wo sab likhna hai mujhe

by bekarar on July 14, 2008, 09:20:18 AM
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kisi shayar ka ye pyara sa kalam aap logon ki nazar hai..mujhe ye to nahi maaloom ki ye kisne likha hai.......fir bhi tahedil se wo jo koi bhi hai use mera salam..


mujhe jo kuch bhi likhna tha
abhi mai likh nahi paaya,

meri tahreer ki zad me,
abhi to kuch nahi aaya,

abhi wo dard likhna hai,
jo aansoo khoon ke laye,

abhi ruswai likhni hai,
jo tumhaara sung bhi laaye,

abhi wo neend likhni hai,
jo sooli par bhi na aaye,

abhi wo shaam likhni hai,
jise koi choora laaye,

abhi wo shokhi likhni hai,
jo gulaabi gaal kar jaaye,

abhi 2 pal bhi likhne hai,
jo tere sung the bitaaye

abhi wo log likhne hain,
jo mujhe kho ke pachtaaye,

abhi wo shakhs likhne hain,
jo mujhko khoj ke laaye,

mujhe wo sab bhi likhna hai,
jo tumse kah nahi paaye,

mujhe wo sab bhi likhna hai,
jo koi sah nahi paaye,

mujhe wo sab bhi likhana hai,
ke teri aankh bhar aaye,

bata kya kya likhen fir hum
jo tere man ko bha jaye,

chalo kuch bhi nahi likhte,
ke tera bharam rah jaaye

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«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2008, 09:22:57 AM »
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woww wonderful...nice sharing bhaiya.. bahot khoob...
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2008, 09:25:26 AM »
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Sanjeev bro

Nice sharing Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2008, 10:03:47 AM »
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thanks punam,,

shukriya raj bhai.....
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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2008, 11:04:08 AM »
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Bahut khoob... Applause

Sach mein bahut hi pyaara kalaam hai Sanjeev..
Isey hum sab ke beech laane ka bahut bahut shukriya...  notworthy

Kuch tuk-bandi kar rahi hoon.. Bhool Chook Maaf hai naa..  Usual Smile



    Mujhe bhi kuch likhna hai,
    Tamaam halat jo dil ki samjhaaye..

    Woh Kuch alfaaz bheege se,
    Jo Kagaz ke seene ko jala jaayein..

    Tarannum ki bhi shokhi ho,
    Ahsaason ki bhi jisme adaayein..

    Meri Naraazgi ko jata jaaye,
    Aur Muhabbat se bhi milwaayein..

    Bhaati nahin hai jinhe nazmein,
    Woh bhi jis nazm ko gungunaaye..

    Ab jab bharam bhi tera gaya,
    Chalo ise hi Jeene ki wajah bataayein..
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2008, 11:13:10 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on July 14, 2008, 11:04:08 AM
Bahut khoob... Applause

Sach mein bahut hi pyaara kalaam hai Sanjeev..
Isey hum sab ke beech laane ka bahut bahut shukriya...  notworthy

Kuch tuk-bandi kar rahi hoon.. Bhool Chook Maaf hai naa..  Usual Smile



    Mujhe bhi kuch likhna hai,
    Tamaam halat jo dil ki samjhaaye..

    Woh Kuch alfaaz bheege se,
    Jo Kagaz ke seene ko jala jaayein..

    Tarannum ki bhi shokhi ho,
    Ahsaason ki bhi jisme adaayein..

    Meri Naraazgi ko jata jaaye,
    Aur Muhabbat se bhi milwaayein..

    Bhaati nahin hai jinhe nazmein,
    Woh bhi jis nazm ko gungunaaye..

    Ab jab bharam bhi tera gaya,
    Chalo ise hi Jeene ki wajah bataayein..









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shukriya pasand karne ka.....aur is panne par apne alfazon ke moti bikher-kar is silsile ko aage badhane ka.....bahoot achcha likha hai aapne......mahiya..likhte rahiye....
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2008, 11:15:43 AM »
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Hausla afzaai ka bahut bahut Shukriya Sanjeev.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2008, 11:17:41 AM »
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NICE SHARING BEKARAR JI,
& NICE REPLY MAHIYA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL

EK CHOTTI SI KOSHISH MERI TARAF SE
KUCH GALAT LIKH DIYA HO TO MAAF KARNA


AABHI BAHUT KUCH LIKHNA BAKI HAI,
TERI HAR EK RUSWAI BAKI HAI

TERI DI WO HAR EK TANHAI BAKI HAI,
JO AKELE MAINE GUJARI RAATE UNKI
BAAT AABHI BAKI HAI,

KUCH WO TERI MEHARBANIYA BAKI HAI,
TERE LIYE DI JO KURBANIYA MAINE WO
BAKI HAI,

AABHI-AABHI TO TU KHAFA HOKE GAYA
AABHI TERE LOTNE KA KISSA BAKI HAI,

AABHI TO TERE MOHABBAT KI BAAT KI
HAI AABHI TO TERI DHOKHEBHAJI KI
KAHANI BAKI HAI,

AABHI-2 TO TUJHE BEWAFA LIKHA HAI
AABHI TERE SANG BITAYE KAI ANGINAT
PAL LIKHNE BAKI HAI....
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2008, 11:22:46 AM »
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Bahut khoob K.Shael.. Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 14, 2008, 11:26:24 AM »
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THANX MAHIYA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2008, 11:27:15 AM »
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bahut khoob sanjeev bhaiya aur very nice thought shally
really nice both of u

and mahiya ji
aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai.
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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2008, 11:28:54 AM »
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bahoot khoob sheel...... Applause

abhi wo raat likhni hai,
jo aankhon me kat jaaye,

abhi wo baat likhni hai,
jo hothon pe na aaye,

mujhe wo sab kuch likhna hai,
jo khwabon me tadpaaye,

kaho kaise likhen, jab haathon se,
kalam hi gir jaaye,
koi aansoo kahin chalke,
sab likhe ko dho jaaye,
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«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2008, 11:35:35 AM »
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THANX DIYA & BEKARAR JI,
NICE REPLY BEKARAR JI,
BY. K.SHAEL

AABHI WO AANKHO KE KHAWAB BAKI HAI,
AABHI WO DIL KE ZAZBAAT BAKI HAI,

AABHI TO LIKHNE WO AAYAM BAKI HAI,
LIKHNA AABHI TERA NAAM BAKI HAI,

WO KHUDA SE MANGI DUAYE BAKI HAI,
JO KI THI DUNIYA NE KHILAFAT USSKA
ZIKAR AABHI BAKI HAI,

TERI KADAR TERI FIKAR AABHI BAKI HAI,
JO MUJHSE HUI KHAFA TERI WO NAZAR BAKI HAI,

AABHI TO HAR DARD HAR SHIKWA BAKI HAI,
AABHI TO LIKHNA TERA NAAM KRISHNA BAKI HAI,
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«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2008, 11:38:02 AM »
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Waah.. Bahut khoob likha aapne.. Sanjeev.. aur Shally..


and Thanks a lot Diya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2008, 11:41:36 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on July 14, 2008, 11:38:02 AM
Waah.. Bahut khoob likha aapne.. Sanjeev.. aur Shally..


and Thanks a lot Diya.. Usual Smile

shukriya ji.....mahiya..


Quote from: diya786 on July 14, 2008, 11:27:15 AM
bahut khoob sanjeev bhaiya aur very nice thought shally
really nice both of u

and mahiya ji
aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai.

thanks diya......


Quote from: k.shael on July 14, 2008, 11:35:35 AM
THANX DIYA & BEKARAR JI,
NICE REPLY BEKARAR JI,
BY. K.SHAEL

AABHI WO AANKHO KE KHAWAB BAKI HAI,
AABHI WO DIL KE ZAZBAAT BAKI HAI,

AABHI TO LIKHNE WO AAYAM BAKI HAI,
LIKHNA AABHI TERA NAAM BAKI HAI,

WO KHUDA SE MANGI DUAYE BAKI HAI,
JO KI THI DUNIYA NE KHILAFAT USSKA
ZIKAR AABHI BAKI HAI,

TERI KADAR TERI FIKAR AABHI BAKI HAI,
JO MUJHSE HUI KHAFA TERI WO NAZAR BAKI HAI,

AABHI TO HAR DARD HAR SHIKWA BAKI HAI,
AABHI TO LIKHNA TERA NAAM KRISHNA BAKI HAI,




bahoot achche sheel.....bhawnaon ka saagar hai tumhaari kalam to...
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