«Reply #26 on: March 09, 2013, 07:17:56 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee and Aqsh
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«Reply #27 on: March 10, 2013, 03:19:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Khwaish ji......!!!

Quote from: khwahish on February 17, 2013, 01:38:55 PM

Hriday Ji Aapka Yeh Andaaz Hatkar Tha..

Bahut bahut Khoooob..Gehre Jazbaat Par Dilli Daad..


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«Reply #28 on: March 11, 2013, 07:33:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Sf ji......!!!

Quote from: sarfira on February 17, 2013, 01:58:13 PM
Hrday sahab
bada hi khubsurat Ghazal numa peshkash hai aapki
hatkar hai aapke style se
iss khoob kalaam par bht bht saari daad daad
khus rahie

Aqsh ji aapka jawab is also lajawaab Usual Smile
aapko bhi khoob saari daad

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«Reply #29 on: March 13, 2013, 12:38:48 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saahill ji.....!!!

Quote from: saahill on February 17, 2013, 02:01:45 PM
boht khub hridhay ji
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