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<>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

chup chap simti si, baithi thi main
khudme uljhi hui si.
ek hath aakar na jane
tham mujhe wo kahan le gaya.
man se udaakar le gaya wo
ghane kaale baadlon ko
suraj ki roshni me dekho na
mera chehra fir nikhar gaya

adhkhule baalon ki
uljhi si laton ko....
yunhi haule se bikhra k
mere udaas chehre par;
mere khushk aur berang
chehre ko wo;
ek nai anokhi dard ki
pehchaan de gaya.

aankhon me jo ghir aai thi
nami ashkon ki
unhe kyunkar wo
oas ki boond keh gaya
hatheli me saja li usne
wo askhon ki boondein
aur mujhe yaadon k
chamkile moti de gaya.

sukhe larajte hothon ki laali
mujhse.. meri hi, udhaar le gaya.
daalkar usme apni
shararti muskaan ka rang.
mere sukhe labon ko
apne labon se rang gaya.

kaamp raha tha jism
ek anjaane se dar se
use apni majboot baahon me
wo panaah de gaya
dekar jine ki ek nai roshni
mujhe har dar se aaj
wo mukt kar gaya...!!!!.


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Re: <>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2011, 12:51:14 PM »

hayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...........

ye hui na koi baat..........so sweet and so cute..........

kitne ehsaas bhar diye he is ek poetry me apne anamika ji.........

it is just wowwwwwwwww.......mindblowing ji........

ekdum dil me utar jane wali poetry he...........

wonderful and excellent creation


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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2011, 12:57:02 PM »

ab iss feel ko…
inn zazbato ko…
aise madhosh haqiqati khayalo ko…
kuch unsuljhe sawolo ko…
palkon ki nami par oos si paaras boondo ko…
kapkapate zism or larazte sukhe hotho ko…
uljhi adhkhule zulfon ki uljhati laton ko…
fir kisi majboot baahon ke aadhaar ko…
labo se labo ke milan ko…
hokar beqabu dil ki uss ghabrahat ko…
sanso me guum hote kisi ki sanso ko…

aisi madhoshi ko jisne alfaazon me piroya ho…
ye kb usko kitna bhi daad de…
wo kam hi rahega…
kamaal ka aur bht hi kamaal ka post…kass- akk ji.
sukriya


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Re: <>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2011, 01:11:31 PM »

Quote from: Matrix Guy on April 09, 2011, 12:51:14 PM

aapko pasand aai dil me utri feelings puri hui.......
FH KI FHH Aur FHK kahan hai..... Huh?


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Re: <>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2011, 01:13:36 PM »

Quote from: killbill on April 09, 2011, 12:57:02 PM

KB no words to say u thnx..its just wow.d way u replied to this post.......
bas yunhi aate raho khushiyan lutate raho.....khush raho..God bless u....


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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2011, 01:23:22 PM »

acha likha hai apne . Waise ap kalam pakad lo to kavita khud hi ban jati hai


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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2011, 01:25:19 PM »

hmm…
thanx…
nd god bless u too dear more than me nd nebdy else coz hame aage b aisi post chahiye…
iss post ko parhte hi jo feel hua bas wahi likha tha.…
aisi feelings uff shabdo me le kese aati ho!!!
hats off to u…
keep posting.


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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2011, 04:31:59 PM »

mere paas tou shabd hain nahi.....lijiye aap se udhaar lekar keh deta hu........Kasak-ji ye post aapki..massssssssssssssssssssssttttaaaaammmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmm mast hai ji.....

Bataa ay dost meri wo kaun massihaa aayaa thaa
Jo tujhe har dard aur har darr se mukt kara gayaa


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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2012, 12:34:21 PM »

shabd nahi hain Kasak ji aapki is rachna ke jawaab me likhne ke liye, itna khoobsurat hai ye ki kya bataaun... simply superb,.....!!!


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Re: <>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2012, 02:54:51 AM »

its really beautiful creation........

Clapping Smiley


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Re: <>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2012, 05:29:59 PM »

Quote from: saahill on April 09, 2011, 01:23:22 PM

acha likha hai apne . Waise ap kalam pakad lo to kavita khud hi ban jati hai

thnx saahil.... lekin ab to kalam pakde zaana ho gaya .. na ajne ab kavita kaise banegi


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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2012, 05:30:58 PM »

Quote from: killbill on April 09, 2011, 01:25:19 PM

thnx again KB......


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Re: <>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2012, 05:31:40 PM »

Quote from: ANAAM on April 09, 2011, 04:31:59 PM

mere paas tou shabd hain nahi.....lijiye aap se udhaar lekar keh deta hu........Kasak-ji ye post aapki..massssssssssssssssssssssttttaaaaammmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmm mast hai ji.....

Bataa ay dost meri wo kaun massihaa aayaa thaa
Jo tujhe har dard aur har darr se mukt kara gayaa

udhaar kab lauta rahe ho humnaam


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Re: <>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

«Reply #13 on: October 18, 2012, 05:32:13 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 10, 2012, 12:34:21 PM

shabd nahi hain Kasak ji aapki is rachna ke jawaab me likhne ke liye, itna khoobsurat hai ye ki kya bataaun... simply superb,.....!!!

shabd dhundho aur jawab do kp......


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Re: <>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

«Reply #14 on: October 18, 2012, 05:32:49 PM »

Quote from: soudagar on August 12, 2012, 02:54:51 AM

its really beautiful creation........

Clapping Smiley

thnx alot saudagar ji for clapping and liking my work


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