wo rahen salaamat........

by SURESH SANGWAN on December 29, 2010, 08:39:41 AM
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Dil ke taar ,ek baar,jud gaye jinse,
chahat ban kar meri, wo rahen salaamat.

Jo bhi karen wo sar aankhon par,milan ya judai,
Jindagi bhar saath nibhane ki hai apni aadat.
Chahat ban kar meri,wo rahen salaamat.

Koi khushi kare gar, unse khilafat,
Hum bhi kar denge uss khushi se adawat,
Khushiyan bankar meri wo rahen salaamat.

Dua hai tahe dil se apne khuda se,
Kuch na kuch karke tu koi siyasat
saath nahi door hi kahin wo rahen salaamat.

ye zindagi kya hai bagair unke ,
aise waise ,kaise bhi karke shararat
aa jao ek roj tum karne mohabbat.
dekho na khuda ki kaise karte hai khushamad.
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2010, 08:42:22 AM »
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bahut badhiya he suresh ji...

bahut achha likha hai apne..

i like the 2nd one

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2010, 08:45:55 AM »
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mast hai maza aa gaya ji
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woh rahe salamat warna
    aye khuda tujhse bhi hum kar denge bagawat
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thanx
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2010, 08:46:45 AM »
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bahut sara shukriya kubool kijiye abhiji.
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on December 29, 2010, 08:42:22 AM
bahut badhiya he suresh ji...

bahut achha likha hai apne..

i like the 2nd one

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2010, 08:47:55 AM »
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shukriya nirala ji aapne apne khayalat likhe.
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Quote from: nirala on December 29, 2010, 08:45:55 AM
mast hai maza aa gaya ji
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woh rahe salamat warna
    aye khuda tujhse bhi hum kar denge bagawat
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2010, 08:53:39 AM »
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thanks a lot kaashji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
aaj bahut dino baad fursat mili.
Quote from: @kaash on December 29, 2010, 08:49:07 AM
badhia likha hai Suresh ji,good shayri/poem
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2010, 11:36:05 AM »
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wah kya baat hai...

bahut bahut daad

khush rahen.. Sureshji
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2010, 12:39:13 PM »
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bahut sara shukriya manjum ji.
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Quote from: manjum on December 29, 2010, 11:36:05 AM
wah kya baat hai...

bahut bahut daad

khush rahen.. Sureshji
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2010, 01:27:52 PM »
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Good poem Sureshji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 29, 2010, 08:39:41 AM
Dil ke taar ,ek baar,jud gaye jinse,
chahat ban kar meri, wo rahen salaamat.

Jo bhi karen wo sar aankhon par,milan ya judai,
Jindagi bhar saath nibhane ki hai apni aadat.
Chahat ban kar meri,wo rahen salaamat.

Koi khushi kare gar, unse khilafat,
Hum bhi kar denge uss khushi se adawat,
Khushiyan bankar meri wo rahen salaamat.

Dua hai tahe dil se apne khuda se,
Kuch na kuch karke tu koi siyasat
saath nahi door hi kahin wo rahen salaamat.

ye zindagi kya hai bagair unke ,
aise waise ,kaise bhi karke shararat
aa jao ek roj tum karne mohabbat.
dekho na khuda ki kaise karte hai khushamad.
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2010, 04:17:34 PM »
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thaaaanx Koyalji.
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 29, 2010, 01:27:52 PM
Good poem Sureshji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2010, 04:36:34 PM »
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wah Sangwaan ji wah bahut khub..
aapko pahli baar padhne ka mauka mila.
behad khubsurat peshkash.
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dil ke taaro ke
haazaaron taraano se
    haseen baharon ke
    laakhon nazaaron se
yahi dua ab nikalti hai ke woh salamat rahen
mere saath rahe ya na rahe
jahan rahen salamat rahen
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2010, 04:42:26 PM »
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waah killbill ji aapne to continue karne mein kamaal kar diya ,marvellous lines. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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wah Sangwaan ji wah bahut khub..
aapko pahli baar padhne ka mauka mila.
behad khubsurat peshkash.
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dil ke taaro ke
haazaaron taraano se
    haseen baharon ke
    laakhon nazaaron se
yahi dua ab nikalti hai ke woh salamat rahen
mere saath rahe ya na rahe
jahan rahen salamat rahen
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«Reply #12 on: December 29, 2010, 04:44:30 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sureshji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2010, 05:15:39 AM »
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bahut sara shukriya khwaishji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
 aapko to kya hi mazaa aata hoga aise raddi ke kagaj pe likhne walon se.
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sureshji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 30, 2010, 05:15:39 AM
bahut sara shukriya khwaishji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
 aapko to kya hi mazaa aata hoga aise raddi ke kagaj pe likhne walon se.


Suresh Ji,Plz Aisa Mat Kahiye..har insaan Ke Apne-Apne Jazbaat Hai Aur usse Pesh karne Ka Apna Andaaz,Aap Jo likhte Ho Dil Se Likhte Ho Aur Dil Se Nikli Har cheez Khoobsurat Hoti hai,usse Lafzon mein naapa Yaa Tola Nahi jaata,Isliye Aaenda Plzzzz Aisa nahi Kahiyega.. icon_flower
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