<>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>

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«Reply #15 on: October 18, 2012, 07:42:51 PM »
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tried... nahi huwaa.... sad5

shabd dhundho aur jawab do kp......
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«Reply #16 on: October 18, 2012, 08:00:47 PM »
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<>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<>


chup chap simti si, baithi thi main
khudme uljhi hui si.
ek hath aakar na jane
tham mujhe wo kahan le gaya.
man se udaakar le gaya wo
ghane kaale baadlon ko
suraj ki roshni me dekho na
mera chehra fir nikhar gaya

adhkhule baalon ki
uljhi si laton ko....
yunhi haule se bikhra k
mere udaas chehre par; 
mere khushk aur berang
chehre ko wo;
ek nai anokhi dard ki
pehchaan de gaya.

aankhon me jo ghir aai thi
nami ashkon ki
unhe kyunkar wo
oas ki boond keh gaya
hatheli me saja li usne
wo askhon ki boondein
aur mujhe yaadon k
chamkile moti de gaya.

sukhe larajte hothon ki laali
mujhse.. meri hi, udhaar le gaya.
daalkar usme apni
shararti muskaan ka rang.
mere sukhe labon ko
apne labon se rang gaya.

kaamp raha tha jism
ek anjaane se dar se
use apni majboot baahon me
wo panaah de gaya
dekar jine ki ek nai roshni
mujhe har dar se aaj
wo mukt kar gaya...!!!!.
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«Reply #17 on: October 19, 2012, 07:21:45 AM »
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sad5 kp
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«Reply #18 on: October 19, 2012, 07:22:13 AM »
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thnx manoj ji
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«Reply #19 on: December 30, 2012, 02:44:17 PM »
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thnx saahil.... lekin ab to kalam pakde zamana ho gaya .. na jane ab kavita kaise banegi
q bhai? kalam pakde zamaana q ho gya---kya aapki kalam ka weight kuch ek kilogram me ho gya kya!!!!!
chupchap kalam pkad ke kavita bnaie samjhi aap!!!
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