-----/// Wo mohabbat kare kaise /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on May 23, 2012, 04:21:07 PM
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aise deewaanepan ka ilaaz koi kare to kare kaise,
doob ke dard ke samundar me koi pyaar kare kaise,

jiske kismat me siwaaye ghum ke kuch bhi nahi hai,
tumhaare liye khushiyon ka mahal khadaa kare kaise,

rootha nahi hai, bas chhipaa hai tumhaari nazron se,
apni haalat ko dekhke sochta hai saamnaa kare kaise,

fark bahut hai haisiyat me tumhaare aur uske jaanlo,
zameen ka tukda hai chaand ki wo tamanna kare kaise,

chaahta hai tumhe wo sach me har ek cheez se badh ke,
tum hi kaho apni is mohabbat ka wo izhaar kare kaise...


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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2012, 08:13:44 PM »
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aap apne title, Umda shayar ko poori tarah justify karte hai
aapki poems se kabhi niraasha nahi hui...ekdam nirdosh!
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2012, 08:24:50 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Sps ji... main aapka dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne mere is koshish ko waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiyaa... !!! bahut bahut shukriyaaa.....!!!

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aap apne title, Umda shayar ko poori tarah justify karte hai
aapki poems se kabhi niraasha nahi hui...ekdam nirdosh!
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2012, 04:01:06 AM »
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bahut khoob Hriday ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2012, 09:24:11 AM »
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very nice Hriday ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2012, 06:37:27 AM »
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bahut khoooob....
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2012, 05:40:21 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

bahut khoob Hriday ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2012, 05:05:35 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa sarfira ji.....!!!

very nice Hriday ji

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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2012, 05:06:01 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Dolly ji....!!!

bahut khoooob....
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