wo sab likhna hai mujhe

by bekarar on July 14, 2008, 09:20:18 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 14, 2008, 11:48:53 AM »
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THANX MAHIYA JI,
THANX BEKARAR JI,
AAP BHI REPLY MEIN KUCH LIKHTE TO
AACHA LAGTA,
IN WAITING....
BY. K.SHAEL

JISKI WAJAH SE TUJHSE DOOR HUI WO WAJAH
AABHI BAKI HAI,
JO MOHABBAT ME HAME MILI WO KHOFNAK SAJA
AABHI BAKI HAI,

WO AANDHERI RAATO KI SUNI GALIYA AABHI
BAKI HAI,
WO BINA CHIRAAG KE JO JALTI RAHI MEHFILE
AABH BAKI HAI,

JO TERE SIWA KISI AUR KO NA NASEEB HUI
WO SHAMA AABHI BAKI HAI,
WO BARSAAT KI BOONDO ME JO DHALKI AANKHON
KI NAMI BAKI HAI,

TERE BAAD JO TOOT GAYE RISHTE UNKI KAMI KA
ZIKAR BAKI HAI,
MERE HAR GAMM ME CHUPI TERI HASSI AABHI BAKI
HAI,

JO TANHAIYO ANDHERO ME KHO GAYI KAHI WO EK
DIWAANI BAKI HAI
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«Reply #16 on: July 14, 2008, 11:53:02 AM »
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Mahiya, Shally, Sanjeev bro

Chaa gaye tusi te saare Applause Applause Applause

Sab ki dabbi hui feelings lafzon ke zariye bahar nikal rahi hain Thumbs UP

Keep going ! Too good all of you Applause
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«Reply #17 on: July 14, 2008, 12:04:45 PM »
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shukriya raj bhai..

likhne ko ab bhi kai kalam baaqi hain,
tere bina siskti kati har shaam baaqi hai,

likhe, phaad kai aise paigaam baaqi hai,
mujh-pe barsate tanz, chup chup ke mera rona
meri zalalat ke kai kisse tamaam baaqi hai,

jinpe saath hum chale the, wade kai kiye,
bichade hum par wo raste badnaam baaqi hai
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«Reply #18 on: July 14, 2008, 12:19:05 PM »
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THANX RAJBIR JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #19 on: July 14, 2008, 01:43:51 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah bahoot khoob Sanjeev, MAhiya and Shally!!
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«Reply #20 on: July 15, 2008, 05:52:50 AM »
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THANX POOJA DI,
AAP BHI KUCH LIKHTI TO
AACHA LAGTA,
& SHUKRIYA....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #21 on: July 16, 2008, 06:36:34 AM »
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jakhm har bhar gaya par tees ab bhi baaki hai
tu kar gaya zafa fir bhi mohobbat abhi baaki hai

meri aankhon mei jo rehte the kabhi khwaab bankar
unhi khwaabon ki duniyaa ki daastaan abhi baaki hai

likhne ko to bohut kuch ham har baar likhte hain
par teri mohobbat teri bewafaai teri judaai likhna baaki hai

bichad kar tu mujhse ab tak hai na mila
aa dekh fir bhi tere laut aana ka intzaar baaki hai

milte nahi hain shabd fir bhi likhti jaa rahi hoon
shayad mere tarano ko tujh tak pahunchana abhi baaki hai

tu khush rahe aabad rahe bhale dur rahe nigaahon se
de sake to aur de jaa gam k "bhawna" ka tut kar bikharna abhi baaki hai

bohut khoob bekarar ji and nice reply u all
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«Reply #22 on: July 16, 2008, 04:43:46 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 16, 2008, 06:36:34 AM
jakhm har bhar gaya par tees ab bhi baaki hai
tu kar gaya zafa fir bhi mohobbat abhi baaki hai

meri aankhon mei jo rehte the kabhi khwaab bankar
unhi khwaabon ki duniyaa ki daastaan abhi baaki hai

likhne ko to bohut kuch ham har baar likhte hain
par teri mohobbat teri bewafaai teri judaai likhna baaki hai

bichad kar tu mujhse ab tak hai na mila
aa dekh fir bhi tere laut aana ka intzaar baaki hai

milte nahi hain shabd fir bhi likhti jaa rahi hoon
shayad mere tarano ko tujh tak pahunchana abhi baaki hai

tu khush rahe aabad rahe bhale dur rahe nigaahon se
de sake to aur de jaa gam k "bhawna" ka tut kar bikharna abhi baaki hai

bohut khoob bekarar ji and nice reply u all





aapke shabdon ko taras raha tha ye thread.......bahoot achcha likha hai aapne...
likhte rahiye..........
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«Reply #23 on: July 16, 2008, 04:48:45 PM »
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bahoot khoob bhawna!!
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«Reply #24 on: July 17, 2008, 07:18:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause
NICE REPLY KAUSHIK JI,
BY. K.SHAEL

KALAM TO LIKHNA SHURU HI KIYA HAI AABHI
KAYI ALFAZ LIKHNE BAKI HAI,
HAR HASEEN-AUR TANHA RAAT ME SAATH DENE
WALE CHAND TAARE BAKI HAI....
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«Reply #25 on: July 17, 2008, 07:38:16 PM »
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Yahan sab ki post padhi..sab ne ek se badh ke ek likha hai.....Bohot khoob Sanjeev, Mahiya, K. Shael and Bhawna Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: July 18, 2008, 06:20:48 AM »
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THANX CELMIRA,
AAP BHI KUCH SAATH DETI TO
YE THREAD AUR AACHA HO JATA,
PLZZZZ
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #27 on: July 20, 2008, 06:59:06 AM »
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Iss Thread mein sab ne bahut khoob likha hai..
bahut khhobsurat thread hai bekararji..shukriya Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #28 on: July 20, 2008, 07:23:21 AM »
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bekarar ji,

bahut sundar rachna se awagat karaane ka shukriya.Aapne bhee khoob likha he aage.

Mahiya ji,k.sheelji,bhawna ji,

chal rahi tarz aur tarannum ka khoob saath nibhaaya he appne yahan. behtaraeen panne bun  gaye.

Prateek
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«Reply #29 on: July 20, 2008, 07:28:51 AM »
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shukriya prateek ji.....
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